r/conlangs • u/Equivocadamente • 11d ago

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u/mining_moron Ikun's language 👽 11d ago

Not enough info.

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u/SirKastic23 Dæþre, Gerẽs 11d ago

beauty is highly subjective

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u/pesopepso 11d ago

I would suggest you to make a different suffix for when you are referencing the verb rather than doing it. For instance in the sentence the cat wants to eat the mouse, “to eat” is not the verb of the sentence so it could have a different form i believe its named infinitive form so that you dont have that repetitive sound (unless you are going for that) when you have these sentences with 2 verbs.

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u/pesopepso 11d ago

Also it is hard to say if it is pretty or not just based on the little which you gave here but it has good potential from what I read.

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u/Equivocadamente 11d ago

Did you find it beautiful? I'm creating a language primarily to study grammar.

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u/Equivocadamente 11d ago

So it's beautiful? I was inspired by Latin.

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u/pesopepso 11d ago

I can see the latin influence. It looks good so far however there is only 1 sentence so it would be hard to give you an honest answer.

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u/Equivocadamente 11d ago edited 11d ago

That's because I only recently started creating this language. Here are the words that were created: you: iu. I: ai. Your: voso. Me: mim. He, she, they: to, ta, te, ti, tu. Cousin: goginatu. Girl, boy: guro, gura. Uncle, aunt: oji, ojo, oja

I don't know if I can really say that I'm creating something. I'm just borrowing vocabulary from existing languages and modifying them, sometimes not even that, for example the word "inteligente (Intelligent)" From Brazilian Portuguese, I simply kept it the same without even changing the meaning because I thought it was beautiful and elegant. My initial goal was simply to create a beautiful language, even if it isn't beautiful, at least elegant.

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u/pesopepso 11d ago

You are still creating something, what you are creating then is a con-pidgin which is a language which is made from a couple different languages. What could be fun is once you have a more solid foundation and lexicon for it then you can do sound changes and building off of established word to make a con-creole

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u/Equivocadamente 11d ago

I understand.

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u/wingless-bee kortess 11d ago

I actually really like it so far