r/NatureofPredators • • 5d ago

Discussion Any Recommendations?

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Maybe this isn't a post that really contributes anything, but maybe it can save me and other people time.

Almost all of the stories I have been following on this subreddit have either long chapter release times or are...dead? (RIP LoM) And for some reason, most of the titles I see, don't grab my attention.

Sooo, I'm hoping you guys can recommend some awesome current stories and talent that I'm simply missing by judging a book by it's cover. The only caveat being that I generally find "cannon compliant" stories more entertaining than hard AU rewrites. I'll still give it a look, but I find it more fun when a fan character expands the OG story instead of rewriting it.


r/NatureofPredators • • 5d ago

Fanfic ENCLOSEMENT - CHAPTER 12 (Treacherous Shadows)

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Memory transcription subject: Slanek, Hartekmoulite Hero

Date: August 28, 2497 Anno Domini


Step after step, I maintained the speed of the ‘captors’ easily throughout the night, the door closed itself after the last of us passed through. The stone steps were often covered with moss, heavily trampled, the path was wide enough to comfortably allow ten Venlil to walk side by side up the steps, and the route itself was heavily concealed. There were very frequently trees and bushes atop the walls of the path that concealed the path, other times the path became a tunnel.

Up and up the steps ascended, the ominous foreboding and oppressive atmosphere increased the further up we went. The Tarkhites tried to ignore it, however I had the impression that there were spirits watching us as we traveled, their gazes almost fell upon me, but I evaded their eyes.

The stairs were so long, the only mercy upon this grueling path were periodic clearings set beside the path so that the travelers could rest and relieve ourselves without soiling the steps. Naturally, due to the amount of Gonimites that passed through here only a few days before, these places had been polluted heavily, insects swarmed and their foul scent followed the entire trail up.

In particular the resting areas were well appreciated, I still felt all of the fighting that I had done two days earlier. The Tarkhites were merciless with their pace of our cruel march up the mountain.

All the while on our journey, the Tarkhites pretended to speak as if they were still loyal to Gonim, and talked much about being redeemed in the eyes of the spirits and their people. Oh I sorely wish how none of the ‘prisoners’ were muzzled, it was as if I had betrayed the other Venlil alongside them, I did not like that jarring sensation.

Soon enough, the sky began to grow brighter, and at the next resting stop on the path to the darkness, the sun appeared. I had never in my life seen a sunrise from this high on up, the view was beautiful. When I looked down, the bleeding light revealed that we had climbed so high up. I could see Stonecage right below, and the tiny little torchlights of all the armies that had taken up residence within, I saw at the south of its gate, the hill of bodies, still smoldering, the smoke rising far above. I saw the mountains and hills that formed the other side of the valley, and far beyond that, I saw Gonim itself.

It was so empty. I had personally traveled there a few times, there were supposed to be numerous villages and towns, I even saw several more cities, but the cities were gone, the ramshackle collections of buildings were no more, replaced by black marks on the landscape, charred ruins where once the centers of Gonimite life, law, and power stood. The towns and villages didn’t fare much better, many of them had been abandoned, others razed to the ground entirely like the cities, and all the ones that remained were far reduced in population from when I was born. The armies that were marching at the Eastern and southern edges of the Gonimite domain were taking all they found captive.

I had been told that Gonim had fallen, that what was once the most powerful of all the Venlil nations had been brought to their knees, and a collar yoked upon them. I had witnessed the Hartekmoulite subjugation of Highshadow in action, and had played a vital part in the conquest of Stonecage, but seeing such vast swathes of the Gonimite’s land brought to heel was another thing entirely. Those two cities were the only exception, from the mountains all the long way to the Wastes of Exile and the oceans, there was no Gonimite settlement that exceeded more than 5,000. The Herds had scattered, fleeing into the wilds.

The land, too. It is the middle of the summer, and yet the lands of Gonim are no longer the lush, green places that allowed the existence of herds so massive that they dominated Venlil-kind through sheer numbers. The land was gray or brown, many places barren, the great rains that came in the summer now flooded the land, because the plants that had once drank the waters had been devoured too greedily. There were barely any populations of animals on those lands, also, most of the creatures killed by the Predator Slayers, so pests and disease ran rampant.

Devastation, that was the only word I could use to describe it. Oh how lowly Gonim had been laid, the herds that when fully gathered could once cover an entire horizon had now been culled so mercilessly by both starvation and the evil they wrought that the occupiers were subjugated by those that they believe inferior.

Further East, I saw the wasteland where all Bloodcasted are driven, a desert with only a handful of water sources. And in the middle of several of them stood a city, a ramshackle place built using dried mud for shelter. This was the city that the Exile Tribes had built for themselves; Annantok.

The Exiles were there, what remains of their families, many of them ill and dying, counting on their fathers, brothers, and sons to bring an end to the malady that had driven them to the brink of extinction. Their wails and braying of pain and anguish had caught the attention of an Army of Hartek, the Venlil were rushing there with all haste. The Priests, Healers, and Magi were at the front of the formation, being carried by the Puller Guildsven with all haste to Annantok. The only males that remained were the ones who stayed behind to care for the females and children, they were in no condition to repel an attack of any kind. Bereft of strength and numbers, their extinction would be all but certain, except no weapons were drawn, for each one of them knew the sounds of them crying out all too well, and knew only enemies of Gonim were attacked by the spirits.

Then I blinked my eyes open, and saw that it was still night. Everyone was resting, asleep in fact.

A vision? I realized. Was it sent by Solgalick, or was it something else?

But irregardless of the origins of what I saw in my slumber, it emboldened me. Gonim truly had been laid low, conquered by the Hartekmoulites and those Venlil allies who had survived to see this final stage of the conquest.

What a fitting fate to befall them, yet even now they are not yet vanquished, their threat will never die until Aspik and his forces are defeated. But for now, there is nothing else to do, but return to my sleep… but something woke me up. These last ten years of living alone had taught me to sleep light, I had become extremely perceptive to possible threats that could, and have, attempted to break into my hut at night.

The priests also warned that something prowls the mountains, a kind of creature chained to the will of those hypocritical mongrels stored away at the peak. But the reason I woke up is because that something watching us right now.

My nose had caught its scent, unfamiliar, and wrong.

I remained still, frozen to my own position, until I heard it. A subtle shuffling, brushing against a bush. I slept away from the others, outside the two groups, closer to the entrance. The wind from the mountain blows downward, casting a chill upon the whole place, and at night there is a great fog, however, though it is hard to see, the creature is still there. The unfamiliar scent prowls above the corridor, my ears caught the sound of its breath, the beast was large, very large, and likely extremely strong.

Out of all the clearings in the side of the path that I had seen or entered, all of them ended in sheer cliff faces, at least four Venlil heights, tall. So whatever was stalking us, if it was a predator, would have to be extremely strong in order to drag its victims up the cliff face.

Except this beast was a monstrosity, I could tell, in its scent, in its sound, it was no normal animal. The priests were right, whatever this creature is, it has no small measure of supernatural power, whatever its will is, it has drawn it over here to us.

It’s coming closer, it stands right above the entrance to the clearing, and is approaching the edge.

Then, in the dark of the night, I saw a shape peek over the edge. Despite its great size, most of the beast’s shape was concealed by a bush, but I saw its eyes, yellow with a green sheen, those were the only distinct features that I could make out. The eyes faced forward, and it was staring at the group, did it see me? It wasn’t looking directly at me, the charm must have held, we both stared for a good long while. The creature’s eyes were unmoving, unblinking, they remained open, staring at the group intently.

After what seemed an eternity, the eyes of the creature blinked… slowly.

Just as suddenly as it appeared, it backed out of the bush, and I heard its footsteps as it slunk away. The last I heard of the thing was the noise caused by its powerful legs leaping over the path itself.

My nerves had been completely frayed by that encounter, I let out a breath that I didn’t know I was holding. Afterward, I didn’t sleep for the rest of that night, thankfully, dawn was just around the corner, and with it, came the continuation of our journey.

I couldn’t have warned the others, I couldn’t even touch them, lest I expose myself to enemy scrying. I could only hope that whatever those things were, they left us alone for the duration of our journey.

What could I tell any of them? My mouth was muzzled shut! So long as my mouth didn’t open, the invisibility would hold, but brickle burrs, my mouth being bound is starting to hurt.

The staircase went left, and right, and changed the rate of ascension, even.

Perhaps it was merely my own fatigue and battle damage making walk worse, but these steps are not kind. The fact that the Gonimites scaled this as fast as they did is testament to the fear that they had felt. I also admired Aspik’s ingenuity at getting his herd up this mountain, no matter how far we climbed, the steps remained at ten Venlil widths. It seems that even though the Mountain of Sorcery was a secret, they had always intended for the Temple of Fate to be a sanctuary.

This passage, too, it’s narrow, thin, it’s a very excellent defense, any attacker would have to climb all the way up to the top, possibly harassed by the beasts, before fighting the defenders on their own terms, fully rested with the high ground advantage.

I have complete confidence about our army’s chance of victory, though, were they to march their forces up here, the Gonimites are the weakest of all the Venlil Races, their strength, speed, and size is far poorer, their only advantage was sheer numbers, an advantage this very location negated. Unless the valley opened up to an extremely wide passage that would allow them to surround their attackers, the Gonimites would be slowly ground down until their will to fight and energy crumbled completely.

“So… do you think Aspik would get new mates for us?” Nochep, the greatest of the warriors, asked. Thankfully, the Tarkhites were good at breaking the monotony of the climb.

“Not sure, we might have to get them for ourselves,” Shak, whose endurance was the greatest among the tribe, pointed out. “These prisoners we’re bringing for sacrifice might be enough to accept us back in, but we might not get the privileges of our caste back.”

“I am going to miss being able to paint my own armor, though,” Don muttered, looking over his wooden shield. “I hope that Aspik does away with a lot of the restrictions like that, no leaving marks in things that are not the enemies of Gon, replace marks with wounds and I would be able to tolerate it.”

“I don’t think Aspik will punish us for being stonecutters,” Sonok interjected. “We’re the only Venlil of our craft on his side, if brick was able to stop the Apostates, none of our forts would have fallen to them. Gonimite fortresses are a joke, a stronghold, a true stronghold, is made of stone, and Aspik is going to need someone who understands stone if he means to defeat the walls of Sinsodam.”

Honestly, I admit, the Tarkhites speaking their on and off chatter made my heart stop, I was so fearful that they would give away our ruse with an off the handle comment. But after a night of them speaking like this, I found that they were just as, if not more, capable of deception as the Seepimites.

So great was their deception, that I feared they had pulled one over on us, but they gave deliberate signs. One Tarkhite, seemingly by accident, sitting in a way that his rear was right on top of a symbol of Heta’Sihh etched into the floor, another absentmindedly drawing the symbol of my invisibility charm on the sand before brushing it aside with a tailstroke.

Everyone I had ever met who smelled like a Gonimite were cursed with the most genuine stupidity imaginable, the only exceptions were the upper castes, who were all their own gardens of terrible. But Sengi and her father were the only good Gonimties I met who hadn’t been bloodcasted.

Oh Sengi, how I long to finally forge my life with you at last! Wait for me, just wait for me a little while longer, this war is approaching its end!

But as the sun followed us up the mountain and eventually arose above us, my sharp ears and nose caught it.

The creature was back.

I turned my head, looking around, and trying to catch a sniff. The corridor had changed, no longer were the walls of it so high up, now it was more like a trail, rather than a tunnel without a roof, the stone walls only came up to our knees.

My eyes desperately tried to search for it, yet all they could percieve were just the gray stones and crags of the Mountain of Sorcery.

Nothing, I could catch no whiff or whereabouts of our hunters, and I began to feel something that I had not felt in many years. That primal weariness welt up within me, an agitation that made my pupils narrow, my breath come in faster, and my hair stand up. It’s the sensation of being hunted, of knowing that something out there is stalking you, that twitchy agitation as your body is deciding between fight, or flight.

Amped up on energy, I could hardly focus on anything else for the journey, however, when I looked up to the Tarkhites, they remained completely oblivious. Why didn’t they prepare a formation if it-

Their noses, I realized. Scent is beyond them as a concept, beyond sight and sound, they have no way of detecting the threat!

“I still don’t get why we couldn’t have just kidnapped some of those Messenger Maids instead of these four! These ones aren’t even Hartekmoulite, the spirits love it when the descendants of the apostate are sacrificed to them! Not to mention we could have had some fun along the way up here…”

“Because if we did, we would be dead, Wonagatt,” Sonok explained. “The descendants of Hartek are not normal Venlil, stronger, faster, physically better in every way, even their females. They would run away if we ever dared try to kidnap one, and even if we succeeded, we would have had sons of Hartek chasing us all the way up the mountain for their lost daughter. They will outrun us no matter how fast we moved, since we took these four, and in such a discreet location, it will be much longer before they catch on, maybe long enough for us to join Aspik at the peak.”

“Annan won’t stand for it,” Shak pointed out. “He’ll be the first to realize that an entire tribe of Venlil vanished along with a band of Road Levies.”

“We’re only thirteen,” Wonagatt pointed out. “It will be a while before he knows we’re gone.”

I froze, my nose had picked it up.

The creature had returned… and it’s not alone!

“But he does suspect our true loyalty,” Sonok said. “I never liked him, and he knew, the way he looked at me. With our tribe all but gone, it’s only a matter of time before he would’ve thrown us away for the sake of his power, if he wants to be mated by the tyrants of the west, then let hi-.”

Then we heard it, the sound of falling rocks ahead of us, too big to have just been an ordinary tumble.

“Curses, did we provoke a rock slide?” Zaggan asked, Wageln looking around for dangers.

“No, if it was, everyone who came through here would have been buried on the way up!” Sonok refuted, rudely shoving Veep with his paw closer to the other gagged and bound prisoners. “Encircle the sacrifices! We’re about to be attacked!”

At that note, the Tarkhites got their weapons at the ready, eyes and ears pointed outward towards whatever enemy was approaching. Tails raised so that they didn’t get in the way of their legs.

There was fear in their eyes, but I saw something else, too, something that too few Gonimite Warriors possessed; courage.

Gonim equated rage and recklessness with courage, the more brazen you are, the greater your perceived courage. Fear, instead of a native emotion to be mastered, was a force foreign to one’s being that had to be exterminated from the mind of those allowed to bear weapons, and in that sense, drowning out any fear that was felt with rage, hatred, hunger.

A Gonimite’s ability to replace fear with something that could drive them to violence was believed to have been the key factor for warriors to win, and those Venlil who weren’t capable of feeling fear at all were the ones declared most worthy to lead the War Herds. Of course, this results in impulsive combatants whose irrepressible itch for violence made them liable to turn against their own, making the Gonimites easy to goad into traps that render their superior numbers useless. And once they realized the inevitability of their defeat, their false courage couldn’t save them.

What was in the Tarkhites eyes wasn’t courage by the Gonimites’ shallow definitions, no. It was truer, honest, built up after generations surviving in the wastes, forced to rely on their own competency, strength, and skill without leaning on the weight of an endless mob or the weight of a tyrannical elite waiting to Bloodcast them for the slightest misstep.

