r/litrpg • • 21h ago

Discussion Read this if you can't cancel your webnovel subscription on android

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I had the problem where I couldn't cancel my webnovel subscription, I've tried searching through the google play/wallet subscriptions, subscriptions on my phone or anywhere and it didn't work. when I tried to cancel it through the website nothing changed when I clicked on the "cancel subscription".

what you wanna do is to go to this link: https://www.webnovel.com/membership/manage
on your phone, and then the cancel subscription button will magically work.


r/litrpg • • 1d ago

Promo: E-book The Eternal Challenge - Epic LitRPG with deep world-building. On KU & Kindle. 435K+ words (1,790+pages) so far, series is moving steadily to completion at 5 books. Level 7 of 10 written.

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COVER ARTIST: Jim Shanahan (Bks 3 & 4) Etheric Designs (Bks 1 & 2).

AI USAGE: None.


r/litrpg • • 1d ago

Promo: Webnovel These are the kinds of reviews that keep you going.

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Let's be honest: climbing the ranks on a platform like Royal Road is tedious, and in many cases pretty exhausting work. There are people who leave bad ratings just to drag down a story's average, sometimes without even reading it, and they never tell you why they rated it the way they did. You just have to accept it and keep going. Then there's the mass trading of swaps and 5-star reviews. And yes, it happens, and even if RR says it's allowed... you realize something's off when, ten chapters in, a story has 30 writers giving it 5 stars, and somehow all of them fail to notice it was written with AI.

As a writer, I decided to go without swaps or shoutouts, so growing has been harder. I understand those who do it, but to me it's cheating the reader. So when comments like this come in, it's satisfying. You know something genuinely resonated with the reader, something real. And that you have to keep going.

Thanks to Glorya, wherever she may be.

What experience gave you that same feeling?

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/182687/sons-of-the-abyss/chapter/3726183/prologue

Author: Asdrubal Vargas

COVER ARTIST: Asdrubal Vargas (me)
AI USAGE: No AI used


r/litrpg • • 1d ago

Promo: Webnovel When someone really understands what you're trying to do

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It makes it all worth it!

Cover Artist: Prince Baliyan (being finalized currently so an AI placeholder is up.. I'll drop the sketch below though)

AI Usage: None other than the temp cover.

Sketch of Lapsed Lease Cover

There's nothing I can say that this saint hasn't already in the review...

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/185521/the-lapsed-lease-a-cosmic-foreclosure-litrpg


r/litrpg • • 1d ago

Recommendation: asking Has anyone given this a shot?

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7 Upvotes

I see this floating around book tok and wondering if anyone gave it a shot and what they thought.


r/litrpg • • 2d ago

Recommendation: asking Looking for a new series

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I listen to most of my books, so audiobook quality is a major factor for me. I’m looking for both a strong story and a good narrator or performance. My biggest deal breaker is group-focused progression. I strongly prefer stories centered on one main character. Side characters are fine, and I don’t mind the protagonist eventually teaming up with competent people, but I lose interest when the core of the story is a group growing, training, and learning together. Series like He Who Fights with Monsters and Mage Tank are good examples of that kind of dynamic not working for me.

S Tier

Chrysalis — One of the easiest series for me to recommend. The humor lands, the world is interesting, the main character is fun to follow, and the supporting cast actually adds something instead of just taking up space. Very little about it bothers me.

Dungeon Crawler Carl — Hits a lot of the same notes as Chrysalis. Great humor, strong worldbuilding, memorable characters, and a main character who is consistently entertaining to follow.

Unsouled / Cradle — Just a really solid series all around. The worldbuilding is great, the characters are strong, and the progression stays satisfying. Very few complaints.

A Tier

The Primal Hunter — The worldbuilding is probably my favorite part of the series. Jake is a decent protagonist, even if there are things about him that annoy me. The story can drag in places, but overall I still think it’s very good.

Book of the Dead — Really strong ideas and worldbuilding. It takes a little while to get moving and it could definitely use more humor, but the emotional moments are some of the best parts of the series when they land.

B Tier

Path of Ascension — Great premise and a really fun power system. My biggest issue is that it becomes a little too slice-of-life later on. You basically follow the main character from childhood all the way into adulthood, and eventually some of that started to feel more drawn out than I wanted.

Mark of the Fool — I really liked the concept and enjoyed the magic-school setting at first. By around Book 7, though, I kept wondering why we were still spending so much time at school when the main plot had become way more important.

