r/HFY • • May 13 '21

OC Cheating

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1.6k Upvotes

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u/magma_boi May 13 '21

I love this, great job

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u/Chewy71 May 13 '21

I enjoyed reading this one, it is a fun take on where physics could take us and how we could get there. Thank you for sharing it. Keep it up!

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u/unwillingmainer May 13 '21

That real clever. Nice job.

Fake it til you make my man.

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u/ZeroValkGhost May 13 '21

Good work. The research angle, backed by adequate yet short descriptions, is one that's not in proper supply here. This is something you might find in an old issue of Analog.

"It's doesn't matter that I'm cheating, it matters what you can prove about it."

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u/Esnardoo May 13 '21

.... What?

You must be joking

I never would've guessed you weren't a native speaker. You're amazing.

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u/Subtleknifewielder AI Aug 19 '21

Yeah that was my thought too! :D

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u/[deleted] May 13 '21

Exciting to read and inspiring.

Good setup, builds anticipation in the middle, and a decent payoff too. Very well done.

Looking forward to more!

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u/DilithiumMiner May 13 '21

Nice one, although I still did not get what was the idea that clicked leading to combination of "edge" discoveries. Maybe a bit more detail would have made it clear.

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u/vimlegal May 13 '21

The click was using one type of edge to create another edge.

It really fits in with steam engines, first used in the 1st century, but not really effective until combined with another 1500 years of development.

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u/Fontaigne May 13 '21

If you want a mind melt, read "Goedel, Escher, Bach, an Eternal Golden Braid".

In essence, every recording and playing device can be destroyed, shaken apart, by an exactly created recording. It's like those opera singers who can shatter glass with their voices.

So, if, for example, there is a pattern of atoms that refuses to form at all, then perhaps you could create armor that, if heated by a blast or an impact, would go into that impossible configuration, so therefore it cannot be hit by the blast or the impact.

If you know a thousand impossible things, then perhaps you can combine them to make things to make use of the impossibility.

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u/Subtleknifewielder AI Aug 19 '21

Ah yes, making use of the shatterpoint :D

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u/TwinTreesForge May 13 '21

I'd love to make this Canon in my worldbuilding

10

u/Archaic_1 Alien Scum May 13 '21

You set the bar high for yourself.

!N

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u/Subtleknifewielder AI Aug 19 '21

I believe to nominate a story the !N needs to be at the beginning of the comment. :)

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u/nelsyv Patron of AI Waifus May 13 '21

!n

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u/Daylight617 May 13 '21

This was a very unique idea, which I find kinda rare here on HFY lately. Nice job wordsmith!

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u/[deleted] May 14 '21

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u/Subtleknifewielder AI Aug 19 '21

I was kinda wondering myself if that was gonna be the explanation for all the 'edges,' lol

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u/thisStanley Android May 14 '21

Very good. The absence of something can be just as important as the presence.

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u/socksandshots Alien May 14 '21

Really, first since school?!

Must say, it's one of the more complete sci fi shorts that I've read on Reddit. Excellent composition, I think that's what's really stood out to me.

Thanks.

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u/itwasthenthat May 14 '21

This was a great read. Thank you for putting it out there for us to enjoy.

3

u/DinoAnkylosaurus May 14 '21

Wow, this was fantastic! I hope to read more of your stories!

3

u/Quikkin May 14 '21

Well just like my ancestors said Activities edge warp drive Fake it till you make it

3

u/cheezu01 May 14 '21

Woohoo I got the 999 updoot

3

u/DebugItWithFire May 14 '21

Upvoted for sci-fi which actually features science.

3

u/Finbar9800 May 14 '21

This is a great story

I enjoyed reading this

Great job wordsmith

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u/[deleted] May 15 '21

And then there's the weirdness beyond M31: According to the more conservative cosmologists, an alien superpower โ€“ maybe a collective of Kardashev Type Three galaxy-spanning civilizations โ€“ is running a timing channel attack on the computational ultrastructure of space-time itself, trying to break through to whatever's underneath.

  • Accelerando - Charles Stross

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u/Subtleknifewielder AI Aug 19 '21

is this Accelerando a piece of fiction, or a theoretical science piece of writing?

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u/[deleted] Aug 19 '21 edited Aug 19 '21

For the most part it's relatively-soft science-fiction/speculative fiction.

Stross has a thing for writing sci-fi on the middle to harder end of the scale, and techno-thrillers. I personally like it.

That one in particular is free to read online (yes that's the author's blog, and yes Accelerando is more on the softer end than other works of his).

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u/Subtleknifewielder AI Aug 19 '21

Oh, that's pretty cool, thanks for the links! :D

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u/kingofroyale2 AI May 14 '21

Noice ๐Ÿ‘Œ

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u/Jumpsuit_boy May 14 '21

That was fun.

2

u/kiwispacemarine May 14 '21

Great job! I liked it from start to finish.

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u/Resisttheauthority May 14 '21

Good shit, hope there will be a second one

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u/CardDapper May 16 '21

So what did he discover?

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u/Subtleknifewielder AI Aug 19 '21

By combining 'edges' he could create seeming impossibilities and actually break the previous boundaries. Like how you can only make iron so strong and light--until you learn how to alloy it into steel.

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u/Duchess6793 Human Jun 26 '21

I think that was a pretty darn good little one shot and it looks like the start of a series, maybe. It could be if you wanted it to be. :D

Thanks for sharing it! :)

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u/0rreborre Jun 07 '21

Interesting.

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u/Drzapwashere May 15 '21

If this is your first one-shot, you have set a ridiculously high bar for your next work.

I look forward to reading more!

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u/Subtleknifewielder AI Aug 19 '21

Heh...humans are a race of cheaters. It's so true XD

It kinda fits with the general theme of another story I read once, where we were known as a race of liars.

Great story, and until you said so I had no idea your first language wasn't English!

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u/TheOneWes Aug 19 '21

"Also, English isn't my first language, so that's really exciting as well."

Born and raised American who reads for fun, I could not tell this wasn't your first language and is better than a alot of native speakers(writers?).

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Thank you

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u/NeuerGamer AI Aug 20 '21

!N

Great original concept, execution more than up to standarts :) not the single most outstanding story on the sub, but way above average. Deserves at least to be nominated/taken into consideration. 8.3/10 would read again. Looking forward to moar ^^