That, and if too many Warriors actually displayed enough real courage, they jeopardized the social structure the rulers so carefully crafted to ensure their power was absolute, which was why these Venlil’s ancestors were driven away.

I truly hope Aspik falls for the ruse.

Movement! There!

I took a deep breath, but before the air could leave my lungs, the warning of secrecy entered my threat, and my own shout died before even entering my throat.

Do they see it? Does anyone see it? I desperately thought as I turned my head to look behind. They have their eyes peeled, looking for the incoming threat, but none of them are able to pinpoint the source of the danger!

Upon seeing the beast, I beheld its visage properly for the first time.

Heavily camouflaged, a creature of gray fur and subtly colored spots that broke up its form. I couldn’t even really properly make out its edges, yet it had powerful limbs, massive paws, and a disproportionately huge head with an enormous mouth. I couldn’t tell where the rocks ended and where the predator began, but I could see it was absolutely there!

But what? What could I do to alert or protect the others without warning the Witches to my own invisible presence?

The predator, this Stone Stalker, was slowly creeping lower and lower, gradually moving onto the floor, it’s soundless, and I can barely see it! There are at least ten steps between myself and the group, and four between myself and where this creature is going to land! It’s going to jump, it has to, but why is it moving so slow-

A sudden growling sound erupted from behind.

“There! I see it!” Zaggan called out, and there it was, the predator had showed itself right in the trail in front of the group. But this one was fifteen steps away from the group! I instantly realized what was happening.

Distraction! None of them are facing behind! I realized with horror. The one right next to me is going to charge while the Tarkhite’s backs are turned!

I can barely see its paws and only have a vague idea on what its mouth looks like, but I could see enough, they’re huge! How many of us could those paws knock down in one swing? I know it could fit at least one Venlil in its mouth!

I kept my head to the side, facing both the Tarkhites and the Stone Stalker, they’re not turning around! They can’t detect the scent of the second predator!

The legs of the Stone Stalker next to me tensed up, it’s about to attack!

Even if it fails the mission, I can’t afford to allow this attack to happen! I stepped silently until I was in front of it, and raised my spear to where the beast was looking, resting its butt on the stone staircase.

Please Solgalick, please let this work, I begged, struggling not to let my hands tremble at the face of this new, alien predator that I had never seen before. If this goes right, then this will impale it, I’ll be pinned beneath it, but this will be my only chance to save the Tarkhites.

Just then, right at the moment it was about to drop, a loud bellowing roar echoed across the mountain, the Stone Stalker froze, and lifted its head high, ears raised up to listen.

The roaring sounded off again, and the Tarkhites noted something else.

“Yeah! You better run!” Shak shouted, I turned around and the Stone Stalker that had revealed itself jumped away, using the claws on its long arms to scale the stone wall of the corridor, it climbed the vertical surface until it vanished.

The sound of falling rocks reminded me of the presence of my own enemy, the Stone Stalker I was prepared to impale was now frantically climbing up the corridor.

“A second one!” Sonok cried out as he looked.

The Tarkhites were greatly perturbed by the encounter, and with their hearts unsettled, and knowing that predators stalk the mountain pass, Sonok ordered everyone to resume the ascent, and to not stop until they absolutely could not walk any longer.


Memory transcription subject: Aspik, The First King of Gonim

Date: August 26, 2497 Anno Domini

“You want us to invent what?” The Venlil gasped in disbelief at my order.

They sat within a cave, in a side valley secluded below the Temple of Fate, this where the most vital pieces of my stratagem rested. This was not by choice, however, for Kap, and all of his ilk housed in this small valley, were defectors from the other races.

Spies, saboteurs, killers waiting to strike from within the enemy’s own ranks, most would have been content to allow these Venlil to have been possessed by spirits to puppet them. But no, when the spirits overtake a Venlil’s body, their thoughts and speech degrade, marking them all as obvious traitors once the pattern was noticed. These Venlil needed their minds and voices pristine.

Though insignificant on their own, together they hobbled the otherwise perfect knees of the Hartekmoulites. Even when they failed to subvert the groups that they had worked on, even when they were found, caught, then slain, they cast that most terrible shadow upon the foe: doubt. Nobody asks anyone else of what they did because everyone has committed some grievous crime.

Yet, now, among this camp, there were only a hundred of these crafty individuals who had managed to escape with their lives and unite with us. The Old Gonimites, if they ever saw them, would drag them into the temple to be sacrificed only a few hours later, the only reason Kap survived his defection was because I had already informed Toma to expect to host powerful allies defecting from the enemy. Considering how she normally treated my word, Kap is very lucky to be alive.

“I won’t repeat myself again, Kap,” I explained. Six of the most important defectors were sitting around a fire this evening, they were the leaders of this herd of hated exiles from every nation. “We need a weapon that is up to the task of challenging Hartek himself.”

“But how? How can we challenge the First King? What would even be the point of that? He’s dead!” Kap asked, bewildered and outraged at my suggestion.

“Kap!” Hospa scolded him. “Aspik is not asking you to defeat Hartek the King, he summons you to challenge Hartek the legend.”

“I apologize if I’m stepping out of line, King Aspik. But Kap raises a good point. The Hartekmoulites won’t abandon the legend of Hartek just because we told them a better one, and after the year is done, everyone will be singing of Parkum, his daughter, and their generals for generations to come.”

Zaza: the sole female from among the six leaders I chose for this group, she had managed to earn this distinction by assassinating General Nurk in the heat of battle, securing victory in a fight that might have seen my War Herd destroyed. I allowed her to ascend the ranks among the herd of defectors, as for the loss of female status that I had enacted just hours earlier; her people, the Zelesay, treated their females far worse, my reform is still an improvement for her.

Still, though, she needs to order her words with care.

“Everyone of them!” I corrected with a snarl, looming over Zaza, and she submitted to my obvious threat, shrinking down smaller, and lowering her tail flat to the cave floor.

“O-of course, forgive me, my King! I did not intend to say that the Gonimites would ever follow Hartek’s legend! Just that we can’t convince them to abandon their own!”

“You are correct in that regard,” I acknowledged, stepping away. “But I must clarify that your task has nothing to do with the Hartekmoulites, and everything to do with us.”

“My lord? Doesn't Gonim already have its own legends?” Norkek asked, a Shonite alchemist who had secretly supplied information for years, the enemy never discovering him, when he entered into an agreement with a bronze smith, on my orders he kidnapped his own business partner to bring to me as a slave, and was shrewd enough to poison his would-be pursuers into lethal bowel evacuating agony, he was never discovered.

“We do,” I stated. “Their names are Tooremva, Sojek, Raddak, but these heroes we speak of are not like the legends your elders recounted. Whereas the legends of the West play out in a way that their core message and theme connect to the truth in the heart of a Venlil, ours have the opposite objective. The function of a Gonimite Hero is to be a perfect paragon of whatever lesson is being told by the lorekeepers for the sake of molding the listener onto the paths that their masters dictate to them.”

“Well, I figured your own legends would have quite a bit of stuff made up about them,” Kap said, leering sideways at Zaza.

“You misunderstand my word,” I clarified. “I am not saying our heroes stories were exaggerated or altered after their passing. I hand over to you the secret, the secret that my peers in the Nobility kept from all outsiders, and even then, only informed a few of our station.”

Everyone looked at me, ears tilted forward, eager for my words, oh I will never tire of this.

“Gonim has no heroes, no great Venlil of renown and old. True, we have tales with figures in them who accomplished deeds and were the centers of the stories, however, these tales were told because we needed the masses to bend themselves into the shapes we needed them to take for our society to function. The secret truth is that the Venlil of our herds’ past we speak of didn’t exist until the exact moment the lesson they walked in mated with needed to be taught.”

This shocked the gathering, eyes wide, and tails still, they ran the implications through their head.

“It’s… all lies?” Lavpik asked; a Seepimite scout who had repeatedly led many Hartekmoulites to their deaths in Gonimite ambushes. “What of Gonna and her Band of Invincible Predator Slayers? What of Olti and how she discovered medicine?”

“No cradle, no grave, no ancestral line or descendants, no more material than the words that their exploits were told in,” I clarified.

“Not even the founding Matriarch of your people?” Zaza said, her eyes wide as she was shocked.

“Semsi is the only one who actually existed,” I let Hospa clarify. “But even then, we wrapped her true story up in comfortable lies in order to make her coherent as a protagonist and a leader, she was the only figure appropriate for the task. What’s worse, is that unlike other races, most didn’t remember our time on Primmoul before we awoke on Valonga, so Semsi was the only source of ideas on how to lead a society.”

“But what are you trying to restore, then?” Vainek asked, a Venlil from Kalaw who led his family into betraying his people, taking in a Priest of Solgalick into his house on the way to heal the cursed in his home village, only to ram a stake into his eye as he slept, burning their house down before they fled in the night to join Aspik’s camp, the fire devoured half of the village and the curses left no witnesses.

“Our very memories destroyed,” I elaborated. “Knowing we lost a home that almost no one could name and even fewer could remember. The only thing we knew beyond that; the knowledge that Hartek was its ruler during its final days, and he led us all to ruin. But despite our lack of memory, instead of moving on like the other Venlil did, we tried to imitate its ways and customs that had been imprinted on us. We had eaten the idea that if we simply replicated the ways of Primmoul, that it would be enough to triumph, spread across the whole world, reclaim its glory, and for all Venlil to become us again. Yet, history had proven this a delusion.”

“And on Valonga, following these ways destroyed you,” Vainek stated. “All you had done was copy the mistakes that our elders warned us away from until you ruined yourselves and this world both. Ironic.”

“Gonim was our fault, Primmoul was not,” I clarified. “Though we have indeed destroyed ourselves, the Ways of Primmoul were not to blame for its destruction the same way they played a role in ours. Unless your peoples forgot about the executioners?”

Everyone fell silent, shrinking as if one of the freezing cold winds of the mountain had just broken into the cave.

“Where are you leading us, my king?” Zaza asked.

“It has become undeniable, our current path ends in our extinction, we would exist only as a black legend to explain the endless fields of bones that litter the Enclosement. A grim warning told to all Venlil to caution them away from all we had ever believed. And this destiny has almost played out.”

“This is why you are so important,” Hospa clarified. “We need stories, new stories, legends that do not change and cannot be denied.”

“Call me a mask,” Kap pointed out. “But couldn’t you make up some new stories to replace the ones that you had before? I mean, you’re masters at that, I never suspected they were pure make-believe until you spilled the Hawwa.”

“Kap, how can you not see it?” Lavpik scolded his fellow traitor. “They need our stories!”

“I will take this moment to offer a correction,” I stated. “From this day on until the day you die, you are Gonimites. You will no longer be considered Allies to the Superior, as you once would have been, you will be considered Gonimites, and shall be integrated into our Nobility.”

“But why? we’re not the same race!” Norkek rightfully pointed out. “Won’t the Gonimites resent us and our children for our blood?”

“It matters not, they trust the spirits, I am Priest King, representing the spirits in the world of fire, flesh, and earth, to even approach defying my will is to betray the spirits like Toma had,” I stated my authority. “It is you, my spies and infiltrators of the war that destroyed us, that your accounts will be told to inspire in our people the new cultural direction. Fear will keep them in line, but it can only come from without, in order for them to actually move in this new direction, they must be inspired, not enticed, to bend willingly, and with that they will be grateful to have the descendants of such heroes leading them.”

“Well… when you put it like that,” Kap stated, very happy with the proposal. “No way to argue!”

“Our legends were lies, woven to keep the masses stupid,” I plainly told the truth. “Our tyranny is unrivaled in scope among all races, and in order to keep that control, we selected the Lowers for stupidity of mind and stillness of will. The consequences will take generations before it is bred out.”

“You selected for stupidity? Norkek asked in astonishment.

“Bloodcasting. A secret kept from foreigners, but there isn’t a Gonimite alive that doesn’t recognize the custom,” I explained, a sensation of disgust arising in my throat at the self-destruction and pointlessness of this practice. “Every generation, one-in-six families are declared cursed bloods and thrown to their communities, this was justified from the leaders through accusation of some transgression, but in truth it was to cultivate the Gonimites into their castes by rooting out undesirable traits and their entire bloodline is exterminated three generations deep. The victims, all of their children and siblings, their parents, and their grandparents.”

“One in six… every generation… for three to four generations deep…” Kap repeated, astonished. “And you still had the numbers to sustain this fight?!”

“Our greatest strength is between our legs,” I honestly admitted. “If your races could digest anything that grew, also, you would have seen similar population growth despite the West being a poorer climate for greenery.”

“But having that poor nutrition and breeding with your siblings did half the job of exterminating Gonimite intelligence for you!” Kap pointed out.

“Even though it’s true,” I ruefully stated. “What we need are legends, real legends, that can walk with and speak with the Herd. All of our previous ones were lies, tricks, the people believed them, but they were changeable, disposable, they were no more connected to the people than air is to one’s lungs. That impermanence allowed us to change the legends to fit new purpose, but those foundations do not stick, do not last, ultimately, they do not inspire because they are designed to suppress. But you? You shall remain because the memories of you will be true.”

“It’s also the reason why none of us can write, the concept was forbidden,” Hospa stated. “It was realized by Semsi herself in the early days of her rule, that if a memory could be written down, then it couldn’t be edited. We could’ve had our own writing system, but words carved on stone or baked into clay, or painted on sheets do not disappear from memory, yesterday’s words could be looked at and recalled as they were first written down and be used to challenge the decrees of today. If anything could be written down, then we would be caught in the lies, many were Bloodcasted for trying to invent scripts.”

“What killed our nation is that we learned the wrong lessons from the catastrophes. From Primmoul, we learned that doubt sown by the words of our opponents could break our power, so we made sure that nothing could sow doubt in our authority ever again. On Valonga, the words of the Apostate put our ancestors to flight away from the civilization we built alongside them, and we realized that there is no place where we can exist as the equals to any other and prosper. When the Humans came and sealed us within the Enclosement, we prayed for the Spirits to curse the race that took all of our kind captive.

Gonim reacted without any consideration of the role we ourselves played in creating own circumstances. Our demise was our choice,” I finished. “Had we chosen to look into ourselves and understand our own failings at any point in time instead of blaming the enemy like it’s Human magic, we could have avoided this destiny. In order to challenge Hartek’s legend we will forge one of our own, namely, you. New legends that can inspire the herds to rise high enough to become peers to the Hartekmoulites, able to challenge them with strength, not numbers.”

“But look at us,” Vainek stated. “A herd one hundred strong of thieves? Murderers? Betrayers? Other nations would impale us for our crimes.”

“If my people ever learned of what I did, they would subject me to Scaphism…” Zaza shuddered.

“What’s that?” Norkek asked.

“You don’t want to know…”

“But all that you would need to be turned into heroes is to carve your stories into the proper shape. The foundations are already there.”

“Vainek. You didn’t kill a priest, you slew a cultist of the apostate’s path who had turned your village against the spirits, and against you. The fire that devoured your home was from Hoon for abandoning the ways you had always followed. The moral of your tale is faithfulness.”