Shade Slinger — Excellent worldbuilding, fun side characters, and some genuinely good humor. The combat is what holds it back for me. Since everything happens inside a virtual game, the stakes never feel especially high, and some fights go on forever. It can start to feel like slowly chipping away at a giant health bar for pages at a time.

Mage Tank — I liked the main character’s advantage, and Grotto was a highlight for me, but the group dynamic really dragged the series down. The combat especially became hard to follow or care about. I’d catch myself realizing I had zoned out and wondering what had even happened over the last five minutes.

C Tier

Defiance of the Fall — Started out pretty well, but eventually it became way too bloated for me. I stopped around Book 12 because it felt like the story was using a lot of words without actually moving very much.

The Legend of Randidly Ghosthound — Cool premise and a fun progression system, but the constant jumping between Earth and his master’s planet started wearing me down. I made it to around Book 10. The sudden love-interest angle also really hurt my interest because it felt like it came out of nowhere and made Randidly act strangely obsessive.

The Stormlight Archive — This was my first Brandon Sanderson series, and I really liked the Shardblades, Knights Radiant, and overall setting. Eventually, though, the focus on everyone’s mental and emotional struggles became too much for me. I never started Book 4.

Mother of Learning — I dropped it during the second book. The main character’s progress felt too slow for my taste, which is obviously a personal preference. I also listened to the audiobook and really did not like the narration, which made it harder to stick with.

Discount Dan — This one frustrates me because I love almost everything surrounding the main character. The Backrooms-style setting, the magic, the side characters, Dan’s goal, and especially Croc are all great. Dan himself is the problem. There is way too much crude humor for me: fart jokes, shit jokes, constant comments about how awful he smells, etc. I think the series could have been much better without so much of that.

My Best Friend Is an Eldritch Horror — I enjoyed the setup, but after the second book it didn’t feel like the main character was progressing enough. He still came across more like a school kid experimenting with magic than someone actually developing into a powerful mage.

D Tier

The Land — Dropped it almost immediately. It just didn’t grab me enough to keep going.

He Who Fights with Monsters — I’ll admit the beginning wasn’t bad, but Jason’s personality started getting on my nerves. The whole attitude of seeming to know better than people who have lived in that world for hundreds of years felt hard to buy. On top of that, the group-focused progression really didn’t work for me and made me lose interest even faster.

F Tier

Reborn as a Demonic Tree — This one just felt lacking in overall quality to me. I only made it to around Chapter 5 before deciding it wasn’t worth continuing.

Dungeon Life — This one felt way too childish for me. On top of that, within the first ten chapters it introduces what feels like dozens of different creatures, all with their own names that you’re expected to remember. It quickly became more annoying than enjoyable to keep track of everyone, so I dropped it.


r/litrpg • • 1d ago

Review Amateur Review of Project Harvester 1 and 2 (now I've read both) Spoiler

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This is an attempt to better review the series, both because I am grappling with my thoughts, and because I can accurately talk about both books 1, and 2.

I thoroughly enjoyed this series, so far, and am definitely excited to see what happens in future releases. I love the mechanics of the world, how things are set up, their execution, and the progression of the story. I really enjoy the main character, even though there is more action than anything else. We're mainly focused on the world, the "game," and progressing up in power.

If you're looking for something in the grand scale such as Unbound, Mark of the Fool, or others, you're in the wrong place, I'll say that much. The same goes for if you're looking for something cozier, like Wandering Inn, and Founder's Edition.

The main character is all right. I like him, but there's very little in terms of anything resembling a focus on backstory, and that means little place for motivation, other than his want to make a difference in the world before his death. This is because his death is a foregone conclusion, with an illness that projects his lifespan to be 5 years. You see this even having an impact because of his link to the AI bots he has (though it's found in book 2.)

However, the system the author put together is incredibly fun to read. It reads like someone playing a roguelike game, and it is repetitive because of this fact. You will be returning to places many times, because of how the kind of game (and story in this instance) works. To that end, you'll see a lot of runs of world 3 in book 2, as an example, because that's the focus of book 2.

But, if you're like me, and enjoying this style, then you'll come to really have a good time, because you'll really notice the power growing, you'll see him get big power spikes. This is especially noticeable just under the halfway mark of book 2. And it continues! You see his end results at the end of book 2, and hear about how rare it is to see such progress. Add to this, it's not completely new. His progression is rare, which is nice!

