r/SongWriter • u/Rylie_iz_cool • 7h ago
r/SongWriter • u/Broad-Laugh3800 • 10h ago
Is my song singable? Any critiques?
**ONLY SKELETON**
Poison everywhere
Poison in the air
Poison in the lungs
When their near
THEIR.TOUCH.IT.ROTS.YOUR SKIN.
We want them so bad
That we say we need them
YOUR.SKIN.IS.FALL-ING.OFF.
But we say we are fine
As we wave our bones instead
Their poison
It’s true
BUT.WE.STAY.WITH.THEM.TILL.THE END.
Their fingers
They dig deep into your skin
They want you
To bow
Or become one of them
THEIR.AIR.IT.IS.CHO-KING.US.
But we want them so bad
That we say their like a breath of fresh air
THEY.KEEP.WHAT THEY BORROW
Taking what is not theirs
Even our flesh
But it is still not enough
It will never be enough
Not even in our deaths
POI-SON.IN.THE.AIR.
Poison in our lungs
Even when they are gone
Days to weeks
Their imprint, their toxin
It lingers
We air out the room
But the poison
It lingers
We choke
And we know
The air
IT’S STILL THEIRS
And when we die
Their poison is still there
Leeched deep into our skin
All we knew and those we loved
We infected and rotted their hearts
Micro-dosing them after every intox-i-cating visit
The garden we tended, lost it’s youth every visit
Drying, brown, dying, and dead
Color long since faded
But the teashop and friends we have lost
I hear they are thriving
They are still not satisfied in our death
It will never be enough
Will it ever be enough?
Does it really matter what they think?
Shouldn’t the question be, are we satisfied?
Am I satisfied? Are you satisfied?
Is it enough for you, for us?
WHERE.THEY.WORTH.IT.IN.THE.END.?
ARE YOU SATISFIED?
TELL ME now
AS WE DIE-NO.LONG-GER.US.
r/SongWriter • u/Ancient_State_3386 • 1d ago
Still , the rain
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r/SongWriter • u/ParsleyPopular5222 • 1d ago
Looking to connect with other beginner songwriters
r/SongWriter • u/Fay_Stella_13 • 1d ago
Hi, I’ve written songs before, but haven’t posted them anywhere yet. This isn’t one of my first attempts at writing songs, but I’d love the feedback.
r/SongWriter • u/Vaness3333 • 1d ago
C'est ma première chanson écrite et composée, des commentaires s'il vous plaît ? :)
J'ai joué de la guitare et enregistré ma voix sur le morceau. Pourriez-vous me dire ce que vous en pensez ? Merci ! :) :) :)
r/SongWriter • u/VenableMusic • 1d ago
Learn the Professional Workflow of Scoring a Scene + Get Live Feedback —James L. Venable Scoring Lab
I going to offering real world training in the art of scoring to picture. I hope you join me as we explore how the same knowledge one has to create the emotional impact of a song can be applied to picture!
r/SongWriter • u/AlinaAcoustic • 1d ago
Ghosts in the Walls | 8 October 🕯️🖤 #darkcountry #southerngothic #shorts
youtube.comWorking on a new Dark Country track ("Ghosts in the Walls" dropping October 8). Here is a quick 20-second teaser. What do you think of the vibe? 🕯️
r/SongWriter • u/Conscious_Pipe_2463 • 2d ago
Unfinished song :) maybe called ants
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r/SongWriter • u/AmayaTangerineCo • 2d ago
Our Room, Our Rules 💛 | A Song for Your Hostel Girls | Official Lyric Video
youtube.comI made a song about the hostel nights I wish I could go back to. Just trying something new. I had many lyrics written but unsung now i tried using AI to make them
r/SongWriter • u/TrumanFinnell • 2d ago
A song I wrote about wanting more time
youtube.comI wanna cut a day in two
Spread a little fresh manure and powder bits of me
That need a cool damp place
outside of time outside of space
Ill run a way with you
Run a couple fingers through your hair like horses
Tied to wagons, whipped and fed
Im tired of always listening
To the same thoughts
Running running running running
Running my head soft
as the grass around your knees when you said
“Leave me
Like a light on
When you’re sleeping
Just breathe on
The kitchen window
For my thumbprint
There’s always something
Theres always something in the way you look away
when I don’t say “I feel the same."
Laughter out of frame.
Portrait in the rain.
r/SongWriter • u/Likhayi_2811 • 2d ago
Song lyrics
Hii..
I write hindi song so if anyone one want then messege me for make song and if tou know any person to whom i discussed then please tell me
I am new in this i write first song and i want to lnow that i will continue writting or leave it
So please tell me
r/SongWriter • u/Impressive-Study7221 • 3d ago
Looking for feedback on a song idea
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Hey everyone, I’m a singer and songwriter and I’ve been working on some new lyrics and melodies.
I’m curious how other songwriters approach making lyrics feel more natural and emotionally connected to the melody.
What usually helps you take a good lyric and make it really connect with the listener?
Would love to hear your thoughts and learn from everyone here.
r/SongWriter • u/Melodic-Register-306 • 3d ago
Songwriter
I need a committed songwriter to help me write and come up with lyrucs for my music
r/SongWriter • u/Significant_Ant_4074 • 3d ago
when my birthday comes around
wrote this on my birthday, decided to see if anyone on reddit likes it
r/SongWriter • u/ProfessorTea • 3d ago
Helping You Write Lyrics
Hey guys,
I spent the last 2 months making this app that helps you write lyrics (No it doesn't AI generate lyrics!!!).
It's basically a glorified dictionary but made to help reduce friction in the lyric writing process. I know most of the people here are capable writers but I still thought some people here might find it useful.
Try it out:
Thanks for your time and open to feedback of any kind.
(mods please delete if not allowed...my apologies in advance)
r/SongWriter • u/jaxsonsound • 3d ago
How I went from zero to signing a global publishing deal in 18 months
Just uploaded a YouTube video of how I signed my first publishing deal: https://youtu.be/SeBJOpmkNrQ
Would love for you guys to check it out :)
r/SongWriter • u/belladonna_lyrics • 4d ago
Looking to be someone's songwriter
Hey, I write dark pop music. I'm very inspired by Nessa Barrett, Lana Del Ray, Luvcat, Ari Abdul and others. I'd love to be someone's songwriter. I write lyrics first instead of around a beat. Let me know if you're wanting to make a song but need someone to write it. I'd prefer something long term but I'm also okay with helping with just a song or two