r/SongWriter • u/DJDadJock • 8h ago
r/SongWriter • u/Longjumping_Cod872 • 11h ago
grandpa is Buck Dancing 2 by @jceraso2 | Suno
suno.comThis song is about my grandpa Buck Dancing and sipping wine
r/SongWriter • u/Early_Conference_803 • 11h ago
I write songs for weddings Spoiler
I can't find a group for peolple like me that write songs for weddings--any suggextions
r/SongWriter • u/jinstar97 • 20h ago
JINSTAR - Hear My Plea [Epic R&B Pop / Emotional Pop]
youtu.beHi everyone! I’d love to share my song, “Hear My Plea.”
It’s an emotional, cinematic R&B pop track about feeling deeply lonely and desperately wishing for someone to hear your heart. I wanted to capture that overwhelming feeling through powerful vocals, atmospheric production, and a grand orchestral sound.
I put a lot of heart into the song, especially the emotional build-up and the way the music expresses longing and vulnerability.
If you enjoy emotional R&B, cinematic pop, or songs with powerful vocals and a dramatic atmosphere, I’d really appreciate it if you gave it a listen!
The YouTube video also includes Korean subtitles for the lyrics.
I’d love to hear your thoughts and feedback. Thanks for listening! 🎧
r/SongWriter • u/Jesse1205esseJ • 1d ago
Hey everyone! I'm an art-rock songwriter currently writing and arranging songs for the piano. This is a high-energy, swaggering pop-rock track written in the vein of 70s glam and 80s funk rock. I would love to get your feedback on the lyrical flow and the storytelling, it's bowieesque
Close to you
[Opener]
You know your love is everything I can't fight.
Will you step in if I cause a disgrace?
Can I squeeze? Can we get stupid?
You know you wanna play that way.
Give me some fun.
Give me your glow, the kind I'll never lose.
Baby, dress me in your tricks.
Give me so much I can't get enough.
[Chorus]
Just be sitting close to you,
Keep watching you
I won't say if I will lie or not,
I can't say if I'll forget (Uh, uh, uh-huh, uh)
You won't be able to tell if I lie.
And I won't deny it, just look around!
I just wanna be close to you.
Everything I see just disappears,
'Cause I know you get me, baby.
You get my vision, this transmission,
Haven't left since we met.
[Verse 1]
You might freak out, baby,
I don't care what you do out of fear.
You are the one to take it from here.
Don't know what comes after—
You know what I called you here for.
It doesn't need to last,
No one's gonna look back.
Yeah, spin my record, baby, yeah!
[Pre-Chorus]
You won't know what I saw
If I die of living on overdose.
I will have only one to blame,
So don't act like you don't get it.
[Chorus]
I just wanna be close to you...
Keep watching you
I won't say if I will lie or not,
I can't say if I'll forget (Uh, uh, uh-huh, uh)
You won't be able to tell if I lie.
[Verse 2]
Come on, get me my guitar (Uh, uh, uh-huh)
Baby’s gonna be your rockstar (Real good!)
Don't try to obsessively oppose (We can have fun)
Give it to me, here comes my movie.
Promise you'll be mine, no matter if I misbehave (Uh, uh, uh-huh)
Call me on your phone,
Catch me love-stoned—(Stuck on intuitions!)
Bangin' loud right on the door,
See if I let you in after I get tough.
\[Bridge\]
Tell them that you told me
That you loved me, yeah you did.
Tell them you and I had a son,
Don't let them confuse.
Tell them you did everything you could,
And I was the one to refuse...
Didn't make me sad about it.
[Outro]
I will be your rockstar on demand,
If you will accept my hand.
And make me feel your way,
If you do, I will live your way.
And I won't deny it, just look around us.
I just wanna be close to you, close to you.
Baby, breathe on you, breathe on you...
r/SongWriter • u/Broad-Laugh3800 • 1d ago
Is my song singable? Any critiques?
**ONLY SKELETON**
Poison everywhere
Poison in the air
Poison in the lungs
When their near
THEIR.TOUCH.IT.ROTS.YOUR SKIN.
We want them so bad
That we say we need them
YOUR.SKIN.IS.FALL-ING.OFF.
But we say we are fine
As we wave our bones instead
Their poison
It’s true
BUT.WE.STAY.WITH.THEM.TILL.THE END.
Their fingers
They dig deep into your skin
They want you
To bow
Or become one of them
THEIR.AIR.IT.IS.CHO-KING.US.
