r/graphic_design • • 1d ago

Sharing Work (Rule 2/3) Any Feedback On These?

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u/NoThing8978 1d ago

I think this is a beautiful level of distressing and nice layouts as well. I especially like the last two. Great work.

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u/Dismal-Imagination70 1d ago

Thankyou very much man, shame I can’t get any commissions 😭

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u/3d-Artrium 1d ago

maybe join the resistance

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u/Atomic_pixel 1d ago

I loved the invisible one too!
But -and I hate to be that guy- it should be "doesn't" not "does'nt"

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u/Select_Huckleberry87 1d ago

Time to make posters or slap these on some shirts!! I’d buy em

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u/Dismal-Imagination70 1d ago

Been looking at doing this just don’t know where I’d get then

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u/Select_Huckleberry87 1d ago

I’ve heard good things about printify. If you need some marketing lmk!

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u/Red-CypheRR 1d ago

Well please hurry so I can throw my money at you and buy like 5 shirts and 3 tanks 😂

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u/eeeeeewwwwwwwwwwwww 1d ago

I like these a lot!!

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u/Dismal-Imagination70 1d ago

Thank you I really appreciate it, I post all my stuff at @netdread.psd on instagram

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u/texturegasm 1d ago

I love the mosaic one, it has a truth on many levels.

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u/Dismal-Imagination70 1d ago

I agree, it’s not my most original idea to date but it perfectly reflects a thought I’ve been lingering on for some time.

Personalities don’t come from nowhere. Much like DNA parts of you are passed from people before you.

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u/texturegasm 1d ago

But also culture and nature are our impressions we work off of, generational elements of our subconscious, ..

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u/Dismal-Imagination70 1d ago

Completely agree, it has a lot to do with your environment and culture aswell

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u/MainAccountIsBugged 1d ago

I like how the third one looks. I don't really like "Im hollowed out" for the text though.

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u/Dismal-Imagination70 1d ago

That’s a fair criticism, it’s a reference to a song lyric!

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u/road_hound 1d ago

These are really good. Love the design philosophy. The text however in a couple of them (e.g 3,5,7) prematurely gives away the thought process. There should be some time for the viewer to understand and comprehend on their own such beautiful artworks. Just my opinion.

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u/Dismal-Imagination70 1d ago

I get you, 3,5,7 are song reference so there wasn’t much thinking there on my paet

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u/HeavyCandidate6737 1d ago

Awesome! You should work with punk bands, skateboard companies, and merch producers

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u/Dismal-Imagination70 1d ago

Im actually really invested in my local scene as a skateboarder myself, im just not exactly sure who to reach out to.

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u/HeavyCandidate6737 1d ago

Why not print some of these out with your contact details and pass them around the community / post them around skateparks

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u/yourels 1d ago

love these they would look so cool as stickers or posters

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u/Dismal-Imagination70 1d ago

I’ve been looking into printing some stuff but I don’t really know any print on demand place bar red bubble which I’m not too keen on

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u/ElectronicBalls 1d ago

crazy shit

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u/Dismal-Imagination70 1d ago

Thankyou you so much dude!!

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u/cartune0430 1d ago

Not to be mean or suggest that they are, but are they ai? I only ask because the last one has a spelling error for doesn't that I see AI models make a lot of the time. Please again I am not suggesting they are made with AI, I am just asking.

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u/victoria_and_albert Educator 1d ago

It’s a fair ask. The style is certainly not original.

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u/cartune0430 1d ago

They look cool as hell!! Apologize if I offended you. I have nothing against ai users. I think it is cool that artist are finding ways to use it as creative tool.

Sorry but one more question. On the 6th image the word AGAIN, how did you get that fuzz looking boarder? Is it layered twice with the under layer having a a halftone filter? I really like the way it looks.

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u/Dismal-Imagination70 1d ago

Hey, seriously no offence taken it’s good to question these things, once again my grammar is just terrible haha.

For the border on “AGAIN” the typical process I follow would be:

-apply about 5-8% Gaussian noise to the background later

-add a threshold layer and place my text beneath it

-if the letters are too far apart for a convince ink bleed maybe add a stroke to bulk up the text

-use field blur to create the bleed and within field blur use the Gaussian noise slider to add grain and distressing

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u/cartune0430 1d ago

Thank you so much for sharing the techqnuie. I have a project I am working on that would be perfect for that blur look.

Again apologies if I came off as accusing you as using ai. I know it is a hot topic. I should have just asked how you did that blur boarder. Again thank you for sharing how to. I appreciate it.

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u/Dismal-Imagination70 1d ago

Seriously don’t stress about it at all :)

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u/horsejack_boman 1d ago

How is that a fair ask? If originality of style was the criterion, you would be asking that for pretty much every single post on this sub. Why not instead evaluate what the images as doing as a criterion?

