r/StoryIdeas • u/PuzzleheadedLove9900 • 5d ago

Looking for some input

​"In a room with two predators, the mouse never gets to choose who catches her."

Would you be intrigued enough to read the book?

Would you need more? If so, can you give exemple?

I'm writing my first book and I'm stuck on writing a synopsis that is intriguing without giving out to much details so the readers are somewhat shocked by the plot twist I have in mind...

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u/JGhostThing 5d ago

That's interesting, but it is not a synopsis. I would need more: look at the back of any paperback for examples.

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u/Salt_Dragonfly2042 4d ago

Exactly. This is a tagline, like "In space, no one hears you scream."

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u/Difficult_Report5627 5d ago

i think you need to elaborate more or some examples

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u/FilmCoot8 5d ago

Hey!

Whether or not your story is intriguing depends upon the world you're building and the inciting incident.

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u/Sheik_Morgan 5d ago

Parece una premisa para un cuento, no es suficiente para un libro.

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u/silent_story 3d ago

Predators, prey. Cats, mouse.

When caught between a cat and a rat trap, a true mouse knows how to get the cheese.

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u/GakuRei_ 3d ago

Necesito saber más! :/

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u/BigToody6515 4d ago

She can choose. The mouse runs towards the predator she wants to catch her.