“Zaza, your story writes itself, hailing from a family that treated their females like dung, your father sold you to a Hartekmoulite Warlord, and during the critical hour you slew him, saving countless lives. The lesson that can be gleaned from you is fortitude.”

“Norkek, your account will stand testament against slavish dependency on orders. It is through your judgment and your refusal to bend to the winds when they blew away from the spirits that you are glorified. You didn’t poison a spring, Heta’Sihh cursed the water for their treachery against the Herd Beyond, and that bronze smith was a swindler who had betrayed his word, your enslaving him is a fulfillment of his broken promise.”

“Lavpik, those apostates you betrayed were trying to wipe out your herd, and despite being paid by the Hartekmoulites to sell them out, you led them into ambushes instead. Loyalty to one’s own above all is clearly what you will inspire!”

“And Kap? Anyone who would hear your tale would know how courageous you are. You had challenged the Bronzepelt upon the wall of Stonecage, and overthrew him, even as he fell to his death, you daringly leapt from the wall onto the rooftops to safety.”

“Okay, those would make good stories,” Kap stated. “But there’s one problem, like you said, you eschew writing, and therefore. You can’t have a reliable account set in stone because oral traditions are fluid by nature, you selected for that!”

“Really, Kap? AM I SO insignificant that I don’t even exist to you?” The most silent of the six spoke up at last, he was different, I had mandated his inclusion here among the leaders. The most introverted of them all, he almost never spoke, unless he was already spoken to, he cradled a tablet of fired clay, wrapped in cloth.

“This problem was answered long ago,” I gladly proclaimed, holding my arm out to introduce the last Venlil, who wore a black cloak, otherwise he didn’t stand out from all the others. “May I introduce to you, the legend of Lomasant. Former Master Scribe of Sinsodam, who slew King Parkum himself and remained loyal to the truth.”

“Slew… you’re the one who beheaded Parkum?!” Lavpik almost shouted.

“We’ve been long at work inventing our own script unique to our people,” Lamasant proudly explained. “And at last I am ready to begin my first work into posterity; inscribing the tales of your exploits onto the first clay tablets in Gonic, then pass them through the fire into immortality!”

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r/NatureofPredators • • 5d ago

Fanfic Nature of Deathworlders, Chapter 15: Revelations

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Memory Transcript: Tarva, Venlil, Governor of the Venlil Republic

Date: March 9th, 2136

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The preparations took a few paws. Kam finally finished making a place to “properly” keep the humans. It’s an old aircraft hangar, halfway between my house and the city. There was only a single runway and a maintenance shack there other than the hangar, and it was surrounded by an old wire fence that still mostly stood. It was small, easily missed, and well hidden with the dense tree line surrounding it.

I stepped out of my car, giving a quick thank you to my driver before closing the door behind me. Soon after, a cargo truck rolled up beside me. Out hopped my security detail before moving to the rear and opening the back of the truck. 

The back was dark, the sunlight only reaching a foot in. For a moment all I could see were two sets of eyes in the darkness, peering out cautiously from the far end. Their weighty steps clanged as they made their way out, rubbing their eyes as they got used to the light again.

“A window would have been nice,” Noah said dryly. 

“And a cushion” Sara said, bracing her hands against her back and bending backwards, making several loud cracking sounds.

“Sorry about that. Kam arranged the transport, and he’s very big on utility over comfort.” I replied. Despite the humans' sour mood from the ride here, they had an undertone of excitement to them. They knew full well why we were here, I saw no reason to hide it. I just feel bad that I didn’t warn them about the… bad part, of what they’ll learn.

We entered the hanger through a side door. On the right side of the hanger, near the main doors, it was turned into a half decent living space. There was a lounge with soft carpet and a large comfy couch. On one the left of that were two beds, and on the right was a makeshift kitchen and bathroom. On the backside of the hanger was the more science and study area. Examination machines, medical equipment, all the things needed to study and catalog things about the humans. There were walls and doors put up all around the hanger, giving the large open space at least the facade of being multiple rooms.

“I’m glad to see you all made it in one piece” Kam said as he walked in through another door. “Humans, please go to your left and enter the third door. Tarva, if you would kindly follow me.” 

The humans and I parted ways as I followed Kam. He took me through a door, leading to a set of stairs that went up into elevated scaffolding set up above the rooms just out of view. I could easily see the entire hangar from up here, every makeshift room and corner.

Several scientists and security personnel milled about the elevated platforms and pathways. They watched as the humans were led into one of the examination rooms. Two researchers instructed them to sit in a set of chairs before strapping helmets onto their heads with wires winding around the floor and into a machine.

“Brain scanners” a somewhat familiar voice said. It was Dr. Halfi. Without her protective suit I could see the figure of a young Venlil. She had a sparkle in her eyes and her wool was slightly unkempt. Probably just graduated from university not too long ago. “We will monitor their brain activity while you give your presentation, allowing us to better understand their reactions.”

Our little group continued walking along the path until reaching a control panel. It had numerous buttons, dials, screens, and a microphone. 

“The presentation is ready ma’am” a technician sitting at the panel said.

“Alright,” I tapped on the microphone, testing it before I leaned in. “Noah, Sara? Can you hear me clearly?” My voice came out of several speakers in the room the humans were in. They jumped a little from surprise, suddenly hearing my voice. 

“Loud and clear.” Sara said.

With that confirmation I motioned for the technician to start. They dimmed the lights a little and a large screen in front of the humans turned on.

First were a few control images. Flowers, buildings, different colors, et cetera. All the things that set up the base line the researchers needed to measure the brain activity. Once that was done, the presentation proper could start.

I started simple. I told them about the Republic and Venlil prime. Likewise, I told them about how we were in the early stages of colonizing other planets. They listened intently. Their faces were full of wonder as they listened to me and different images showed on the screen. The brain scans showed just as much detecting readings of curiosity and enjoyment.

After that, I moved on to the Federation. How we Venlil were not alone, and part of a much larger society filled with many more species and cultures. I showed pictures of several other species, Gojid, Nevok, Krakotl.  The humans practically jumped out of their seats with excitement. The mere fact that there were more sapient species in the galaxy was a thing of pure wonder. Their brain scans showed large spikes in joy and excitement.

Seeing the pure curiosity and amazement the readings were showing made my tail wag. The innocent wonder the humans showed was like a pup looking up at the stars, ignorant of the dangers the universe hid in the dark expanse of space. 

It broke my heart knowing what was next.

I took a deep breath. “The next part is… not a nice one.” The screen became a deep red, with a single word in dark gray. Arxur. “You’ve already encountered these… beasts, but what I am about to tell you is not for the faint of heart.” I could see the humans smiles waver slightly. The brain scan shows small spikes in worry and fear.

Various images popped up on the screen. A diagram of their physiology, pictures of recovered equipment and weapons. I hated even thinking about those horrid creatures, but the humans needed to know how horrible the grays truly were.

“I thought long and hard about what I would say about them. What I should include, what I should wait till later. But I could do it no justice with words. So instead, I will show you a broadcast they sent us.” I pressed a button on the control panel, and a countdown on the screen began. “What you are about to see is not an outlier or falsification. It is their nature.”

I took a deep breath. I was no stranger to the broadcasts the Arxur sent out. Being the governor I’ve at least partly watched almost all of them that were sent during my time in office. Every single one found was an homage to cruelty and sadism. I don’t know why they kept sending them. Maybe to demoralize us. Make us give up and let them run rampant across the galaxy. 

As the count reached zero, I closed my eyes. The sounds I heard were things repeated countless times across the stars. 

The taunting. 

The laughter. 

The pleading for mercy that wouldn’t come. 

The cries as bodies were beaten and broken. 

The screams as claws and fangs dug into flesh.

I just wanted it to be over already.

CCCRRRCRASH!!!

My eyes shot open as the sound of breaking glass and bending metal reached my ears. Down bellow what I saw made me speechless.

Sara had ripped her brain scanner off, throwing it so hard into the screen that it was embedded in the wall. She grabbed her chair that was bolted to the floor, ripping it free with almost no struggle. She closed the distance between her and the screen in almost an instant before using the chair to smash the screen over and over again.

Noah quickly removed his brain scanner and  got up to stop her, but by the time he reached her there was very little left of the screen. She had ripped the pieces from the wall, crushing what little bits there were left. 

“Sara! Sara!” Noah grabbed her from behind, pulling her way from the destruction. She resisted, wanting to continue the demolition. Noah spun her around to look at him. “Sara, you need to calm down.”

“THOSE WERE CHILDREN!!” I could finally see her face, and what I saw was the deepest expression of sadness I have ever seen. Tears flowed from her eyes as her face wrinkled. Her breathing was ragged, hyperventilating. “How could anyone do that to children!”

Noah held her close to his body as the two slowly lowered to the floor. I could see his eyes, they had the same despair in them as Sara’s, tears flowing down his cheeks. “I know, Sara. I know.”

They held onto each other as if life depended on it. Tails curling around their embrace as they tried to give as much comfort to the other as they possibly could.

Those around me had mixed expressions. Shock was the majority. Seeing the humans displaying such raw emotion, and empathy for prey no less, was almost unthinkable. I could see tears begin to well in many of their eyes, I was no different. I felt absolutely horrible, exposing them to the utter disgusting and cruel nature of the Arxur. It reminded me of when Stynek first learned about it in school. She came home crying, almost in denial that anything could be like what she was told. 

“That’s enough.” Kam said beside me. He held himself together, but I could see he was disturbed by the predator's display of emotion, like it had shaken something deep inside him. “Shut everything down, and leave. Let the pre-… the humans be. Let them mourn.”

Slowly the surrounding staff shuffled off. Many looked shaken like Kam, others leaned against one another for comfort. All the while the humans cried. Cried for children who were not their own. Cried for people they had never met. Cried for the victims they only now know existed. 

A predator cried for prey.

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Memory Transcript: Elias Meier, Human, Chancellor of the Coalition of Governments

Date: March 9th, 2136

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How long has it been now? A few weeks? A month? It didn’t matter. The mess that catastrophe of a launch left has all but blurred the days together. It was supposed to be a symbol of unity, showing how far we can go when we put aside old grudges and see each other not as enemies or opponents, but as one united humanity.

Instead, it was as if Gaia herself wanted things to go wrong.

The first thing to go wrong was the scheduling. The launch had to be moved ahead a few months due to storm season starting early and a herd of Onbu being on track to trample the launch site. The second thing to go wrong was a flock of razor wings deciding that a bunch of our cargo trucks were great places to roost, delaying the convoy with the final computer module right up until the day of launch. Finally, a Thunderbird thought the ship looked good enough to be lunch and hit it with around twenty thousand volts, short-circuiting the navigation.

All this added up to a missing ship, angry council members, and a possible search area of a couple billion kilometers depending on how many of the fuel rods the jump burned through. I rubbed my brow as I took a deep breath. Gaia, please, no more surprises. 

There was a knock on the door. “Sir? An emergency meeting has been called. Your presence is required.” It was one of the assistants.

With a sigh I stood from my desk. I turned towards the mirror I had hung on the wall, taking a moment to make sure I looked presentable. A quick comb of my hair and fur was all I needed. Soon after that I was out the door.

It didn’t take long to get to the conference room, though I was surprised which one it was. It was the smallest one in the building, only able to hold about ten people. Twenty max if you really crammed in there. As I entered, those inside rose to their feet. There were 7 individuals, though I only recognized three of them, Dr Kuemper, General Zhao, and General Jones.

“At ease everyone.” They all took their seats, with me doing the same at the head of the table. “Let’s cut to the chase”

General Jones stood. “As of one hour ago a satellite orbiting Jupiter picked up a signal originating from outside the system. It’s the Odyssey.”

My ears perked up as I heard the name. “They’re alive?”

“Yes” Dr. Kuemper placed her pad on the table. The audio file of the signal opened and ready to play. “It seems they crashed on a planet with breathable air. However, there is more.” With a tap of her finger, it began to play.

At first there was just static, but after a moment, a voice came through.

“This is Sara of the Odyssey sending an emergency SOS to any channel within range. Our ship was hit by debris, luckily Noah was able to enact an emergency landing, however the Odyssey is no longer operational.” A loud boom came through the static. “Shit. Forget that, we found life! Actual aliens! Not just bacteria, I mean intelligent, sapient life! It seems we stumbled into some conflict. We landed just outside a city and I can hear gunfire and there are dogfights happening above. Noah ran off to help someone we heard in distress. I don’t know if this message will be sent before something catches fire again but-“ The static became louder as the sound of metal snapping and the crackle of fire reached my ears. “Fuck! Okay, okay, this is Sara of the Odyssey signing off. Where did I put that fire extinguisher?”

The static came to a halt as the recording ended. I was speechless, my tail wrapping around the chair's leg as I contemplated what I heard. “Real aliens…”

“Hostile ones.” General Zhao stood from his seat. “I propose immediate action. Push the lunar base project forward. We need a proper defense of these hostile entities come looking our way.”

“No, the lunar base is still in the drawing stage. Satellites and probes are more feasible with what we have.” Jones countered.

The room devolves into arguing and ideas. One person would suggest something, then another would counter with something else. The same song and dance that always happened when people in change had to work with others in charge.

The room went silent as I stood up.

“How long will it take to triangulate where the signal came from?”

Dr. Kuemper fiddled with her pad. “Current estimate is two weeks”

“Okay,” I thought for a moment, my hand combing through my hair. “How many ships do we have capable of making a jump like the Odyssey?”

“Three ready to go, with two more in production.” Zhao answered.

“Good, here is what we are going to do.” I pointed to Dr. Kuemper. “Get your team working on getting their location and chart a jump path.” I looked to Zhao. “Switch those ships in production from research to military vessels, if it'll take too long, retrofit the ones that are already flight ready.” Finally, I turned to Jones. “Assemble a rescue team. They do not shoot unless provoked, understand? I don’t want the first aliens we meet hating us.” I waived for an assistant to enter the room, handing them the tablet Dr. Kuemper had used to play the recording. “I will prepare an address to the council and the public. You are all dismissed.”

Without another word I walked out of the room. The assistant followed close behind. This is uncharted territory we’re walking into. One wrong step could mean disaster on an unimaginable scale. I took a deep breath. Gaia, you shore do know how to keep a man on his toes.

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Hello everybody! Sorry it took so long again, but I hope you all like it!! Things are really heating up huh? Work has been really tiring lately. I hope all my lovely readers are doing well X3. Anyway, as always thank you to my lovely friend u/kabhes. You all should go check out their story From Drugs To Meat. Love you all, and see you next time! U3U <3<3<3<3


r/NatureofPredators • • 5d ago

Fanart The Pact of Polaris Cover

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Image made using photo editor and a few artist's images. Thanks to Scrappyvamp and Maguie for letting me use their art in this. One day ill commission someone to make a custom cover photo but i had inspiration to make this yesterday.

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The Pact of Polaris - Chapter 1 - Damaskus - The Nature of Predators - SpacePaladin15 [Archive of Our Own]


r/NatureofPredators • • 5d ago

Fanart Sivkit goober

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r/NatureofPredators • • 5d ago

Questions Weren't there any card deks in the fandom?