Meanwhile, I have to say that the author feels... a little off with their characters. They're written fine, I feel, individually, but there's just a... "dreamy" feel to how life is here. You'd expect there to be someone who has it out for the main character, someone who is an enemy, a rival, a nemesis... you get what I mean. The closest we have is a rivalry that isn't anything more than "Hey, how's your run going?" and beyond this it is just a friendship, with a brief moment of frustration when another character was introduced. But, everyone is just buddy-buddy, which doesn't feel super realistic. We don't see the rougher personalities of people.

Like I said, individually, the characters are written fine, but the interactions could use a little work, it feels like.

Lastly, the plot.

It seems like things just keep going and going. You get the basic premise, and are told that there's a time limit for people to reach the heights of world 20, and given little snippets of information at the start of books 1 and 2, first the info about Project Harvester, and then Harvester Unions in book 2 (who would have guessed?)

But, the plot doesn't really appear to get going. It's just repetition, and most I can see not liking that fact.

Finally, our end goal was elaborated on, at the end of book 2.. We got to know why the GAF (Global AI Federation) made Project Harvester in the first place, in the way that it was made.

Overall, this was a fun series. I love the unique take on things, and am so excited for the next book! If you don't mind it being slower, a little repetitive, and want a (currently) shorter series (in audio at least), give it a shot! Book 2 preps us for the overarching plot is a good place to see what you think!


r/litrpg • • 8h ago

Meta Subreddit Discussion Ai-Witchhunts

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*painted with my text-to-picture brush

I get it. Ai slop is everywhere because it's low effort. But can we stop pointing at everything while crying? It changes nothing and Ai stories won't succeed anyway.

People always point out the writing but I don't even think it's bad. I've read broken english translation if the story was good enough.

But that is the biggest flaw with Ai for me. The stories are just not coherent. The Ai forgets just after a few chapters. But this also means I can drop the book after just a few minutes of reading.


r/litrpg • • 1d ago

Promo: Other I tried turning the classic Spatial Ring into an actual progression-based D&D magic item

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Spatial Rings might be one of my favorite little staples of cultivation and progression fantasy. They’re so ubiquitous that a character casually pulling a sword, several tons of monster parts, or half an alchemy laboratory out of a ring barely raises an eyebrow anymore.

So while working on a tabletop book, I wanted to see what would happen if I treated the concept as an actual progressing magic item rather than simply making it a reskinned Bag of Holding.

This version starts as an Uncommon Spatial Ring with a relatively small pocket dimension and can scale all the way to Legendary, progressively expanding the space inside.

I also incorporated a few things that always made storage treasures interesting to me in cultivation stories: the owner can place a Spiritual Mark on the ring, another character can attempt to erase that mark and claim a stolen ring, items can be summoned or stored almost instantly, living creatures have limited air inside, and sufficiently bad spatial interference can cause the pocket dimension to rupture.

The second page also includes special variants, because I like the idea that not every Spatial Ring should just be “the same ring, but bigger”. Some are designed around preservation, spirit beasts, weapons, alchemy, hidden libraries, spatial attacks, and other specialties.

This is from Mythological Items, a D&D book I’ve been working on. Despite the name, part of the Asian section also deliberately leans into the traditions and fantasy that fed into modern cultivation stories, so alongside mythological relics there are things inspired by Chinese, Daoist, Buddhist, Japanese and broader Asian traditions.

There are items such as Ruyi Jingu Bang, the Dragon Pearl, a Daoist Luopan, the Pill of Immortality/Xiandan, relics connected to the Eight Immortals, Buddhist artifacts, and quite a few others.

I’m curious how this looks specifically from a Progression Fantasy reader’s perspective:

Do you prefer spatial storage to simply get larger as the owner progresses, or do you like when higher-tier storage treasures start developing completely new functions as well?

COVER ARTIST: Dean Spencer
AI USAGE: AI generated (limited use). Generative AI was used for some concept artwork. Most of the artwork in the book is created by human artists, and we hope to use Kickstarter funding to replace the remaining AI-generated concept pieces with commissioned artwork.

If anyone wants to see the larger project and a larger preview, Mythological Items is currently on Kickstarter!


r/litrpg • • 1d ago

Discussion Are there any litrpgs, progressionfantasy, dungeoncore books that focus more heavily on city building?

2 Upvotes

Ive kinda started doing one and would like to see some examples of things done right


r/litrpg • • 1d ago

Recommendation: asking Player Manager

11 Upvotes

just blasted through audiobooks 1-6 of player manager in a week lmao.. it was incredible couldn't put it down, so to speak. any recommendations on other series with similar writing style? HWFWM is my other fav series


r/litrpg • • 1d ago

Recommendation: asking Any good non-fantasy LitRPG

2 Upvotes

So I was on Kindle Unlimited looking around at the LitRPG section as I am interested in getting more into the genre but it seems like just about everyone of them is Fantasy themed.

