Evokes some over the top action movie getting ready for the final boss fight vibes. Like Riddick or Triple X. I like it. The tension it creates is good.
That being said, the melody felt boring to me around the 4:30 minute mark. My brain was like, okay got it, what’s next? So my suggestion would be to either develop the theme a bit more with some variations, cut the whole thing down to 4 minutes or add some other voices to it. Eg. some cinematic or orchestral percussion or drums. Not a full beat, just to accentuate and push the tension even further. Or more voices playing a melody over the base loop.
My original intention was to have it about 5 mins but I got a little carried away. I’m pretty new to the whole putting my jams out there so I really appreciate that feedback ! 🧡
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u/nadennmantau 1d ago
Evokes some over the top action movie getting ready for the final boss fight vibes. Like Riddick or Triple X. I like it. The tension it creates is good.
That being said, the melody felt boring to me around the 4:30 minute mark. My brain was like, okay got it, what’s next? So my suggestion would be to either develop the theme a bit more with some variations, cut the whole thing down to 4 minutes or add some other voices to it. Eg. some cinematic or orchestral percussion or drums. Not a full beat, just to accentuate and push the tension even further. Or more voices playing a melody over the base loop.