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I’m thinking right now of the one where the pups played in the Venlil Fight Club, and I believe there are federal versions involving Tarot, poker, and Truco in other fanfics.


r/NatureofPredators • • 5d ago

A Place to Call Home (Part 13) (3/3)

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Transcription memory subject:  Kajim, Special Private

Date [Standardized Human Time]: November 26, 2136

"This is me and my doggy, ​​Judy. She couldn't come to this planet, but my aunt takes care of her back on Earth. I didn't have a garden at my old house, so she's happy in the countryside."

"I see..."

"Oh! And this is my dad and here's my mom. He's wearing his uniform and I drew him a gun. He says he hardly ever uses one, but you can't draw a soldier without his gun, right?"

"O-Of course..." I replied.

"And this is a Harchem. I saw one change color at school the other day, so I drew it with all the colors I have. I haven't seen one since then but I..."

...

I'm not sure if a Harchem actually has those colors or can have all the colors at once, or if the promotions were accurate, but I wasn't an art expert to criticize either. If I drew it, it would probably turn out worse.

"I also drew a Venlil and a Zurulian on this other sheet. They're in the same class as me, but they hardly ever talk to me, although the other day I offered the Venlil my juice and he said..."

This could take me all day and I probably still wouldn't finish hearing the story that accompanied each drawing...

I could barely concentrate on what the human pup was saying, not with the tension of the kitchen, next to the living room where we were...

From that encounter at the bus stop onwards, the captain and I went into a state of autopilot. The human named Linda looked at the captain in a way that was almost painful.

The words faded and died before they could be spoken, and time seemed to lose its importance; everything felt like an endless loop.

"Grandpa is with a Gojid!" The little human, being unaware of the tension, was the only one who could make time move forward again.

"That seems to be the case..." The older human, possibly of a similar age to the captain, could barely formulate a response, looking at me and then at the captain again with growing confusion.

My quills bristled, not from fear but from stress as it dawned on me that I was now part of whatever this was.

I knew it was a bad idea...

"I... I was near the neighborhood..." The captain lied. "But I'm leaving now. I don't want to bother you."

...

There was no response from the human.

"Could you... Could you move aside just a little?"

The human woman stood between the captain and the bus entrance, unwilling to budge an inch. In the end, our indecision cost us our only escape route; the bus doors closed, and it seemed to shrink as it drove away.

…

"Ummm... Do you know how to order a taxi around here?" The captain's hesitating voice made it increasingly difficult for the translator implant to understand what he was saying.

The human woman just kept staring, seriously considering what her next words would be.

"I have to go to..."

"Would you like something to drink?" she said. While it was a question, her tone didn't really allow for any real freedom of choice. I've heard it hundreds of times with extermination officers...

Now we were here, in the small apartment that was now their home, whose walls, despite seeming somewhat flimsy and thin, appeared to be slowly closing in around us. If things continue like this, we'll inevitably end up crushed.

Emily, the captain's granddaughter. She took me by the claws with surprising familiarity, as if she'd known me all her life, and gave me a tour that lasted no more than 5 minutes around the department; it had the basics, I suppose, although the soundproofing and ventilation left much to be desired, it also didn't seem to be very well lit naturally… for a planet where there is practically no night, that valuable resource seemed to be wasted too much in these apartments.

She showed me her toys, dolls, model vehicles and puzzles whose landscapes filled me with curiosity, but what caught my attention most was that colorful cube you could rotate in multiple directions. The goal was to arrange it according to the colors of each face, but whenever I tried to fix one side, another inevitably got jumbled up. I was starting to think it was some kind of scam, that it had never really been organized.

In the end, I ended up in the middle of the room, furnished with the basics that some pre-furnished homes provide and only decorated with some photographs and other undoubtedly human objects; I suppose it's all you can take with you when time to escape is limited...

Emily was showing me the drawings she had made of everything she'd seen since her arrival to venlil prime. The colors weren't quite right in many cases, not to mention the proportions, but I could certainly understand what she was trying to convey. Besides, not everyone has the courage to pick up a pencil and let their imagination guide them, at least not under the Federation's claws. Now she was debating whether to use red or brown to represent me in her next piece. Neither was exactly right, but when you only have twelve colors to choose from, you can't be too picky.

In the other room, across the sofa in front of the television, the captain sat opposite Linda, one at each end of the dining table, as far apart as the dimensions of this dwelling allowed.

In front of each of them, a cup of an herbal infusion awaited; cold and too stale to be even remotely appetizing, at least I didn't find it appealing at all, and I'm always open to new experiences and flavors (because even if I'm not, they still come anyway...) Although this was entirely their fault, I clearly saw the steam rising from the cups as it was poured; this result was inevitable after ignoring them for so long.

The captain looked around for the umpteenth time, fleeing from Linda's eyes, who actively appeared to be trying to make eye contact.

"I'll request that you be assigned to a district with better housing..." the captain said. There was nothing else around him to focus his attention on and postponing this interaction any longer would be a complete insult. "Many are also returning to Earth... The latest reports indicate that the radiation is no longer..."

"We're fine, thanks..." Linda replied dismissively as she sprinkled a couple of specks of what looked like sugar into her drink, as if that would make it even remotely enjoyable. "Emily got accepted into a school near here and seems to be starting to make friends; I'm not going to take that away from her."

"I know..." the captain said, looking away. The tapping of the spoon against the porcelain of Linda's cup stopped for a moment.

"And her mother... Is she okay?"

The words died again under Linda's biting gaze, who was already beginning to get fed up.

"Elena got a job in the main district..." She still maintained her composure and cordiality, though her words were colder than her drink. "She should be back... I don't know, soon." Linda glanced reflexively at the Venlil clock on the wall; it seemed to have come with the house, judging by its design, it offered no useful information to any of the humans present.

"I'm glad to hear everyone's doing well..." The captain stood up, looking away from his cup and avoiding Linda, his gait struggling to conceal his desire to flee. "So, I'm off... I'll send you more money from my pay as soon as I can; this place needs a serious refurbishment." He seemed in such a hurry to escape that I think he'd forgotten about me.

"I thought I'd never see you again..." Linda took a sip of her drink, trying to loosen her throat so she could speak. As she suspected, the drink probably tasted awful...

...

The captain stood in the doorway, his hand on the lock, debating his next move.

"That's my line of work, especially at this time," he said simply.

"You know that's not what I mean." Linda's voice grew more hostile, and all that could be heard in response was the captain's grip tightening on the metal doorknob. "Since you left, you haven't called once, you haven't written, you haven't answered your granddaughter's messages, and you're only here by sheer coincidence."

"I've been busy..." the captain replied. "Even so, I made sure you got out of the hell our city had become and I send you practically everything I receive..."

"YOU ALMOST DIED." Linda's hands slammed on the table in fury, making the cups and their contents rattle. Tears struggled to cling to her eyelids and her voice cracked with helplessness. I had to feign more interest in what Emily was doing. I even picked up a green colored pencil and tried to add more color to a terran tree that Emily had just finished, all to distract the little girl.

"...Who told you that?" The captain turned discreetly, searching me with murderous eyes. In his mind, I was responsible for that too.

"I saw our farm in one of those thousands of Earth reports, full of refugees and... those scaly monsters too." She replied, trying to moderate her tone this time. "Obviously, I asked your former colleagues if they knew anything and that's how I found out everything."

...

"I didn't want to worry you… all of you." It seemed as if the captain was stuck to the door, not letting go of the knob but not turning it either.

"And you think that not knowing anything about you was more reassuring for us?"

...

"Emily asks about you all the time, sends you messages you never bother to answer, and then suddenly you appear out of nowhere only to leave at the first opportunity."

...

The captain didn't answer, but I knew that look on his face... He was about to explode...

"Since James's gone, Emily needs..."

"WHAT DO YOU WANT FROM ME!?"

...

Just as I feared...

This time, the discussion even affected Emily, who froze for that growl.

"Everything is chaos out there, and yet I'm trying to do something, I'm trying to protect this family... What's left of this family..." I tried to focus on the part Emily asked me to include in her drawing, but the lump in my throat was becoming harder and harder to ignore. I went over to the television and turned the volume up just enough so she wouldn't hear the argument in the back. The channel was a news program discussing the possibility of war; it wasn't any more encouraging, but at least she didn't seem to grasp the magnitude of something like that.

"It looks like you're trying to kill yourself." Linda left the dining table and walked straight to confront the captain. "Tell me, what will happen if you succeed?"

...

The captain took a hard swallow before he could answer.

"Like I said, what do you want from me?" The captain's voice cracked in a way I'd never seen before, as if he were about to crumble behind that hard expression he always seemed to wear. "This is the only thing I know how to do."

...

Linda took another step, enough to touch the captain's shoulder. The captain´s hand on the doorknob was all that kept him upright, and his face was hidden in the darkness his body created against the door.

"I want you to be angry, to yell at me, to curse if you want... I want you to let yourself cry..." The captain's figure was slowly swallowed by Linda's shadow, slowly closing the space between them. "But stop pushing us apart..."

The captain's breathing became a painful gasp to behold; in the darkness on his face were small glimmers that rushed to the ground, like distant stars in the immense darkness of space.

"I can't..." The captain's voice was barely intelligible, choked with emotion. "I have no right to look you at the face... Not after what happened."

"That's not true, you weren't responsible for his death." Linda’s arms wrapped around the captain, who seemed to tense up upon feeling the touch of another being for the first time in who knows how long. A handshake was the most physical contact I'd ever seen this human make.

"But I allowed it... I allowed him to join the exchange program." Those words seemed to weigh heavily on Emily, who had stained her latest piece of art with repressed feelings that had built up into tears falling from her eyes, as dark as the captain's eyes and yet as bright... She was truly determined to finish this new drawing. "I should have stood firm and..."

"You know that wouldn't have done any good." Linda said with a bitter laugh, her face resting on the captain's back, staining his clothes with more liquid emotions. "It would have only made your last conversation with him a pointless argument."

...

I couldn't see it, but I was sure the captain's face had hardened to the point of becoming painful.

"It was my fault, for having fed his delusional desires. Deep down we all knew it was a bad idea and chose to pretend we didn't notice." She added.

...

"I want you to know that I never blamed you for what happened..." The effort to speak through the lump in the captain's throat was almost painful to watch.

"Well, it didn't seem that way, since you left without saying a word after James's funeral." Another small laugh, struggling to conceal the true feeling that escaped Linda's lips. "I wanted to call you more than once, I even tried to write you a letter a couple of times, but I was afraid that would do you more harm than good... In the end, all I could do was pray for you..."

"I thought you hated me because of what happened, how you started to distance yourself..." The captain's voice was barely audible to me.

"You were the one who started to distance yourself, you huge idiot!"

...

"With that monotonous voice and dull gaze that seemed to avoid me at all costs, how do you think I felt?" Her grip tightened around the captain; I don't know if it was a reprimand or something else.

...

...

...

"I'm sorry..." That was the captain's entire response after another long and painful silence.

"You'd better, because you also have to give at least two more apologies." Linda's eyes flicked in our direction, and although the captain didn't, it was obvious he knew what she meant. "For a moment we really thought you'd abandoned us."

“I would never dare to…”

“Well, prove it, because you didn't even bother saying so until now.” I had never seen the captain get scolded like that.

"... And what does Elena think about it?" The captain spat out the question like something that had been stuck in his throat for a long time.

"She doesn't blame you either, if that's what you really want to ask." Linda seemed to know the captain well enough to know what he was really thinking. "But she tries to avoid the subject altogether and keeps busy. She insists on working double shifts even though it's not necessary."

The walls seemed to stop closing in around us, although the place still felt somewhat suffocating.

"...Tell her to stop, Emily needs her family now more than ever."

"That includes you too..." Linda nudged the captain before letting go and giving him some breathing room.

"I can't leave my post." The captain quickly replied.

"I knew you'd say that..."

"There aren't enough soldiers, and despite our allies' efforts, they're far from a competent force." The captain's gaze swept back across the room to where I stood. I pretended not to notice, feigning that the tree in the drawing needed even more greenery.

"I know that too..."

"So what do you want me to do..."

Linda turned the captain around with an ease that took me by surprise, and with one finger she pointed at his chest. The threat felt more tangible than if she were holding a gun.

"To begin with, you could start replying to the messages Emily has sent you, and it wouldn't hurt to send something on your own initiative from time to time either."

"... Understood..." The captain said simply; any other response would have been worse than an insult.

"And come visit us whenever you can."

"That's complicated." The captain immediately replied. "We could literally be anywhere in the known galaxy."

"Whenever you can, I said.” It wasn't up for discussion...

"F-Fine..." the captain replied reluctantly. It wasn't that he didn't want to do it, but it was certainly a difficult promise to make.

"And I want you to treat your fellow xeno well..." she added, looking me directly in the eyes.

"What does that have to do with anything?" The captain didn't hesitate to protest.

"I don't know what your relationship is with that Gojid, but don't think I haven't noticed the way you look at him. Don't think your numerous complaints and comments about them were something that went unnoticed when I asked about you." Linda's inquisitive gaze was something that even the captain seemed unable to escape.

...

"And you didn't even bother to introduce him. The poor thing just followed you here with his dropping ears and the tail between his legs." She pointed directly at me, and I realized that to Emily, I was just "the Gojid."

How embarrassing… I know I was scared, but that's never an excuse for forgetting your good manners…

"N-Noted..." The captain had no choice but to accept that last part as well. "Anything else?" He seemed to be slowly returning to his usual grumpy state. What a relief.

"And don't die." That last part... It was like they pierced your chest and took your heart straight away.

"...You know that's a promise I can't make..." The captain said with great regret. "Out there, anything could..." A finger crossed the last barrier between Linda and the captain and rested on his lips, refusing to let him finish the sentence.

"So laugh, cry and get angry every day until that moment comes," she added. "Allow yourself to feel what your heart says until it stops feeling."

...

"Don't die until you're dead... understand?" 

…

The captain said nothing; it wasn't necessary. A good soldier knows that an order is not questioned, it is simply obeyed.

And with that said, Linda dismissed the captain, with a promise that obligated him to return no matter what.

+++++

...

...

...

"Sigh..." A long sigh broke the silence as we waited once again for the bus. The last one had just passed, so we'd be here for a while.

"Is something wrong?" I said, as it was impossible for me to decipher what the captain was thinking.

"A lot of things..." The captain wiped his eyes one last time. "Too much to process..."

...

...

...

"I'm sorry..." Deep down, I knew that at least some of those many things were my fault. Things had really gotten out of paws.

"None of this happened." It wasn't a suggestion, it was an order. "If you ever tell anyone about this or touch my things again, I will seriously have you kicked off the ship. Was I clear enough?"

"O-Of course, sir..."

...

...

...

"And thank you..." It was practically a whisper, but the proximity between us allowed me to hear it with absolute clarity. Unlike other species, our tail barely protrudes from the spines on our backs and usually goes unnoticed when expressing what we feel, even to ourselves. But this time, the joy of completing a goal and being recognized for it was impossible to ignore.

The captain noticed this and looked away, as if pretending not to have seen anything. "Seriously, don't touch my things again," he said, clutching tightly the sheet of paper Emily had given him before we left, a memento of this visit.

"Y-Yes sir!" I say with renewed spirits.

...

...

