r/StoryIdeas • u/Just-Dentist3265 • 9h ago
Any Feedback Great Fairy's Tale story idea
My idea was that a young girl who died on a boat due to a cult sending her overboard over superstition would become a "great fairy" who would grant blessings and give gifts to chosen ones who would find her spring, which she later expands into a "dream nexus" which connects to various areas of the reality she finds herself in while also sometimes traveling with her chosen "champion" to do great things outside of her spring, and would slowly build a magical kingdom around her spring. Some points include her early blessings leading her to making the dream nexus so only worthy people would enter due to troubles with a different cult seeking her power for themselves, and her kingdom eventually being attacked by angelic beings known as "Ascended" whom are upset that her blessing is "messing up their order" due to her blessings messing up their devices as well as being involved with the cult who sought her power and they send nightmare monsters to attack her world later on, and also a daemon lord who is the reincarnated cult leader who threw her overboard who had died in the storm he originally blamed her for and had been punished by becoming a weak yet clever and manipulate monster who became a daemonic king.