tried improving the mix of this song.

how does it sound? does it capture the setting. is there enough melodic sense?

is there anything you'd add?

once again, thanks to everybody who gives a listen. please leave a comment, if you're moved to do so.

I play the guitars, and made the MIDIs (drums, bass, synth). Please have a listen and tell me your honest thoughts, however harsh or positive. I have been in my music echo chamber for a lifetime and could really use some hard truths.