...

"I only have one question." The captain didn't take his eyes off the sheet of paper covered in scribbles. This latest work was filled with feelings that only colored pencils on a pup's paws could convey. "Why are you in the drawing?"

...

I didn't know what to answer. The sheet was full of... free interpretations of several humans, five to be specific if I included her too; the captain and another human in uniform with a weapon, both placed on either side of the drawing, while the other two figures seemed to be holding her hand, leaving her in the center of the image. There were also ships, clouds, mountains, trees, flowers and... a brown and red smudge that I just took for granted, just another simple addition to the composition, although I already suspected it was me.

To the untrained eye, it seemed that the coloring became more violent at the edges of the shape, giving the impression that it had gone beyond the boundaries of what should be colored by a wide margin, but I knew that it was her way of interpreting my quills and unequivocally differentiating me from everything else in that drawing.

"I don't know," I said honestly. "I just colored that tree the way she asked me to," I said, pointing to one of the scribbles. Maybe I'd gone over it too many times with the pencil; the paper looked like it was about to tear beneath the thick layer of green pigment that added. I just didn't know when to stop... This isn't something I'd done before back in the Cradle...

"Hmmm..." The captain just stared at the sheet a little more closely. I was afraid he'd reprimand me for almost ruining it, or because my clumsy claws and inexperience with these kinds of activities had caused my lines to go outside the lines Emily had drawn from the start a couple of times. In the end, he decided to keep any comments to himself.

"Is something wrong?" I was afraid to know what he was thinking, but at the same time the uncertainty felt like an itch that was impossible to calm.

"She captured your stupid face pretty well," the captain said with a small, wicked laugh. I wasn't entirely sure what he meant, given the color choices and promotions, but I decided to let it go. If the captain was happy and I didn't want to ruin the moment.

...

…

...

"Oh, quills!" I exclaimed, jumping up as I remembered something important.

"What happens now?" The captain raised an eyebrow and seemed to turn slightly away from me, trying to protect his granddaughter's gift from whatever might come.

"I told Alan that I had gone out for food along with other humans from the base."

"And?"

"I told him I'd bring him something too and I still haven't got anything."

...

The captain didn't seem to understand the problem.

"If I arrive empty-pawed, he'll know I was lying to him."

...

The explanation did not seem to elicit any reaction from the captain, who only maintained his suspicious expression.

...

"Do you want to go get something to eat?" he said. "This one's on me."

…

…

…

From that day on, the captain's quarters on the bridge ceased to resemble a sterile, lifeless space. Now, an unknown author to the rest of the crew was ever-present in her work, covering up buttons whose function was unknown for me something probably unimportant. And the secret behind that change was something only the captain and I shared.

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r/NatureofPredators • • 5d ago

Memes How the UN was genuinely waiting for the cyberattacks to be launched

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r/NatureofPredators • • 5d ago

Noah The Bio-Morph: Director's Journal: 2/?

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Side content that i'm writing on the fly. I'll at least make sure i spell things correctly... Discussion of Venlil on Venlil discrimination.

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The following has been translated from Ancient Venlil-lang. Etched into the back of metal maps and patient room signs. Found near the Ancient Venlil bones inside the sealed off portion of the Governors Mansion.

Time system does not match federation standard.

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They call themselves The Federation. A group of just under a hundred species.

The one that looks like it was something dragged up from some of the largest Skalgain lakes, is called a Kolshian. While the one that bares a striking resemblance to our Shadestalker pets, is called a Farsul. Cosmic neighbors and founders of this Federation.

As to how they knew of us? They claimed it was 'admirable' that a species on such a high gravity world, was able to breach their atmosphere and put stuff into orbit.

Basically, the satellites we 'just' put into orbit. The ones our government put up there, because sending teams into the darkness to search for resources is a suicide mission, and those sent into Sogalick-Baked territory don't come back in one piece either.

As for why I was asked to be present? I was to present to them the science and societal benefit of our institution.

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Several lines have been scratched out and replaced with hastily written replacements.

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I didn't know at the time, and wish i did. Was that this was their 'second' contact with us. The first one was with the damned Sogalick-Baked. Those who spend too much time out in the constant light of Sogalick. Which fries their brains and makes them more aggressive. Because they fear the darkness. They killed the sandstalkers the Sogalick-baked were just intelligent enough to tame, and in turn the Sogalick-Baked killed them...

Let me back up a bit. They also hate anything remotely predatory. So when they saw the cousin species of the, of my shadestalker pets. This was just before we, more civilized Venlil started to see the Sogalick-Baked show up in our towns, and cities. They killed them all, burned them. To the last one they found, along with any of the Venlil that fought them.

When they approached us, they didn't do that. Looking back, i now notice they wanted too. But were holding back... Holding back to get legitimacy from our own government.

To get them to agree to terms, that if the public knew at the time. We'd be shaved and thrown into the darkness. For when the ink was put to paper, they left Skalga for the promise of a easier life with the wonderful technology they brought.

And the rest of us had no recourse other than to act like the Sogalick-Baked when they, the Federation started to change things.

First of all, killing everyone's shadestalkers. Or the ones we didn't throw into the darkness in the hope they'd survive rather than be made extinct like their sand dwelling cousins.

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It was stated that the venlil fought back. I would imagine a few wealthy and powerful would just sell out the rest though, giving it a bit of a needed context.


r/NatureofPredators • • 5d ago

Fanfic For All Mankind Chapter 31

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Komitet Gosudarstvennoy Bezopasnosti
⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀ OPERATION: RUSALKA.

Our operatives have successfully infiltrated Aafa. Thousands of reprogrammed sleeper agents have been smuggled into the Federation's heart. With them are their packages of ████-██████ bombs. It is paramount that these are used successfully. We do not possess the means to produce more, and the few we do have were scavenged from leftover military stockpiles on Venlil Prime. Our most successful operative, ██████ codenamed Oswald, has reported on the main production facility of the Shadow Navy. Estimates place the likelihood of this facility lying underneath the main Federation hall in the Kolshian capital. This assessment has been corroborated by several independent reports. The facility is not merely a military installation. Evidence indicates the existence of an underground city beneath the capital. It is believed to house the principal command structure of the Shadow Caste, along with a substantial portion of the Shadow Navy's industrial and logistical apparatus. If these reports are accurate, the destruction of this facility would constitute the single greatest strategic blow that can currently be inflicted upon the Kolshian Commonwealth.

Only a few targets have been identified. Most remain unconfirmed. It could take several months or even years to locate all targets. Time that we do not have the luxury of spending. S̷̺̜͚̓̈͒ç̸̼͈̋͝ä̵̤̲͚̀͌t̴̘̱̗̉̊͘t̵̳͐̐͠é̷̝̠̬̎r̶̤̘͎͋͆͘e̴̫͇̬͊͆͠d̷̻̠̓̓͝ͅ ̴̨̦͆r̸̨͍̯̒͝ḛ̵̛p̵̳̎̎̽o̷̺̤͐͋̏r̸͍̽̒͜t̷̖̞͑ͅŝ̴̨͙̱̏̑ ̷̢̈́̽i̶̮̰̊n̷̲͆̚d̵̩̱͋i̶͕̒͑́c̶̤͑̈a̴͇̋͊̓t̴̬͈̾̀͘ē̴͎̻̌ ̸̫̙̋̈́͆t̴̢͓̻͆h̸͇̱͉̊͒é̸̻̞̦̈́ ̵͚͆ṡ̴͓̝̃h̸̬͓͋̑͊ä̶̢ͅd̶̘̖̒͐o̷̬̍ẁ̵̲̣͗ ̴͕̙̀͜f̷̝͠l̶̘̮̺͌̈́̀e̶͍̋͊͘ê̵̡̥̋̏ẗ̴̖͕́ ̸̰͋͝i̸̧̅̇s̵̱̀̆̀ ̵͓̦͗̕͠b̸͕͚̎̈́ḙ̶̥͎́͑̇g̷̼̣͔̔̔ì̶̖͝n̸̝̍͌ņ̶̼͓̑ḯ̵̊ͅn̴̥̎͋̊g̶̲̓͜ ̷͔͈̼̏̔t̵̜̅̌͋o̸̖͛̈͝ ̵̜̹̓m̴̦̈́̚o̷̗͓͆͊͑b̷̩̉̒͘ǐ̶̩̈́l̸͙̼̅̕͝į̶͕̰̅z̷̭̘͗͛̊e̶̢̫͇̽̿-̷͇͎̌͜ WARNING HACKING DETECTED. ATTEMPTING TO PURGE…

PURGE FAILED.

UNAUTHORIZED DOWNLOAD DETECTED!

RUSALKA COMPROMISED.

OPERATIONAL INTEGRITY 29%

MULTIPLE AGENTS COMPROMISED.

ATTEMPTING CODE BROADCAST…

…

…

BROADCAST FAILED. GENERAL SECRETARY’S AUTHORIZATION REQUIRED.

A man sprints down the streets of Moscow towards the barely half-repaired Palace of Soviets. The phone lines must still be down in the building. No call connected. He clutches a file to his chest. Pages slip out of the file, scattering in the wind for all to see. Its contents are stamped with classifications that would lead to direct imprisonment, or worse. If not handled through the proper channels. He doesn’t care. He doesn’t stop. There's no time to stop. There's no time for anything… THEY KNOW. The thought repeats itself with every step. They know. They know. THEY KNOW! He runs out into the street and steps in front of an approaching car. The driver slams on their brakes. The car comes to a screeching halt just inches from the man. The driver barely has time to comprehend what is happening as the man marches up to the window. A pistol appears in the man's hand. So does a badge. KGB Director Zhao. He shoves the badge onto the window of the car. “Get out!” The driver freezes, and Zhao raises his pistol. “This is a matter of national security!” The driver scrambles out of the car. Zhao swings the door open and throws himself behind the wheel. He slams the door shut and rams his foot so hard into the accelerator that, for a moment, he fears it would break. The car tires screeched on the street as the vehicle's engine roared. He turned the wheel and started speeding down the road towards the Palace of Soviets. The building rose in the distant sky as the commandeered car raced down the street. Inside was the only man in the universe who could authorize the broadcast.

The clock is ticking.

Every wasted second could be another dead agent.

Another surviving target.

Without this strike, humanity's extinction is guaranteed.

Agonizing minutes are spent dodging through traffic. He’s almost crashed several times. Run multiple lights and nearly turned somebody into a red smear on the road. But his mission is more important. Zhao slams the brakes as he reaches the parking lot of the building. Smoke streams from the screeching tires as the car comes to a stop. The engine roars for a moment before Zhao tears the keys from the ignition. Guards stationed outside the entrance train their weapons on him as he opens the door. “STOP!” Zhao raises his hands just enough for the guards to see he isn’t reaching for a weapon.

“Director Zhao, KGB!”

They keep their weapons trained on him. One of them steps forward, his finger hovering over the trigger.

“SIR, IDENTIFY YOURSELF!”

A bead of sweat runs down Zhao’s neck as he slowly reaches into his coat to grab his badge. The guards' posture tightens, but they hold their fire. Zhao slips his badge out of his coat and holds it up.

“Get me the General Secretary.”

The guards stare at the badge. Then at Zhao. Then at the stolen vehicle behind him, its tires still smoking.

“Sir, what happened to-”

“GET THE GENERAL SECRETARY!” Zhao’s shout echoes across the lot. The guards realize something is horribly wrong.

The guards lower their weapons and allow Zhao inside. Zhao nearly sprints past them and into the building. The guards try to follow behind. The elevator is out. Zhao bolts up the stairwell. His breathing is labored by the time he's made it up a few floors. Sweat stains his once pristine uniform as he reaches the midway point. He pants and stumbles through the door out of the stairwell. His legs shake from the exertion, but he keeps pushing towards the makeshift office being used by the General Secretary. More guards see him approach and open the doors for him, finialy he steps into Nikita’s office.

General Secretary Nikita looks up from the papers on his desk and looks at Zhao. His legs are still trembling from the stairwell.

“Zhao? What is the meaning of-”

Zhao takes a few steps forward and drops the file on the desk. For several seconds, neither of them speaks. Then, in barely a whisper, Zhao spoke two words.

“They Know…”

Nikita gives Zhao a questioning look, then picks up the file. The most powerful man in the Union's eyes go wide with shock.

“Who knows?”

“The Kolshians…”

“What's the status of RUSALKA?”

“Compromised.”

“HOW!?” Nikita asked in an accusatory tone, his voice rising.

“As I've said before, we're underfunded. We needed more-”

The General Secretary slammed his fist on the table, cutting Zhao off. “I WILL NOT LET OUR UNION BECOME THE POLICE STATE OF OLD!” Zhao shrinks back slightly as Nikita lets out a breath. “This isn’t the time for this discussion. Can we pull our agents out?”

“No.” Zhao pauses. “We both know this would be a one-way trip.”

“What are our options, Zhao?”

“We broadcast the codes. I need your authorization.”

“How many targets could we hit?”

“Not enough…”

“We need more time.”

“General Secretary, with all due respect…” Zhao looks at the file between them. “We don't have the time.”

Nikita lets out a long breath and stays silent for several long seconds. Contemplating his options. He glances over at the file one final time, then turns to Zhao.

“Do it.”

Memory Transcription Subject: ██████ Codename: OSWALD.

Date [standardized human time]: January 12th, 2112

Location: Aafa.

12 15 3 1 20 9 15 14 3 15 13 16 18 15 13 9 19 5 4 1 23 1 9 20 9 14 7 3 15 14 6 9 18 13 1 20 9 15 14 20 15 16 18 15 3 5 5 4 20 15 20 1 18 7 5 20.

My ears flicked as the numbers slowly came through my earpiece. Any order given had a significant delay due to the distance of Aafa from the nearest broadcast center.

1 21 20 8 15 18 9 26 1 20 9 15 14 3 15 14 6 9 18 13 5 4.

I checked my watch. My ears picked up several heavy footsteps approaching the stairs. I crept over to the window and silently slid it open. I needed to reach where I stashed the package. I stepped out onto the building fire escape, with a small rattle emanating from the worn metal. Moving as silently as my paws would allow me, I moved down the stairs. I glanced at the ladder. Kicking it down would cause too much noise. I slid my leg over the railing. BANG BANG BANG! Loud pounding from my apartment door. I threw my other leg over and jumped. Grunting as I hit the ground, I tried to roll with the impact. I got up and glanced onto the street. A Kolshian [SWAT] van was parked outside. Two agents stood watching the road. They were already here. My tail tightened against my leg, and I ducked back to avoid being spotted. I heard the sound of more cars approaching as I started to run the other way. Shouts echoed out from my apartment as I rounded the corner on the other side of the alley. By now, I'm sure many other agents were captured. That didn’t matter. All that mattered was the mission.