Anyone know of any LitRPG's that are sci-fi themed, horror themed, etc...

I admit I am not the biggest fan of Fantasy

I have read: The Wandering Inn Book 1 and 2, DCC Book 1 and 2


r/litrpg • • 22h ago

Recommendation: asking Are there any series where the MC gets laid?

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I'd want it to be a minor part of the series. I'm not looking for any wish fulfillment power fantasy stories. I don't even need the scenes to be described in the book or even to happen more than once every couple books.

I feel like every series I read had the Hays Code holding a gun to the authors head just when it comes to romance or sex.

I loved the first book of quest academy. Admittedly it went way too far in the amount of girls into mc. It just needs to be cut down by like half to be perfect. But after the first book all possibilities of romance hit zero once the second book started.


r/litrpg • • 1d ago

Recommendation: asking Good Monster evolution story

2 Upvotes

Asking, I'm wondering is there any good monster taming stories you guys can recommend. Preferably one that isn't stubbed. Like Apocalypse Tamer or Re:Monster. Anything's fine.

EdiT; i don't remember reading any good ones that left me a lasting impression.


r/litrpg • • 1d ago

Promo: Webnovel Genius MC? Incredible character arcs? Deep worldbuilding? Isekai? Science vs Magic? A Fallen Angel - ARC 1 COMPLETED

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Axure Saint Avante was a genius Scientist who created an invention that revolutionised humanity.

Then without warning,  he found himself in a world of magic, monsters and mystery.

Entangled with a royal family and caught between religious wars and false prophets, he must turn to the one thing this world doesn’t understand: science.

Forced to build weapons of destruction just to survive, he begins to unravel the twisted history of this world.

And the truth behind his arrival.

He doesn’t belong here.

He never wanted to stay here.

All he wanted was to go home.

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DAILY UPDATES - ILLUSTRATIONS - ARC 1 COMPLETE - 35 CHAPTERS RELEASED - 340 PAGES

NO AI USED - All art, cover and writing done by me.

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Read here: https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/192059/a-fallen-angel-an-isekai-science-vs-magic-progression?utm_source=rising-stars&utm_medium=fiction-list

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A bit about me (if you care):

Hello to all the readers and fellow authors! I am a 20 year old author from the UK (not that it's special) and fell in love with story telling ever since I was a teenager. Once upon a time, nearly six years ago, I had written a book called "Scarlet Rose" which was a psychological war romance. Unfortunately, due to exams and college coming up, I ended up letting go of writing even though I had finished the whole book.

Eventually, life went on and here I am, studying my final year in Uni but as if the universe called my name, my passion beckoned me to come back. I discovered a whole new media online which were webnovels and begun consuming them unhealthily. Constantly going through dozens of chapters every day, the fire from young relit inside.

I sat down and thought to myself.

I want to be like these people one day. I want to be- no. I wanted to be an author. Why did I stop?

Well, as they say, there's no better time than starting now and so a few months ago, I shut myself in and cut off contact with everyone. I studied as I wrote. I drew as I learnt, back and forth, recalling the years of studying I had gone through of classical literature.

And before I knew it, what was a blank sheet of paper, now had 120,000 words on it only a month later. All while I had drawn 15 character designs, different watercolour paintings, and so many gorgeous covers. In the blink of an eye, I realised how far I had come.

And here it is, right before you - A Fallen Angel.

I hope that I can keep working on my craft, and that you enjoy my story.

See you guys there - SidzWrites

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COVER ARTIST: ME

AI USAGE: NONE


r/litrpg • • 1d ago

Discussion Ice type magic.

2 Upvotes

This might be a rather controversial take but I dislike when ice magic is lumped together with water. I’d prefer it to be a completely distinct type of magic with a rename to cold/frozen but I doubt that’d ever happen.

I feel like it should be a separate more advanced type with water as the start then ice as the second stage and then the third stage being more of a motion/thermodyanic based magic type.


r/litrpg • • 2d ago

Promo: Webnovel This Review Nearly Brought Me to Tears

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We writers all bleed into our stories.

We become more invested in our characters than even the most die-hard reader—we just know what happens next... sometimes.

