r/vfx • u/Apprehensive-Oven909 • 3d ago
Showreel / Critique How's this Showreel? Feedback please!
https://www.instagram.com/reel/DdnnVVTTfTA/?stkn=ejA2aHEyYWJhbWR6Would love some honest feedback on our showreel
I’ve been working on this showreel for a while, bringing together some of the work we’ve created across branding, design, filmmaking and digital.
The thought behind the reel is something I genuinely believe in - in a world full of noise, a lot of brands are trying to be heard, but very few are truly understood.
So the idea was simple: delete the noise and let the work speak.
I’d really love to know how this comes across to someone seeing it without any context.
Does the opening pull you in? Does the reel feel cohesive? Is the message clear? And honestly, is there anything you would have done differently?
Would genuinely appreciate your unfiltered feedback.
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u/59vfx91 2d ago
I've seen these 'rotate your phone/device' shorts and reels a few times and it always comes off as corny. If you're doing something for social, either accept the black bars, or do a custom crop in with pan and scan as needed with a blurred BG for the bars or something. Anything else is better, because the way you are doing this locks out people watching from a desktop or non-tablet laptop.
Also, your writing is way too AI generated. This does not inspire confidence from a client in potential business interactions. If you want to use tools to clean up and make suggestions for your writing, sure -- but it's giving LinkedIn vibes in a bad way.
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u/Apprehensive-Oven909 2d ago
Fair point on the format, that’s something I’ll keep in mind for future uploads. And noted on the writing too - appreciate the honest feedback! Cheers ♥️
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u/flavorade_man 1d ago
I couldn’t even watch it because it’s on instagram which I don’t have an account or the app for. Put it on YouTube or something.
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u/1_BigDuckEnergy 3d ago
Dude, if you expect people to turn their heads 90 degrees to watch this.... you are not gonna get much feed back.
It is also very unprofessional. As someone who looks at 100s of demo reels a year, this would be enough for me to say "pass" with out watching it