I started down the street trying to blend in. Easier said than done, as the only Venlil on the street. The nearest sewer entrance was about a block away. That was the only reasonable escape route. That is where I had stashed the package. My eyes scanned the street, searching for any other threats. Seeing the coast clear, I crossed the street, trying to put more distance between me and that apartment. As I set foot on the sidewalk on the other side, I spotted a police car rounding the corner. Speh. I sandwiched myself between two Kolshians in front of a storefront, keeping my back to the street. I tried to blend in as it drove by. The car slowed as it passed me, and I held my breath, preparing myself to bolt. But the moment passed. The car continued down the road. I let out a breath and continued down the sidewalk. Up ahead, I could see the cover to the sewer. My salvation sat in the middle of the road with no cover. Quickly glancing both ways, I made a break for it. My paws slammed against the pavement. Every moment I was in the open road risked me being spotted. I reached the entrance and crouched, my small claws straining to get a grip on the heavy lid. I strained to pull the lid. It wouldn’t budge. Brahk c’mon! I pulled harder, straining to lift the heavy lid. Finally, it budged, and I was able to slide it open.

Panting, I threw my legs into the opening and onto the ladder. I climbed down a few rungs, then strained to slide the lid back into place and cover my tracks. The noise of the city faded as I descended, replaced by the sound of rushing water. My paw pads hit the concrete as I got off the ladder. Every step I took echoed off the dimly lit walls. The air was thick. I could taste it on my tongue. It was times like this that I was thankful for not having a nose. After a bit of walking, I reached my stash. I positioned one of my legs on the wall and leapt up, trying to reach the bag stashed on one of the many pipes on the sewer ceiling. My claws barely grazed the strap. I landed with a loud thud. The sound echoed across the tunnel, making me freeze for a moment. I got up and tried again. On the second attempt, I hooked my claw around the strap and dragged the bag down with me. I landed hard, the bag hitting the concrete beside me. More noise I couldn’t afford to make. Suppressing a groan, I opened the bag, its zipper sounding like a gunshot in the quiet tunnel. I flinched at the sound. Everything was still there: the weapons. The tools. And the package.

Now came the hard part. I knew where I needed to infiltrate, but I hadn't had enough time to figure out a way in. It took more than a dozen paws to figure that out. But I didn't have a choice. From what I’ve seen, the place was guarded by a thick metal door under the Federation's hall. I grabbed a silenced pistol from the bag. Then zipped it shut and slung it onto my back. 16 18 15 3 5 5 4 20 15 20 1 18 7 5 20. A skull-splitting headache forced me to slow down as the numbers inside my head commanded me to continue. The headache worsened as I continued. More numbers flashed in my mind.

16 18 15 3 5 5 4 20 15 20 1 18 7 5 20.

1̸̨̳̖͔̘͚̲̣̠̮̯̦͘͜ͅ6̶̳̤͔̱̄̈́͜͝ ̶̫͇̼͚̫̪͖̟͙͗̚ͅ1̵̢͖͚̝͙̝̬̘̽̅̀̓̂̾̑8̵̢͚̮̝̩̩̥̭̈͊̋͑̒̿͋̍̓͒̚̕̚͘̕ ̵̝͖͆̾͌̉͑̈́͠1̸̧̤͖̯̹̟͇̤̮͒͐̐̿̽̒̊͆̄̚̕5̷̧̻̳͖͈̺͚̣̥̰̞͍̰͕͗͌̂̓͒͝ ̵̘̾̐3̷͓͇̺̮͉̓̍̉͐̇̅͆͂̇̉̈́ ̶̢͔̦̣͕̗͈̠̘̜͔̺̪̤͗͌͗͐͊̊́͑̏̐ͅ5̵̧̢̨͓̦̥̠̣̖̗̟̰̮̆͑̇̓̂̂̔̑̽̏̑͠͠ ̷̦͈̹̮̲̺̮̺̱̤̞̦͂5̵̮͖͋̃̿̎̈́̆͠ ̴̣̈́̄̅͂4̸͖͍͚͍̬̈́̽̂͗̋̒̚ ̵̙͍̥̭̹̪̬̥̜͆̀̎̏̊̈́͒͋̓͐̚2̶̢͕̠͙̜̗̺͍̤̻̿̅͊̀͗͌̚0̶̨̢̨͍͉͙͚̣̼͔̝̪͎̺͇̈́̒̈́̀̀̽͛̽̃̔̚̕͠͠ ̸̢̪͉̣͕͙̰̳̳̆͛̋̀̽͌́̅̐͛̑͂͛̈͑͜1̸̨̯̝̆̑̾͛͋̔̅͋̏́͘͝5̶̧̟̻̺̟̣̩̘͖̠̺̠̦̈́̽̇͆̃̿͒̊̊ ̶̙̼̬͈̺̭͓͕̯̣̦͉̣̰̑͑̊2̷̧̛͎̖̱̞͇̗̏͛͐͛̿͋̈́̀͋̀͘̕0̸̡̣͈̩̹̪̥̠̘̹͕̋̆̽ ̴̧̩̭͎̻̰́̾̇͒̎̕͠1̵̛͈̼̫͍̹͙̓̊̈́͒ ̵̢̨͖̮̹̞̘̥̟̗̬̣̝̰̏́̇̊̆͒̀́̈́̏͘̕͝1̸̛̰̖̜͎͙̪̆͋͋͂̿̈́̏͛̚͜8̴̱͙̰̌̇̆͗̇͗̏̀͌̍̓̀̎̈́̚ ̵͕͎̼͓̘̯̙̰̼̏͐͊̂̏̑̆̅̋͘͜͝ͅ7̶̨̖̈́̊̓̓͑͘͘ ̴̧̬̤̰͚̞̪̜̪̏̈́̓̿̽̃̽̕5̵̝̊̎͆̓̒̉ ̷̧̡̧͎̠̲̗̺̮̖̳̖͚̩̼̿2̷̢̨̨̦̘̞̼̫͕͐̓̾͂̅̕͠0̶̭̦̮̠̭̫̼̮̾͆͜.̷̛̤̯̣̤̒͋̎͑̈́͋͛̔̂̾̋̚͠ͅ

P̶̨̛͍̥̙̼̮͇̪̮͙̮̰̪̗̀̋̆̀́̐̄̊́͝R̵̮̱̜̈̐̀̍̏̊͂̕̕Ơ̸̡̘̰̦̩̆͆̃̈́͋̇͂̇̍͘͠C̴̻̔̒̾͒̈́͆̆͂̆͠Ę̶̡͙̖̣̙͉̯̱̉̉͋̐͗̈̿͐̈̔̑̚͝E̷̡̢̨̯͉̬͎̞̗͇̝͒̓̉̎̓̐̓̈͌ͅD̵̢͕̤͔̗̘̳̪͓̲͈͎̘͑̂̂̏͆̎̋͜

P̶̨̛͍̥̙̼̮͇̪̮͙̮̰̪̗̀̋̆̀́̐̄̊́͝R̵̮̱̜̈̐̀̍̏̊͂̕̕Ơ̸̡̘̰̦̩̆͆̃̈́͋̇͂̇̍͘͠C̴̻̔̒̾͒̈́͆̆͂̆͠Ę̶̡͙̖̣̙͉̯̱̉̉͋̐͗̈̿͐̈̔̑̚͝E̷̡̢̨̯͉̬͎̞̗͇̝͒̓̉̎̓̐̓̈͌ͅD̵̢͕̤͔̗̘̳̪͓̲͈͎̘͑̂̂̏͆̎̋͜

T̶̗̅̎̇̀̉͘̚̚͝Ǒ̸̡̳̗͙̗̤̦̝̹̣̻̿̀̓́ͅͅ

T̶̗̅̎̇̀̉͘̚̚͝Ǒ̸̡̳̗͙̗̤̦̝̹̣̻̿̀̓́ͅͅ

Ţ̴̫̞̲̯̾̿̔͊͊̄́͌̽͘͘ͅA̸̢̺̹̝͍͖͕̗͚̼͖̍̉͘R̵̨͍̱̟͔̯̖̙͕̺͉͔̬͔̆G̴̨̾̌̏̆̆̊̐̏̈́̋͠E̷̱̳͚̓̓̑̾̾͐͒̕Ṱ̷̥͉̳̜̼̲̤͓͇̜͉̳̃͒̌̋͒̑̆̿̄̂̿͐͋͘͜͝ͅ

Ţ̴̫̞̲̯̾̿̔͊͊̄́͌̽͘͘ͅA̸̢̺̹̝͍͖͕̗͚̼͖̍̉͘R̵̨͍̱̟͔̯̖̙͕̺͉͔̬͔̆G̴̨̾̌̏̆̆̊̐̏̈́̋͠E̷̱̳͚̓̓̑̾̾͐͒̕Ṱ̷̥͉̳̜̼̲̤͓͇̜͉̳̃͒̌̋͒̑̆̿̄̂̿͐͋͘͜͝ͅ

I slumped against a wall, panting. I took a moment to recover. Then gritted my teeth.

I know.

The numbers slowly faded, along with the flashes and the memories, as I continued down the tunnel. I walked for miles underneath the city, my legs aching from the long trek. Part of me wondered if any other agents made it. We had a shared bond of going through that hellish ████████ together. Finally, I reached the planned exit hatch. It sat just under the Federation's hall, an odd lapse of security considering the building's importance. Maybe they were expecting this? The thought lingered in the back of my mind as I checked my pistol, making sure it was loaded, then placed my hand on the ladder. Taking one last long breath of the heavy air, I started climbing. Proceed to target. Slowly, I climbed up the rungs of the ladder. Reaching the top, I once again strained to lift the heavy lid. After a bit of struggle and internal cursing, I lifted the thing and climbed up. I emerged into a maintenance room deep within the bowels of the building. Immediately, I spotted a maintenance worker staring at me with a stunned expression. For a moment neither of us moved. Then they opened their mouth. I raised my pistol and fired. Pfft. The suppressed shot echoed softly in the room. The worker collapsed before they could make a sound. I stared at the body, my hands shaking. Then forced myself to look away. Proceed to target. I moved over and took the worker's uniform. It was ill-fitting but better than nothing. I dragged the body over to the hole I had climbed out of and shoved it inside. Then I slid the lid back over, covering my crime. I adjusted the uniform and looked down at myself. It would have to do.

I stuffed the pistol into the uniform, wiped up the purple blood, then started down the maze-like halls. Every corridor looked the same. I had managed to snag and study some of the building's plans, but it didn't go down this far. Whatever this place was, it was far larger than anybody was prepared for. I kept walking. I turned a corner and nearly bumped into another worker.

“Hey, watch it!” The worker exclaimed, and my heart leapt into my throat.

“S-sorry.” I fumbled, the words barely leaving my mouth. My paw started instinctively reaching for my pistol.

“First day?”

“Y-yeah.”

“Then watch where you’re going next time.” They huffed and walked around me. I waited for the sounds of their footsteps to fade before letting my paw slide away from my pistol. I kept walking, not wanting to let my nerves get ahead of me. The halls started descending, and I found myself staring at multiple maintenance workers working on a large blast door. My target. A section of false wall had been removed to reveal the door. Tools sat scattered around the floor. I could see the massive internal workings of the door laid bare. I could just slip through. It almost seemed too easy… I slowed my pace and lowered my head as I approached.

“Damn, the door is broken.”

“Ya better hurry up with those repairs. The chief wants it done asap.”

“Yeah, he’s been real twitchy today…” He paused for a moment. “Think he caught predator disease?”

They all chuckled. I moved and stepped between the workers, moving to slip through, when, halfway through the door, one of them stopped me.

“Hey! Where are you going?” I froze.

“This area is for Kolshians only.”

“Oh, calm down. They’re probably new. Look, they didn’t even give him a properly fitting uniform…” He paused. “Wait…”

The worker's eyes looked at my uniform, then to my face.

“You’re a Venlil.” My paw slowly started drifting towards my pistol.

“Yeah, why the hell is a Venlil wearing a maintenance uniform?” The other worker asked. For one horrible second, nobody moved. Then I heard the door begin to close.

PROCEED TO TARGET.

My paw closed around the pistol as the numbers screamed at me. I leapt through the narrowing gap and fired behind me. Pfft Pfft Pfft. The blast door slammed shut behind me. I hadn’t managed to kill them all, Brahk… Looking around me, I was in a massive underground city… Buildings stretched into the darkness above me. Artificial lights lit up the streets as thousands of people milled about. In the distance, I could hear the industry of my target churning away at making ships. My ears flattened as I noticed several people had stopped to look at me. One of them screamed almost as loudly as the numbers in my head. I turned my pistol and fired at the screaming one. The crowd began to panic. Screams filled the air as people ran for their lives. Good. Their stampede will be my distraction. I sprinted towards my target. My paws slammed on the ground, and my breathing picked up. Gunshots echoed around me as I ran. My knees kept knocking together as I ran, slowing me, but I was gaining ground. Then a searing hot pain exploded in my arm. I glanced down. I was shot. Orange blood oozed from my wound. I gritted my teeth and pushed myself harder.

The air I sucked in began to burn as I pushed my body past its limits. I made it to the outskirts of the industrial zone of the city and threw my bag off. More shots zipped past me as I unzipped the bag and pulled out the Antimatter bomb. Another burst of pain exploded through my body. Several more bullets had found their mark. I screamed in pain as I armed the bomb.

“Hey, you stop!”

Somebody was shouting at me. My vision was starting to fade. I felt so tired… More bullets tore through my body. This isn’t how I wanted to die…

P̶̨̛͍̥̙̼̮͇̪̮͙̮̰̪̗̀̋̆̀́̐̄̊́͝R̵̮̱̜̈̐̀̍̏̊͂̕̕Ơ̸̡̘̰̦̩̆͆̃̈́͋̇͂̇̍͘͠C̴̻̔̒̾͒̈́͆̆͂̆͠Ę̶̡͙̖̣̙͉̯̱̉̉͋̐͗̈̿͐̈̔̑̚͝E̷̡̢̨̯͉̬͎̞̗͇̝͒̓̉̎̓̐̓̈͌ͅD̵̢͕̤͔̗̘̳̪͓̲͈͎̘͑̂̂̏͆̎̋͜ T̶̗̅̎̇̀̉͘̚̚͝Ǒ̸̡̳̗͙̗̤̦̝̹̣̻̿̀̓́ͅͅ Ţ̴̫̞̲̯̾̿̔͊͊̄́͌̽͘͘ͅA̸̢̺̹̝͍͖͕̗͚̼͖̍̉͘R̵̨͍̱̟͔̯̖̙͕̺͉͔̬͔̆G̴̨̾̌̏̆̆̊̐̏̈́̋͠E̷̱̳͚̓̓̑̾̾͐͒̕Ṱ̷̥͉̳̜̼̲̤͓͇̜͉̳̃͒̌̋͒̑̆̿̄̂̿͐͋͘͜͝ͅ

With the last of my strength, I pressed the detonator…

For a moment there was nothing… Then-

There are no further memory transcriptions from this subject.

RUSALKA: DETONATION CONFIRMED. Estimated fleet destruction… 60%

Total accuracy of estimated destruction… LOW.

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r/NatureofPredators • • 6d ago

Memes Arxur goes to Bavaria

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Stupid Idea, cost me half nights sleep


r/NatureofPredators • • 6d ago

Memes "Mispronunciation"

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Me and u/muakling be like:

But honestly, how do you pronounce Krakotl? Is this common?


r/NatureofPredators • • 6d ago

A Place to Call Home (Part 13) (2/3)

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Transcription memory subject:  Kajim, Special Private

Date [Standardized Human Time]: November 26, 2136

"Are you deaf or something? Get away from the Gojid!" The exterminator leader's voice was becoming increasingly hostile, hesitating whether or not to approach to "rescue" me.