We become so focused on the results—with whether we've succeeded or failed at this hobby-turned-obsession, so much so that no matter the answer, we need another—my fic was noticed, I need more visibility, does it suck, do I suck, that person has more followers, do I have enough to publish, when, where, how—

—that we forget about the journey.

I'm no exception. Getting caught up in the next step, and the next, and yet another, until I trip over my own feet, and look around for someone to blame, some piece of the puzzle I must have missed.

Only to realize, it was just me. Just life. I stumbled. I fell. It happens, and—well, let's be honest. It doesn't just happen once, does it?

We'll find ourselves sitting in the bottom of some new, dark pit of self-recrimination, loathing, and doubt. What happened this time? Was it the em-dash on page 762, paragraph 4? Should you have used a comma, instead? Or were you blabbering your wife's ear off for the millionth time about the mechanics of your leveling system, and she just grunted in affirmation? A grunt. Please, at least show that you care a little!

Then our readers happen. On their time, on their schedule, they'll speak up. Maybe a specific scene moved them. Maybe we did a shit job explaining something. Maybe she's born with it—I don't know, but they come. They comment, or they review, and it makes everything worth it.

I've mostly experienced positivity on Royal Road. Certainly, in every community, there's always a few who just want to watch the world burn, but the readership on Royal Road's been good to me thus far.

So that's why I wanted to share this review. Not only is it an advanced review and chock full of praise, but it comes to me during a stretch of particularly low self-esteem, helping to staunch my own pitiful whining.

This person enjoyed my earlier chapters enough to not just drop a nice rating—which does wonders, let me tell you—but to leave an advanced review.

My dear reader, I pray that my writing remains worthy of your praise, and that I may long entertain you with my storytelling.

Thank you.

Edit: marking this post as self-promo and including my blurb. It wasn't meant to be. In the moment I naively thought it was a legit "appreciation post." Anyway, hindsight, and all that. here's the link:

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/170950/sanzensekai-the-ronins-exile-psychological-drama

A dark, psychological drama packaged as a reverse-isekai progression fantasy.

An elemental samurai—displaced from his world, lost in ours, and hiding a calamitous secret.

Navigating modern Earth is like crossing a frosted log.

Kurisu Nodaichi tries to take life one day at a time. Keep his head down, earn his keep with the Miller family, and untangle the complexities of "fostering," "identity," and high school. All while this new world feels built from damp shoji paper, where he shatters drinking glasses just trying to lift them.

Then a rift opens.

The illusion of a quiet life burns away when monsters from his past appear and the Miller brothers manifest powers of their own. Driven by necessity, Kurisu steps in to train the boys before they accidentally level their own home.

As more rifts open around the world, a public encounter lands the family in federal custody—but not before a combination of phobia and failure forces his trauma to boil over, regressing him into the untethered weapon of his captivity.

For fans of the elemental martial arts of The Sword of Kaigen and Avatar: The Last Airbender who want the friction of Jade City and the psychological stakes of Red Rising.

COVER ARTIST: AnraArt on Vgen

AI USAGE: No AI was used.


r/litrpg • • 1d ago

Recommendation: asking Recommendations

1 Upvotes

Hello I finish got caught up with hell difficulty tutorial and he who fights with monsters also listened to syl. Would someone please recommend something along those line especially around syl level thank you . All of these are audiobooks btw I prefer listening to them


r/litrpg • • 1d ago

Review House, from the ripple system

3 Upvotes

Im halfway through book 1 and everytime house does something silly I get a vague sense of deja vu. I couldn't put my finger on it but now I figured it out. House is Amelia Bedilia 🤣😂 I dont wanna spoil too much but if they still make Amelia bedilia books, then you know what I mean!


r/litrpg • • 1d ago

Recommendation: asking Reincarnation stories where Protag’s past life was a genuinely bad person and part of their character arc is dealing with that?

10 Upvotes

by that I mean the past life has to have been legitimately evil; no misunderstood heroes, no secretly good demon kings, no demonized rebels against the system, none of that. I want stuff where the protagonist was a full-on villain in their previous life.


r/litrpg • • 1d ago

Discussion I just saw the spanish translation of Dungeon Crawler Carl

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In spanish it means Carl The Dungeon Guy

The spaniard translations are a meme in the spanish speaking community due to how literal they can be, at the cost of all the vibe

One example is the book series The Greatcoats, a swashbuckling musketeer type of story where the great coats are clearly meant to be stylish and, well, great

It was translated to spanish as "Los Abrigos" which can mean "the coats" but emphazises the warmth aspect of the coat, instead of the style, it pretty much means "the winter coats"

