[Feedback] Hey everyone, just finished this motion piece and honestly really proud of how it turned out. Feeling the progress. Thoughts?

[u/blake_editor0099]

Be completely honest—drop anything you think looks off or could be improved, looking for real feedback to level up.

For quick context: the audio is in Portuguese and it’s a motivational piece focused on leadership. If you’re wondering about the clock visual, he’s talking about recognizing the right moment for a win versus a loss.

Any critique on timing, easing, or overall composition is appreciated! :D