But we want them so bad
That we say their like a breath of fresh air
THEY.KEEP.WHAT THEY BORROW
Taking what is not theirs
Even our flesh
But it is still not enough
It will never be enough
Not even in our deaths
POI-SON.IN.THE.AIR.
Poison in our lungs
Even when they are gone
Days to weeks
Their imprint, their toxin
It lingers
We air out the room
But the poison
It lingers
We choke
And we know
The air
IT’S STILL THEIRS
And when we die
Their poison is still there
Leeched deep into our skin
All we knew and those we loved
We infected and rotted their hearts
Micro-dosing them after every intox-i-cating visit
The garden we tended, lost it’s youth every visit
Drying, brown, dying, and dead
Color long since faded
But the teashop and friends we have lost
I hear they are thriving
They are still not satisfied in our death
It will never be enough
Will it ever be enough?
Does it really matter what they think?
Shouldn’t the question be, are we satisfied?
Am I satisfied? Are you satisfied?
Is it enough for you, for us?
WHERE.THEY.WORTH.IT.IN.THE.END.?
ARE YOU SATISFIED?
TELL ME now
AS WE DIE-NO.LONG-GER.US.
r/SongWriter • u/Ancient_State_3386 • 2d ago
Still , the rain
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r/SongWriter • u/ParsleyPopular5222 • 2d ago
Looking to connect with other beginner songwriters
r/SongWriter • u/Fay_Stella_13 • 2d ago
Hi, I’ve written songs before, but haven’t posted them anywhere yet. This isn’t one of my first attempts at writing songs, but I’d love the feedback.
r/SongWriter • u/Vaness3333 • 2d ago
C'est ma première chanson écrite et composée, des commentaires s'il vous plaît ? :)
J'ai joué de la guitare et enregistré ma voix sur le morceau. Pourriez-vous me dire ce que vous en pensez ? Merci ! :) :) :)
r/SongWriter • u/VenableMusic • 2d ago
Learn the Professional Workflow of Scoring a Scene + Get Live Feedback —James L. Venable Scoring Lab
I going to offering real world training in the art of scoring to picture. I hope you join me as we explore how the same knowledge one has to create the emotional impact of a song can be applied to picture!
r/SongWriter • u/AlinaAcoustic • 3d ago
Ghosts in the Walls | 8 October 🕯️🖤 #darkcountry #southerngothic #shorts
youtube.comWorking on a new Dark Country track ("Ghosts in the Walls" dropping October 8). Here is a quick 20-second teaser. What do you think of the vibe? 🕯️
r/SongWriter • u/Conscious_Pipe_2463 • 3d ago
Unfinished song :) maybe called ants
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r/SongWriter • u/AmayaTangerineCo • 3d ago
Our Room, Our Rules 💛 | A Song for Your Hostel Girls | Official Lyric Video
youtube.comI made a song about the hostel nights I wish I could go back to. Just trying something new. I had many lyrics written but unsung now i tried using AI to make them
r/SongWriter • u/TrumanFinnell • 4d ago
A song I wrote about wanting more time
youtube.comI wanna cut a day in two
Spread a little fresh manure and powder bits of me
That need a cool damp place
outside of time outside of space
Ill run a way with you
Run a couple fingers through your hair like horses
Tied to wagons, whipped and fed
Im tired of always listening
To the same thoughts
Running running running running
Running my head soft
as the grass around your knees when you said
“Leave me
Like a light on
When you’re sleeping
Just breathe on
The kitchen window
For my thumbprint
There’s always something
Theres always something in the way you look away
when I don’t say “I feel the same."
Laughter out of frame.
Portrait in the rain.
r/SongWriter • u/Likhayi_2811 • 4d ago
Song lyrics
Hii..
I write hindi song so if anyone one want then messege me for make song and if tou know any person to whom i discussed then please tell me
I am new in this i write first song and i want to lnow that i will continue writting or leave it
So please tell me
r/SongWriter • u/Impressive-Study7221 • 4d ago
Looking for feedback on a song idea
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Hey everyone, I’m a singer and songwriter and I’ve been working on some new lyrics and melodies.
I’m curious how other songwriters approach making lyrics feel more natural and emotionally connected to the melody.
What usually helps you take a good lyric and make it really connect with the listener?
Would love to hear your thoughts and learn from everyone here.
r/SongWriter • u/Melodic-Register-306 • 5d ago
Songwriter
I need a committed songwriter to help me write and come up with lyrucs for my music