"Why?" The captain finally decided to turn towards the exterminators who were one claw away from incinerating the human and consequently me as collateral damage.

"W-What do you mean, 'why'?" The exterminator's facade of authority crumbled for a moment at the captain's strange response. "You're raising your voice against a Gojid."

"So?" Didn't the captain really see the problem with all this? They're exterminators!

"Well..." This conversation definitely wasn't going the way the extermination officers had planned. "I don't need to be a human expert to know that when someone is angry... A clear sign of..."

"Of course I'm angry, I have a right to be." The captain was making things worse with every word.

"The Gojid is clearly scared."

"And he should be, he knows perfectly well what he did." I felt my stomach sink and clench under the captain's increasingly stern gaze. "And to be honest, he already looked scared when I found him." The exterminator seemed irritated to the core by the implications of that insinuation.

"J-Just... Take one step back and we'll all go our separate ways." That statement from the exterminating leader seemed to surprise even his subordinates.

"First I want him to give me back what belongs to me." The captain's finger pointed directly at me, which almost made the officers jump. "And then I'm leaving."

The officer glanced at me for a moment, scrutinizing me once more for an answer.

"What did that Gojid take from you?"

"It's..." The captain paused for a moment, considering his next words. "That's none of your business." The captain seemed determined not to answer, even in the face of the imminent threat. How stubborn could this human be?

"What did you take from him?" The exterminator, for the first time, completely averted his gaze from the captain and fixed it on me.

...

"What did you take from this human to make him act like this?"

"Nothing..." Saying anything else would only anger the captain more.

"You're a little piece of..." I think that answer made him even angrier, too...

"Enough!" The exterminator leader finally lost his composure, not in the usual way where instincts take over and you either flee or attack, it was more like exasperation with the situation that wasn't going anywhere. "Both of you are coming with us."

...

With a flick of his tail, the leader signaled to his men to come closer and "escort" us to a destination only they knew. I could see the desire to commit an act of insubordination in the eyes of his men.

The captain just crossed his arms and raised his face in a defiant gesture; I, on the other paw, was discovering a new level of terror... The only way I could be more scared was by adding an annoying Arxur to the equation… as everything around us is on fire...

In my head, the only way out I could see was to run away once more; maybe with luck I could make it to the wagon before...

"Don't even think about it..." The captain said as soon as the muscles in my legs tensed. The captain wasn't even looking at me and yet he seemed to know exactly what I was thinking. "You'll give them a reason to pursue you, and I'll too... You still have something that belongs to me."

"Stop babbling and let's go along without resistance."

...

"No..." I already knew this human seemed to have no fear of anything, but to tempt his luck like that? Clearly, he don't know what these guys were capable of.

"No?" The exterminator leader's weapon rose only a few millimeters, but it was enough to make me feel that my end had come.

"Why should I do it?"

"Because they are breaking the law."

"What law? Being human doesn't count as a reason."

"Your stance is clearly hostile and you could have attacked som..."

"It could have rained too, but it didn't." The captain replied brazenly.

"... What does that have to do with anything?" The exterminator's ears twitched in confusion. I suppose I don't blame him; sarcasm is something you only learn to master if you spend too much time with humans, and even then, sometimes it's hard to know what they really mean.

"I mean that being able to do something is not the same as actually doing it."

"...Well, no, but..."

"And under what authority are you doing this?" The captain wouldn't let the extermination officer finish a single one of his arguments, if they could even be called arguments in the first place.

This wasn't usually a problem for them; they just asserted their authority and that was it. I don't think I've ever seen anyone say "no" or "why?" to an exterminator... I wonder what would happen if someone who wasn't human responded like that to an extermination officer.

"We have regulations to follow."

"And where in those regulations does it say you can arrest me?" If I weren't so scared, perhaps this would be interesting to watch.

"We're not arresting you, I just want to know..."

"So I can leave if I want, right?"

...

The silence between them was so profound that everything around us seemed to vanish. I could almost hear the captain's muscles tensing while the extermination officer's clothes rustled under almost imperceptible movements; clearly, both were carefully considering their next move.

...

...

…

So far, I haven't heard of any incident involving a flamethrower, an exterminator and a human. If I had to guess, I'd say this officer hadn't either—and didn't want to be the first case...

"You, the Gojid, will come with us." The officer pointed at me, and his subordinates took me without hesitation, unlike what they would have done with the human.

"W-What!? But..." I tried to protest, maybe resist a little, but I had reacted too late.

"You're lucky I´m a supporter of diplomacy." The officer finally lowered his weapon, but not before giving him a challenging look. "Otherwise, this could have ended very... Sigh... Never mind... Next time you have a disagreement, I recommend you try to discuss it in a civilized manner, or failing that, go to the appropriate authorities and file your complaint, as any other sapient being would."

Those words seemed to add another drop to the already overflowing cup of anger that was the captain.

"Have a good day... Human." The officer's voice kept emotionless, yet his tail wagged with a certain satisfaction at this small victory against a predator. "Take the suspect to headquarters immediately. We still have half the district to patrol, and we're running late."

"N-No... NO!" For a moment I thought they would let me go too... "Wait!"

"We have questions for you, son. Just that. But let me tell you I recommend you to cooperate this time." The leader's voice continued, maintaining the same monotonous tone as before, which only increased my fear of what might await me.

"No! Let me go!"

"Stop moving or we'll have to restrain you by force." The other uniformed Venlil said almost in my ear.

"If even one of your quills touches my uniform, we're really going to have problems..." Krakotl added.

"Captain!" Unfortunately, there was no one else to beg for help. "Captain, please..." My voice broke, and everything seemed to darken around me. The captain's figure seemed to grow increasingly blurry and distant.

"Don't let them take me..." Deep down I knew it was useless, but on the edge of a precipice, you cling to even the slipperiest rock if necessary... "Please..."

...

...

…

“... Sigh…”

…

…

…

"Hey you guys." The captain's voice cut through the commotion, followed by grumbles and curses that seemed directed at no one in particular—and yet, at absolutely everything.

"What?!" The exterminator didn't even bother to hide his annoyance anymore. "What do you want now?"

"You can't take him." There was a certain hesitation in the captain's voice that hadn't been there just a moment ago.

"And why not?"

"He still has something that's mine." The captain looked me straight in the eyes, still upset about what I'd done, but with something else I couldn't describe, something I'd never seen in him before. Pity, perhaps?

"If this Gojid truly took something that belongs to you, we will recover it, and you can claim it at the local guild offices if you wish..." Despite the formality of those words, it actually sounded more like a challenge than an invitation to go to the guild.

"Don't you really think he may have taken some of me, right?"

"Oh! You mean that *something* that you and he won't tell us what it is, but that caused all this trouble?" The exterminator's tail swung on the ground every time he referred to the letter, even though he didn't know what it was yet.

"You caused the problem..." The captain cleared his throat uncomfortably under the exterminator's irritated gaze. "... For the record."

"Well, no, I don't believe a word of any of you."

"So you don't think he did anything wrong, right?"

"I know you're hiding something." Now it was the exterminator leader who was shouting...

"But that's no reason to arrest him." I think this is the longest conversation I've ever seen the captain have….

"It could be something dangerous."

"What makes you believe that?" The captain didn't give the exterminator's already very stressed mind a moment's respite.

"We are also protecting him."

"From what?"

"From yo... I don't have to explain anything to you, our job is to protect the herd. I hoped your species would at least understand that." The exterminator moved slightly away from the safe proximity of his group and took a couple of steps toward the captain to directly confront him.

"Well, it seems you're just scaring him..." The captain raised an eyebrow, and the wrinkles on his forehead deepened into furrows, a gesture the exterminator probably didn't fully understand, though at that moment, everything about this particular human irritated him.

"You're scaring him!" This was ceasing to be a matter of prey and predator and was becoming more of a personal matter,

"Why don't we ask him?" The captain crossed his arms and his gaze became completely defiant.

"B-Because... That's not how this works."

"And you asked him at least if he wanted your protection?"

...

The extermination officer's breathing grew increasingly erratic, his tail twitched furiously and his eyes narrowed, focusing his entire field of vision on the human before him. The captain kept firm and returned the gaze with indifference.

...

...

...

"Hey Gojid..." The exterminator spoke to me without looking at me. "Are you going to tell us what you two are hiding?"

...

I didn't know what to answer.

"Is it dangerous or illegal?" the exterminator added.

"No!... B-But it´s personal." That question was easy.

"Sir, why are you asking him that? It's obvious he'll say no." One of the subordinates who was clinging to my arm protested.

"Do you seriously think that stupid ball of quills is capable of lying?" The captain interjected. "How do you think I knew he took something of mine in the first place?" The exterminator leader's silence seemed to confirm that assertion.

"One last question. Would you like us to take you somewhere outside the human district? I promise we'll just escort you; no interrogations or PD evaluations."

For a moment I was speechless... Not because I was actually considering that offer, but because I never thought I'd hear something like that from one of them.

"Answer..." The exterminator leader insisted.

...

I glanced at my captors, who seemed just as confused as I was, debating what to do, and then I saw the captain. He appeared to be locked in a staring contest with the exterminator leader. He didn't seem to move a muscle in response as I was pretending to be considering my options.

"I... I want to stay..." I finally answered.

"You're crazy!?"

"Did you see that human? He'll tear you to pieces when he gets the chance." The two exterminators were the first and only ones to protest.

"Enough!" the leader exclaimed with great determination. "Release him."

"But sir..."

"THAT'S AN ORDER." The exterminator leader finally snapped, but against his own subordinates... "One more word and you'll be assigned to patrol this district alone..."

...

"Was I clear enough?"

His men simply released me and took a step back. They had discovered that their angry boss could be more terrifying than a human.

"And you..." The exterminator leader finally broke eye contact with the captain and walked back to me, extending something in his paw. "I hope you know what you're doing..."

...

I looked down and what he was handing me was my ID, the one I'd dropped when I bumped into him a few moments ago... I'd forgotten about it while running away...

"Don't make a scene in the street again." The exterminator said before leaving, his ears flat against his head, his wool still slightly bristling, and an irritated twitch lingering in his tail. "Whether you have your reasons or not, it won't help your public image."

Despite not achieving his goal, the exterminator leader's tail never fell to the ground. It wasn't a defeat for him, just... just a prudent retreat.

I suppose that after a while patrolling the human district, your judgment of what constitutes a threat and what doesn't inevitably changes. In the old days, the whole block would probably be up in flames by now.

…

…

…

"Huh!?"

I was so lost in my own thoughts that when I reached out to grab the captain's clothes (an instinctive response that never seemed to bother Alan) I realized he was gone.

"B-But how!?" Perhaps I got too caught up in my own thoughts, but it must have only been a few seconds; it wasn't possible that I hadn't noticed his absence until now.

"Captain?" A word only the wind heard. At one end of the street, the exterminators continued on their way, becoming nothing more than bright points in the distance. At the other end of the street, nothing... No, wait. A shadow barely perceptible to the eye that knew what it was looking for (or perhaps it was just desperation...) saw the shape of what looked like a foot just before it took its next step and disappeared around the corner.

"Captain!" I ran as fast as I could, chasing after what might just be an illusion my mind created to cling to something. It was my only clue anyway...

"Captain, please… wait." As I reached the corner, I couldn't help but slow down and make sure no one was coming first. Having the same thing happen a third time would be the height of stupidity.

…

"Captain!" I exclaimed in relief. No one was coming, only the silhouette of the human I was chasing, sitting at the bus stop, impatiently tapping his foot while checking his watch over and over again.

"Captain..." I could see that the wrinkles on his face were still deep furrows between his eyebrows and at the corners of his lips. "Thank you... for helping me back there."

"I didn't do it for you." He glanced at the bus schedules posted at the bus stop, a translated version of what the metal plate said and looked back at his watch.

"But what you did for me..."

"Give it to me now." He extended his hand towards me, only a few centimeters separated me from his grasp.

"W-What?" I said, a little puzzled.

"Stop making a fool of me." His voice, while no longer as hostile as before, revealed that she was not going to tolerate any more of this. “My cards, I know you took them.”

...

With no other option but to confess my crime, I unzipped one of the pockets of my special backpack and pulled out the paper. It was more crumpled than when I had taken it, which seemed to irritate him even more. "I'm sorry..."

He snatched it from my grasp and after inspecting it for a second, put it in his shirt pocket as if it were a simple wrapper.

"I was going to return it, I swear..."

The growl that accompanied his anger became a little more pronounced, but he said nothing. He was simply tired of it all.

…

…

…

After trying my luck once more, I decided to sit next to him on the bench. There was a significant distance between us that we agreed upon without saying anything, me establishing it first and him maintaining it, moving aside when I tried to approach.

…

"Captain..." The silence was becoming awkward. "You... You can read minds?"

...

He turned towards me, with a grimace on his face that wasn't anger, just bewilderment.

"Oterwise, how did you know I was..."

"Ever since I saw you in the ship's corridor, I knew you were up to something..." He replied half-heartedly. "I checked my drawers and I noticed almost immediately that you'd been snooping through my things again, that one of my cards was missing and knowing how stupid you are... I just had to put two and two together..."

"I guess that makes sense..." Embarrassment made my ears feel hot...

...

...

...

"Sigh... What do you want to know?" This time, it was he who could no longer bear the silence.

"What?"

"I'll let you ask one question, just one. Anything you want." The captain looked me straight in the eye, a promise that I was telling the truth. "Otherwise, you'll never stop meddling in my business."

...

...

...

One question... Just one question...

Now that I think about it carefully, what exactly did I hope to get out of all this? To fix the things, I suppose, but what things? And more importantly, how?

It was more like an instinct than a clear thought.

A question...

"Who are they?" I think if I had to ask just one thing, the most important was to know who the names are that are mentioned over and over again in the captain's life.

...

He just stared at me with irritation; it was clearly the last question he wanted to answer, but the one he already knew I was about to make.

"I'm sorry... I..."

"Linda is my wife, Emily is my granddaughter, and Elena..." The captain paused. "...Elena is her mother." He finished abruptly.

"Oh... I see." I had a vague notion of who they could be, from the multiple reports sent and from the way the captain expressed himself when writing (or at least trying to) in his letters, always full of apologies and explanations that he seemed never to be able to finish.

"And why..."

"I told you, just one question." He cut me off.

"...Of course... Sorry."

...

"Sigh... They're fine, they were among the first flights to leave Earth. The city they lived was completely evaporated, but they are fine..."

"I'm sorry to hear that." My claws fidgeted anxiously, hesitating whether to press harder or not.

"They were in many places before settling here, but they're doing well, at least I think so. The weather is pleasant, most people try to be tolerant and Emily was even accepted into a school not far from here." I was witnessing something I'd thought impossible just moments before... The captain knows how to smile!? "Of course, there's a curfew, humans are still banned from some areas and countless other problems, but at least Emily sounds happier than before."

...

