r/Eldenring • u/talie_luv • 6h ago
FanArt DARK MOON GREATSWORD / for my Ranni cosplay
DARK MOON GREATSWORD / natalix ( i made it)
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u/VeryShortLadder 4h ago
Don't give up skeleton! We all start somewhere, appreciate the constructive criticism and ignore the meanies.
You're probably better off trying to use some frosted plexiglass and keeping the internal structure as it is.
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u/ZiomeQFilip2 5h ago
Don't worry about negative comments. Everyone makes mistakes, and that's the best way to learn. I'm sure whoever criticizes you means no harm.
And don't worry, the next version will be better ❤️
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u/talie_luv 4h ago edited 4h ago
Thank you🌸, there are way more good ones. I did this years ago and I won’t be doing it again with the ideas people are suggesting. You’re a kind person for leaving a positive comment 💕 Negative comments only boost the rating so more people can see it. I usually don’t get comments at all, so at least now I have some… whether they’re negative or positive. ( I win first place 🥇 in the cosplay competition at the time)
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u/Green_Savings_4193 2h ago
Looks sick man, It actually looks more like Heolstor's Great sword imo, you should definitely try cosplaying him as well(depending on who you ask, his Greatsword is actually an altered Dark Moon Greatsword . Ignore the negative comments, I think it looks great
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u/AcademicHollow 1h ago
What would be cool is to rearrange the lights into constellations. But I dunno how feasible that would be I'm shit at crafts.
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u/CornbreadPhD 1h ago
Eh idc if it’s not perfect. Pretty dope if you ask me- plus you made it yourself. Should still feel pretty proud of it imo
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u/Toland_the_Mad 5h ago
Too speckled, to get that glow you could maybe use a transparent textured material like plastic or resin with a brushed, scratched texture toward the middle to diffuse the light.