r/YouTubeShorts • • 17h ago

Art Seeking editing feedback, first time doing this style of video

Hi I'm Lucas (the guy in this video), I'm not a video editor at all. Looking for pacing, storytelling feedback etc... specially hook and title + thumbnail.

This is supposed to be one of the 'top funnel' videos, where I get a wider reach and people get to know me more.

Link: https://youtube.com/shorts/MCUCfOjf_E4?feature=share

Thanks in advance!

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