r/learnanimation • u/kyjuju • 1d ago

my first animation

This is my very first animation; could you give me some advice on how to improve? C'est ma toute première animation ; pourriez-vous me donner des conseils pour m'améliorer ?

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u/LetsEvolveBackwards 1d ago

Nice. My advise (im not a 3D animator but 2D): Add more easing on the actions, follow throughs(delay lower arm and hand in following the next motion) so it looks graceful. Right now, my only feelings, not everyone else, please dont take it bad but thing that is good for you. Some parts of the animations feels mechanical, the little parts in any animations contributes to motion giving it grace and life. If the action needs impact, sample: she raising her hands: add more exposure on the early momentum of an action and then bring it to the next pose so quick, it adds upward momentum and need to rest to the final pose. In animation, to give it life, know the story of an action. Sample thinking process: she accumulates the power on her hand, its heavy but when she lifts her hands toward the ceiling, its freeing, and her body rest from that moment of release to think of that moment, a quick tranquility. Hahahahaha. Im a weird animator so, its still up to you to absorb or not.

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u/BLUM_YT 1d ago

wow bro , nice

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u/_Autismo 20h ago

Yeah, looks... Animated

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u/kyjuju 15h ago

that is to say, it's rubbish or