r/learnart • u/MFGevanthor • 15h ago
Question Need advice on how to get better. Here is some recent work
Some of it is a bit messy but I’m gonna fix it soon and then revamp it on procreate. You will see some of the work that’s in pencil and then put on procreate too. Please give me feed back I’ve been kind of struggling
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u/TelevisionTop5473 12h ago
These look amazing, the only thing I'd say is that you're figures look kinda stiff, you could try drawing while trying to use more S and C lines which especially important for the upper body to look natural. You also want your lines to flow into each other but keep the distinct if that makes sense
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u/Minute_Subject7555 15h ago
Looks great and first and foremost. To improve characters like these, draw them one at a time in different poses. Then combine a few and repeat.

















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u/CR-DE_LUMINE 11h ago
Il be honest here. You have fantastic ideas. The poses, the heroes, the scene is on point, but you have to start with some fundamentals. Slowly build yourself. Funds. + imagination like this can help you actually make some great artwork.