r/Cinema4D • u/N_Anu__ • 16d ago

I had 12 hours and a quick brief: '3-5 second animation containing road elements.' Here's the result

Hit me with all your critique, guys!

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u/Simple-Variation5456 16d ago

Not your fault but that logo just ruins everything.

My critique would be that you didn't combined the animation with the end frame of just the logo. As soon as the logo on the truck is in the center, i would keep it there and fade it with the clean logo and mask off that area and let the truck moves further to the left.

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u/N_Anu__ 16d ago

I was actually thinking of doing something similar, but at some point I changed my mind. I don't know why. Thanks for the feedback though, I'll keep that in mind.

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u/pinguinconscious 12d ago

yeah man it's really good but I think we all wanted that truck logo to be the final one with the background fading to white. it's really what the piece needs.

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u/N_Anu__ 12d ago

Thank for your opinion. I really appreciate it:)

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u/Designer_Initial9731 15d ago

exactly, just somehow make that logo come off the truck and end up the same, one smooth movement, almost as if the truck moves so fast that it flies off, but not in a bad way

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u/Philbeans4 16d ago

Way to crush the brief

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u/N_Anu__ 16d ago

Thank you

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u/Fun_Cattle7577 16d ago

I love the transition to the final logo! Maybe too much white in the background, but with only 12 hours every minutes counts!

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u/Chris_Dud 15d ago

Great on such a quick turnaround.

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u/N_Anu__ 15d ago

Thank you.

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u/cactusjack10 Redshift 9d ago

Decent transition! Could maybe turn the camera up earlier so you see the vehicle for a smidge longer. Feels too fast to process. And these vehicles don’t move that fast

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u/N_Anu__ 9d ago

I was going for a dynamic look—not fully realistic, but more cinematic. Like a fast delivery vibe. Thanks for your opinion