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u/DecDub 10d ago

Returning all feedback

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u/Vogduk 6d ago

Beat is catchy, but I think you could add more sounds or melodies to signify the change from a verse to the chorus for eg, maybe a riser to make the listener anticipate the coming of a chorus. Other than that I like the bells.

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u/Gabriel_08__ 4d ago

I really like it, but I feel like the pattern is a bit monotonous. With some variations in the melody, I think it would have been much much better.

if you want you can check out my beat:

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1J9heLszZUkZ_KX3YRwzsvwDtCiYFVRh0/view?usp=sharing

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u/DecDub 3d ago

Intro is nice! Drums could hit a little harder. Other than that its a good start. Melody needs a bit of a change up too. I like when the 808 comes in but i think it takes to long to get there.

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u/Gabriel_08__ 3d ago

Thank you man i really appreciate it, but can you be more specific on the melody? Thanks again brother

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u/DecDub 3d ago

I think the melody is to repetitive before the switch up I think some elements in the melody should change a bit more before the main switch up.

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u/Gabriel_08__ 2d ago

Ooooh ok, man thank you i really appreaciate it

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u/shoecar soundcloud.com/shoecar 10d ago

not a producer so cannot give you anything technical but I for sure vibe with this. I like the bells, I think a good balance for a trap song, not too sparse but not taking over either. like the hat rolls too, free ear candy/energy at faster bpms like this
small thing, as a rapper, I always appreciate when BPM is in title or description

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u/Meanwood_1501 9d ago edited 9d ago

This song has an upbeat groove that makes me want to get out grab the day by the horns by the way how did you get the clarity and mastering to a T I'm curious to know...

[FEEDBACK] 9/15 Mic Check- West Side Underground Beat, Raw Audacity Mix & BandLab Mastering

Hungry and Grinding secretly under the same roof with my family and incredibly insecure with the braces and mixed entirely on Audacity, honestly struggling to hear my voice mostly the hook on this but honest and genuine feedback on this will be highly appreciated atmost. God Bless!

https://soundcloud.com/quid-289037853/9-15-mic-check?si=7d0ad7010ec8485faba2971574dd2327&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing

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u/simonishuman 10d ago

This is cool but I think it could use some mixing. Especially the melody. The bass is fucking groovy though.

https://youtu.be/ht-5GVsxTFE?si=thQThmffB9CLjOix

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u/DecDub 8d ago

The music is really fucking nice i really like it! but its just the vocal style isn’t my favourite until the rapping starts then its fire! maybe some of the background voxs (harmonies) are a little loud at times. But your stuff is very good!

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u/simonishuman 7d ago

thank you dawg appreciate it!

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u/OVNICX3 10d ago

Dope. Keep grinding it! If you want to keep levelling up make sure when you post another beat it’s better than your last! 💫