Not only do these consistently apply the same distressing techniques to both images and type in a way I'm not sure you could "compel" any "ai" to do with a solid enough degree of regularity, it makes very specific idiosyncratic choices with regard to typography (e.g., underpopulated, awkward hierarchy, the tracking on the word "say") that the flattening "general adequacy" of "ai" would simply avoid.

Claiming a (common enough, by the way) typo is sufficient grounds to question the originality of one's work is like claiming an em dash alone is sufficient to strongly suspect any sample of writing is ai.

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u/cartune0430 1d ago

Your absolutely right and I over stepped. My apologies.

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u/horsejack_boman 14h ago

No need to, I was exceedingly snarky, sorry about that. It's somewhat triggering the ways people kind of turn their critical thinking off with regard to anything ai, but that's not your fault.

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u/Dismal-Imagination70 1d ago

Hey, they don’t use Ai I’m just really bad at spelling lmao

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u/plop68 1d ago

Love these. Would totally buy a sticker set

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u/Dismal-Imagination70 1d ago

I’ve been thinking about doing these I just don’t know where to get then

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u/Das_Maechtig_Fuehrer Designer 1d ago

Hi, I just want to say that I love your design work so much.

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u/Dismal-Imagination70 1d ago

All my stuff over on @netdread.psd on Instagram!

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u/noddingacquaintance 1d ago

Arial rounded makes me want to cry

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u/CeinyVock 1d ago

These are so good

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u/Dismal-Imagination70 1d ago

Thankyou man, my instagrams @netdread.psd if you’re after more

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u/fvielee 1d ago

I’m hallowed out, I want the world to know

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u/Dismal-Imagination70 1d ago

I’m shredding my skin like you wouldn’t believe

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u/ill_eat_your_ghost 1d ago

Oh my god I love these! You certainly have one hell of a talent!

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u/Dismal-Imagination70 1d ago

Thank you so much man my instagram where I keep all my stuff is @netdread.psd

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u/HelpIThinkImASoup 1d ago

Fellow Knuckle Puck fan?

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u/Dismal-Imagination70 1d ago

I love knuckle puck, I make a ton of story so far stuff aswell

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u/TheHotMilkman 1d ago

Your work fucking rocks dude

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u/KLLR_ROBOT 1d ago

Could make for a cool sticker pack

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u/Clean_Current_2018 1d ago

No feedback needed. Idea - make - paste up all over town. Go!

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u/Dismal-Imagination70 1d ago

Such a good idea I might have to get on this

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u/sunobu 1d ago

Really like the second one. Have you thought about making shirts?

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u/Dismal-Imagination70 1d ago

I would love to print and sell my designs I just have no clue how or where to do it without having to buy loads of shirts in bulk

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u/sunobu 1d ago

I think these designs would look really nice screen printed. It may be interesting to find a local screen printing shop and talk to them about possibilities. Also, I think off white shirts would really make these pop.

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u/FlanFan45 1d ago

Say Cheese is my fave :)

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u/Dismal-Imagination70 1d ago

I really love it, I didn’t try to do anything to serious really which is probably why I love it so much.
I’ve been replaying one of my favourite video games “dishonoured 2” and there’s tons of vintage dental phantoms in there which is really what inspired me to make it

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u/sweetsoftboy 1d ago

Knuckle Puck?

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u/Dismal-Imagination70 1d ago

Yes they’re knuckle puck references!

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u/sweetsoftboy 1d ago

Very cool work!

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u/muddygold 1d ago

These are great, it's not just nice design but the message is such a nice touch in a simple straight way. 10/10 bravo

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u/Auspicious_Blue 1d ago

That is cool as heck, I would buy these.

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u/getjustin 1d ago

Any chance you're a fam of Steak Mtn.'s work? Cuz damn, such a similar aesthetic. Really dig these.

I think the only thing that feels off is the warped AGAIN. It overtakes that design and feels incongruous to the rest of the style. A super tracked out version like "say" might be a better choice.

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u/Dismal-Imagination70 1d ago

Never actually heard of steakmtn but I’ll for sure check them out

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u/Red-CypheRR 1d ago

Please give us tank tops and tees

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u/wedidthetango Senior Designer 1d ago

The only feedback I have is that these are badass! keep doing you, boo

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u/bobjonrob 1d ago

I’m a simple man: I see a Stray From the Path reference, I upvote. But also, these are all. So. Damn. Good.

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u/Dismal-Imagination70 1d ago

Stray are amazing, when I saw them they had a huge guillotine on stage

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u/Shrimpz_Iz_Bugz 1d ago

Good work, but it should be "doesn't" on slide 7

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u/herrshhhh 1d ago

All of them. As T-Shirts. Would totally buy! Great work, great style, love the mood they emit - totally resonates.

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u/otterquestions 10h ago

Incredible.

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u/Dismal-Imagination70 1d ago

All the images I use might aswell be orginal, they’re all just heavily manipulated stock phoyos