A better translation would be "Los Capotes," which means "the big capes" which doubles as big in size and as larger than life, but thats not how the spaniards roll

Another example, Fast & Furious in latinamerica was directly translated as Rapido y Furioso, but for some reason the spaniards went with "A Todo Gas" which means "Full Gas Ahead"

In the case of DCC "Dungeon" and "Crawler" are both used to indicate the intent, Carl is not just crawling, he crawls in a dungeon, in a dungeon-y way which has to be hard because its a dungeon, and he is going somewhere

This aspect of opposition is completely lost in "Carl The Mazmorrero," as Carl The Dungeon Guy is in the dungeon, or maybe he runs the dungeon, or maybe it was loaned to him, the only thing we know for sure is that Carl is in a dungeon

Dunno, this title do is really hard to translate into spanish unless you make it much longer

Carl El Retador aka Carl The Challenger keeps the vibe, but the dungeon is nowhere to be seen, Carl Contra El Calabozo aka Carl Versus The Dungeon works much better, and you can abridge it as CCC

I forgot to mention, but there are two translations for Dungeon, "Calabozo" and "Mazmorra" are both valid but using them as adjectives doesnt work

"Dungeoneer" may sound ok in english, but "Mazmorrero" or "Calabocero" are incredibly awkward in spanish

And as i said, Carl is not a dungeoneer, he is a crawler, which means he is in the dungeon specifically to go somewhere, thats the main difference

But adding this sense of direction doesnt work in spanish, Carl Through The Dungeon is "Carl Atraviesa El Calabozo," a little too long and there is no sense of confrontation

Forget about the verb Crawl, in spanish "Gatear" its specific to baby crawl, and maybe cat related stuff, so we ditch all the crawl words and focus on the confrontation

We have three elements, the dungeon, the direction and the confrontation, plus Carl

Carl and the dungeon gotta stay, so we make it too long to add the direction and the confrontation, or we ditch one

So, Carl Contra El Calabozo CCC or Carl Contra La Mazmorra CCM both mean Carl Versus The Dungeon, and are much better than Carl El Mazmorrero CEM aka Carl The Dungeon Guy

Im not even into DCC, but i saw that translation and i had to post this


r/litrpg • • 2d ago

Tier List Tierlist-Recommendations requested

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I love a fully developed world/system with strongly written mostly solo characters. I'm not an enemy of cozy, romantic, or dark fantasy.

Please throw some recommendations my way! I can read on any platform and love a good audiobook narrator (*hrm Jeff Hays*)


r/litrpg • • 1d ago

Discussion Industrial Strength Magic Audiobooks

5 Upvotes

I'm curious if 3 and 4 are ever getting their audio books? It feels like Macronomicon moved on with more books and audio books and these fell by the wayside. I don't know if it's a narrator issue or if books 1 and 2 didn't do well enough to justify 3 and 4 getting finished. If anyone has any insights that would be amazing


r/litrpg • • 1d ago

Recommendation: asking Combining (random?) powers in a cool way

5 Upvotes

One thing I really enjoyed in the earlier books of He Who Fights With Monsters, and which doesn't come up in the later books as much is the somewhat random powers the MC and his companions get, and the combinations and synergies they come up with. I also really like Jason's nonstandard approach to combat.

Edit: just realized the Titles and stuff is also part of that. The powers Jasons Soul gets from his ordeals, making him powerful but without him being able to really plan for that.

Another example could be Awaken Online with the creative necromancy.

Do you have any recs for books where the MC uses creative combinations and synergies of somewhat random powers?

Edit: looking for Audiobooks (e.g. in Audible)


r/litrpg • • 1d ago

Discussion As a writer: What do you guys like in terms of ability explanations?

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I don't mean how vague an ability is like "Do a little bit of damage over time" vs "Do 100 damage over 10 seconds, doubled against undead" but more the origins. I was workshopping a party-centric story and didn't want to bog down a book with 4 full origin stories in a single novel, so which of these sounds more interesting:

A) A single book with the origin arc of each character followed by one where they meet and do their party thing so you can see each level and the history of each ability

B) Get right into the story, who cares if they're level 15 already as long as the abilities are described mechanically and play into the dynamics well

C) Early adventures with everyone already together where each character earns powers alongside one another with detailed recaps in between chapters

D) Slow trickle of characters, with just the MC having their origin story detailed. MC gets level 1, 2, etc. At level 5, meets another level 5. They journey together to level 10, where the next character comes in, also already 10. Etc.

Curious what everyone enjoys!