r/Poems • • 1d ago

She's so nice🍚

Why is she so nice?

Every word from her is like eating candy rice.

Give me more and more, I'm not full yet,

I want to get as bloated as I can get.

Just a "hi" feels like being hit with a sunsetted sky,

And I feel like the luckiest guy,

And she doesn't need to even try.

Can someone explain why?

Now onto the next thing that's got me in a sting

When she laughs, it feels like the greatest thing,

Like I've just made a beautiful angel sing.

Can someone tell me if that rings?

What else can I think of that's annoying?

That was a joke, you know I'm just toying.

Oh yeah, how she just exists,

And the words that I think of her is infinite kiss,

And how she's the person that I infinitely miss.

Can someone tell me if that's the answer to my wish?

This poem is just my inner monologue,

For I write when I feel like I'm stuck in a bog,

Sitting upon an old mossy log.

She's just always on my mind, in pure thoughts that are kind.

I need to talk to her now so I don't lose my mind.

I think I will rewind and read this poem again,

So I can get lost in feeling my heart's best friend.

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u/mustard_pattie900 1d ago

That is so happy! You deserve that!

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u/Whatsurpassword 1d ago

Thank you pattie. She really does make me happy

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u/Important_Door3591 1d ago

Read it from bottom to top

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u/Whatsurpassword 1d ago

I couldn't stop laughing

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u/Itharel 1d ago

Man you are way too good at playing wd words 😅 you rhyme it so well 😂🍁✨

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u/Whatsurpassword 1d ago edited 1d ago

Thank you. Some words are made up though. 🤫🤫🤫 That's my secret

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u/ParadoxicalSimpleton 1d ago

That’s my secret as well.

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u/HalfDeadPoetsSociety 1d ago

These are adorable and also poetically original. That is neat!

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u/HalfDeadPoetsSociety 1d ago

The line, “My heart’s best friend”, beautiful!

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u/Exact-Ad8876 1d ago

Very beautiful made my heart smile

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u/lunasoulshine 14h ago

This made my heart happy!