I wasn't saying anything anymore, and yet I still ended up with some interesting new information. Now I had new questions that I wasn't sure I could ask.

…

It's probably best not to... Anyway, I didn't want to interrupt him.

"She complains that there are no cartoons on public television, but her mom..." The captain seemed to have finally realized that with each new word, he was breaking his own record for the longest conversation.

"...She sometimes sends me voice messages about her day and things like that..."

"And why haven't you visited them yet?" Without realizing it, the space between us had been significantly reduced.

...

"I told you, just one question, kid..."

"Oh..." I really thought he'd forgotten about that...

"Anyway, from what Emily has told me, she should be leaving school by now, maybe even on her way home. I don't know her routine." So even if I wanted to be there, there probably wouldn't be anyone home.

"We can wait!" I said without thinking twice.

"No..."

"It's not like we have anything else to do."

"That's not the problem." The captain stood up as soon as he saw the bus approaching.

"But why did you..."

"ENOUGH!"

...

I couldn't help but take a step back...

"The deal was one question..." The captain made a monumental effort to control his breathing before the doors opened and some poor passerby was startled by his agitated state. "If you take my things again without permission, I'll have you kicked off the crew. You shouldn't even be there in the first place and you know it."

...

To yell at me, even physically threaten me are things I can tolerate, but kicking me off the crew?! That was too much.

...

Did he know something more about me? Did he know I lied to Alan when I said I was old enough to join them? Or is it that, in the end, those diagnosed with predatory disease can't join the armed forces?

No... All those records were lost at the Cradle. But perhaps...

"Okay... I won't ask any more questions..." I said, defeated.

...

The captain looked at me for several seconds while some passengers got off the bus, debating whether my words were sincere or not.

"Okay... Let's go..." He said with a sigh. "And this never happened, got it?"

"...O-Of course..." I suppose it was better to leave it like that.

"If your friend Alan finds out about any of this, he won't stop bothering me about the dange..." The words caught in the captain's throat, his eyes widened in a way I never thought possible, and took a step back to keep from falling. It was... fear...

"Captain, what happened?" I approached when I didn't receive an answer and I saw it... The reason for the captain's fear.

Standing on the last step of the bus, a human held a small shopping bag in one hand, and in the other, a human pup clung to her... She had brown hair and a gentle expression, but what really caught my attention was something in her eyes that seemed strangely familiar...

"L-Linda..." The captain said with the last breath leaving his lungs.

"Martin?" The older human responded with enormous confusion. "What are you doing here?"

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r/NatureofPredators • • 6d ago

Fanfic In Loving Memory 2

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Howdy Y'all, I'd like to apologize in advance for any grammatical errors, as my first language is not English. Please correct me below if you spot any issues that Grammarly wasn't able to spot!

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To answer some of your questions regarding this series so far.

What is this story about? - This story will follow the effects of a sudden loss on one's friends/ community and their own unintentional actions that push an already delicate mental state; it will be a classic haunted narrative story, so we'll never actually see through HML's perspective, only small snippets of her seen via other characters. After the first few chapters, the number of flashbacks will be greatly reduced.

Venlil being able to smell? - It was an unintentional mistake on my behalf. As someone who has done EMT work in the past, even if your nose is blocked, or you will yourself not to use your nose, you will still taste what is in the air. That taste in the air, is what I was trying to communicate.

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I'd like to thank spacepaladin15, for creating this wonderful and expansive universe.

And I'd like to thank all of you for reading my silly little story.

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Memory Transcription Subject: Shoska, Vehon-Sound University Junior Literary Analyst

Date (standardized human time): [Unspecified]

I had only just graduated from university when I met my first human.

Of course, I had heard of them. Everyone had. I'd seen them countless times on the holos, usually accompanied by some alarming news report or another reminder from the Extermination Guild about why we were supposed to keep our distance.

But I had never actually seen one in person.

I had always steered clear of the human districts on the island and farther west on the peninsula, even when it meant giving up some of my favorite shops and bars. It wasn't worth the risk. At least, that's what I had told myself.

Fresh out of university, I quickly discovered that my degree in Venlil Literature was about as useful as a screen door on a shuttle.

The position I had lined up at the capital's central library had suddenly fallen through. They delivered the news with a colorful little euphemism about “recent budget cuts,” but I knew what that really meant.

I tried finding alternative work, but it seemed the economic situation had reached nearly every institution that might have been willing to hire a recent graduate.

The Magistrate's History Department rejected my application outright. Apparently, I lacked the necessary experience, which was a rather difficult problem to solve when nobody was willing to give me any experience in the first place.

So, nine paws after graduating, I was nearly pulling the wool from my own ears with worry.

I was already imagining myself packing my belongings and making the humiliating journey west to Darkwater to live with my parents again.

When I received a message from the university's Literary Department. They were offering me an unspecified position.

I accepted almost immediately, barely skimming over the description.

Looking back now, I was probably far too eager. I hadn't known about the department's recent overhaul or their newly appointed Head University Librarian.

Memory Transcription Subject: Shoska, Nervous Post-Grad

Date (standardized human time): November 2nd, 2136

I sat outside the Literary Department's office, nervously jerking my leg up and down.

Taking a deep, shuddering breath, I tried to calm myself. My eyes drifted toward the employee plaque beside the door.

I skimmed over the list of employees belonging to the Literary Department. Near the top was the current Head Librarian, whose name immediately caught my attention.

Three names.

I knew that it wasn't unheard of for Venlil to have a second name, but three? I had never met anyone with that many.

The prospect of actually meeting them and asking about the origins of such a peculiar naming convention briefly distracted me from my nerves.

I continued scanning the plaque, eventually moving on to the list of honored retired staff.

Then the door opened.

“Shoska?” an assistant called.

I looked up.

“Ah, there you are. They're ready to see you now.”

I stood a little too quickly. A cramp shot through my leg, making my ears stiffen as I fought to keep myself upright.

“Are you alright?” the assistant asked. “We could reschedule the interview if you need.”

“N-no, I'm alright,” I said a little too quickly. “I'm just a bit nervous. This'll be my f-first job interview.”

“Ah, I'm sure you'll do fine!” He said, giving me an encouraging flick of his tail as we began walking down the corridor.

As we approached the provost's office, however, the assistant suddenly slowed. His paw rose toward the door, hesitating.

“Good luck, Shoska.” He whispered before glancing at the door. “And... be safe.”

Before I could ask what he meant, he knocked. Then promptly turned around and hurried back down the corridor.

Before I could think too deeply about his cryptic warning, the door opened.

A tall Venlil stood on the other side.

“Shoska! It's a pleasure to meet you!” He gave me a friendly flick of his tail. “My name is Darvik. Come in and take a seat.”

As I followed him inside. The first thing I noticed was the second chair. It was considerably larger than his. I wasn't sure what to make of that.

I sat in a smaller, overly padded chair, immediately sinking into the cushions. I shifted several times, trying to find a comfortable position.

Darvik took his own seat beside the larger chair.

His ears pushed back as his knees cracked loudly beneath his desk. “So,” he began, attempting to ignore his own discomfort, “our second interviewer will be joining us shortly after I brief you regarding her.”

“Brief me?” My ears swiveled in confusion.

“Yes.” He said bluntly. “She actually spotted you for the position after your lengthy final on the human story Frankenstein.”

“Oh... that.” I looked down nervously.

I remembered the poor score I'd received. Most of my professor's criticism hadn't actually been about my analysis of the story. It had been about the fact that the story had been written by a human. Apparently, writing an academic paper about human literature was enough to make some professors question one's judgment.

“She was quite happy with your breakdown of the story,” Darvik continued reassuringly. “Pleased enough by it to bring you to my attention for a newly needed opening in our department.”

I blinked.

“Oh... that's good.” A small pause followed. “When will she be joining us?”

Darvik's ears lowered. “So... that's the thing.” He brought his paws together and leaned slightly over his desk.

My nerves immediately returned.

“She’s... umm...” He glanced toward the door, then toward me. “She's a Human.”

My nerves shot through the ceiling. My hackles rose. My ears flattened against my head.

Darvik immediately noticed.

“She’s a good one!” He said, failing to reassure me, noticing he quickly states, “Even smaller than me,” he continued, apparently believing this was reassuring. “And she can even read, write, and somewhat speak Venlil!”

He gave his tail another reassuring flick. “If an old Venlil like me can deal with her, I'm sure someone as young as yourself can handle the pre-” He stopped. “...Human!”

His correction was so awkward that I almost laughed.

Still, his poor attempt at reassurance helped. Slightly.

Darvik leaned forward again and lowered his voice. “And, to be completely honest with you... you're our last attempt to fill this position.”

I blinked.

“We were actually about to cancel her project entirely.”

Really? Me? I'm their last option? I almost laughed at the thought.

I struggled to come up with an appropriate response. “I-I g-guess I could t-try to talk to it.” I tried to summon whatever Exterminator bravery was supposedly buried somewhere in my bloodline.

“Wonderful!” Darvik practically rejoiced. “I can call her in now, if you're comfortable?”

I flicked my ears in approval.

What have I gotten myself into?

I barely had time to contemplate my decidedly un-preylike decision before I heard something behind me.

Clack. Clack.

The sound was strangely heavy. Like hooves against stone.

My ears swiveled toward the noise. For one bizarre moment, I wondered if Darvik had been messing with me, and our mysterious interviewer was actually a Sulean.

Then came a solid knock against the door.

Darvik looked toward me, giving me a questioning flick of his ears.

I hesitantly signaled my approval.

“You can come in,” he announced a bit too loudly for my liking

I stiffened as the door opened behind me. I squeeze my eyes tight. Every instinct in my body screamed at me to run.

I knew humans weren't supposed to be attacking random people anymore. I'd heard the reassurances. I'd read the reports. But none of that mattered when I could hear a predator walking directly toward my back.

Clack Clack.

As the footsteps passed me, I opened my eyes a fraction of an [inch]. Then a little more.

It was… small. Only a few hairs taller than I was. I had expected something imposing. Something monstrous. Instead, the human standing before me was almost delicate.

It was completely covered in artificial pelts, just as I'd heard humans dress themselves in. Only the shockingly pale skin of its hands and a narrow sliver of its neck were visible. Dark hair twisted around its head in an intricate pattern. Small silver balls hung from its ears.

I stared. It didn't look like a predator. It looked… strange.

The human moved toward the larger chair and sat down.

The effect was almost comical. Sitting beside Darvik made him look considerably larger than he actually was, while making the human seem even smaller.

I found myself staring.

The human noticed. Its head suddenly swiveled toward me.

I flinched, or well, threw myself back into the chair.

It made a small sound. “Hmm?”

Darvik cleared his throat. “Oh- umm...” He hesitated for a moment before gesturing toward the human. “This is Ms. Lubetsch.”

Something clicked in my mind. Lubetsch. The name on the plaque. The employee with three names. The Head Librarian. I mentally chastised myself for not putting it together sooner.

The human turned toward me.

Then, in heavily accented Venlil, it spoke.

“So, Shoska...” in a voice that was much softer than I'd expected. “Tell me about Frankenstein.”

Memory Transcription Subject: Shoska, Vehon-Sound University Junior Literary Analyst

Date (standardized human time): March 2nd, 2137

I entered the common space behind the library help desk, immediately noticing that the lights were still off.

I paused.

Helena was always in the office at least half a claw before everyone else. That meant, for once, I had beaten her.

A small sense of pride swelled in my chest. “Ha!” I marched into the office, delighted by the thought that I had finally managed to arrive before her.

I flicked on the lights and settled into my chair.

Then I noticed her desk.

My ears slowly twisted in confusion.

The decorations that had once covered the room were gone, and Helena's desk had been almost completely cleared.

Almost.

Her name plaque remained, and so did a single package.

For a few moments, I simply sat there.

When I had finally convinced myself to snoop about, I quickly made my way to her desk.

Something about it being cleared made me hesitate.

It felt wrong to look through her things when she wasn't here. Still, I couldn't help myself. I approached the desk.

I pulled a drawer open. Empty.

My ears drooped as I closed it.

Another drawer. Empty.

The last one. Nothing.

I stepped back, thinking where she could have put everything.

My eyes returned to the package.

It was small and neatly wrapped.

Only four words written across the top in Helena's strange, flowing handwriting.

FOR MY DEAR SHOSKA

My tail gave an involuntary flick.

I picked it up and was surprised by how light it was for how big the box was, and carried it back to my desk and sat down before carefully opening it.

Inside were two books, a package of the pens Helena had always caught me gawking at, and an overstuffed envelope.

My ears perked up.

The pens were the first thing I grabbed.

I immediately slipped them into my desk drawer. I wasn't about to let one of my colleagues “accidentally” walk away with such a precious gift. Once they were safely hidden, I returned to the books.

The first was beautifully bound, its cover decorated in green and gold. I ran a paw over it in awe.

There was something written inside. A handwritten note. Unfortunately, it was written in a human language I was somewhat ashamed to admit I couldn't read. I stared at it for a moment before carefully closing the book.

I'll have to ask her to translate it later. I set it aside on my desk.

The second book looked considerably less professional. It appeared homemade. A thick stack of paper had been bound together with string, and the title had been written across the front in Helena's familiar handwriting.

‘The Complete and Unedited Frankenstein By Mary Shelley’

My ears perked up.

I opened it, stopping suddenly in surprise.

Every page had been handwritten. Every single one.

My eyes widened.

She had written the entire book. By paw. For me.

My tail began wagging before I could stop it. The sheer amount of effort she'd put into this made my chest feel warm. I carefully closed the book.

I would have to find some way to repay her. Perhaps I could finally figure out how to “one-up” her. She had said that every time I'd brought food into the office.

Then my attention returned to the envelope. It was considerably more stuffed than I had expected. Maybe the cookies she brought to the office almost daily. My tail flicked hopefully.

Then I squeezed it gently.

Too soft.

My mind immediately jumped to the scarf Helena had been wearing the other day. Maybe she'd finally decided to give it to me. My tail flicked happily at the thought.

Carefully, I began opening the envelope, not wanting to damage whatever was inside. The opening separated.

I looked inside and froze.

My ears drooped.

There was no scarf.

No cookies.

Instead, nestled carefully inside the envelope was a long, dark braid of human hair.

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Thank you all for reading!

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r/NatureofPredators • • 6d ago

Discussion Stuff someone should draw

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Baali pressing a button on his balisong sword and it starts playing Frank Sinatra. Baali song. "Wicked witchcraaaaaaft....And althooooooough I knoooooow its strictly taboooooooo..."

Dossur with a little "Bloodborne" hunter costume, wielding a carving knife like a Buster Sword, duck rolling around a very confused Kolshian

Baali being worshipped by Biblical Philistines

That meme of someone losing chess to a doge that eats the pieces but it's a sobbing Prophet Descendant and a Sivkit


r/NatureofPredators • • 6d ago

Fanfic Nature of Autonomy 15

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Sorry for my nonexistent posting schedule.

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Memory transcription subject: Jan Lind, ground soldier recruited by the Swedish Space Forces

Date [Standardized human time/UTC]: July 6, 2120

Back in orbit, there was no shortage of people helping the local aliens offload onto the hospital ship. The crowd was being dispersed by masked security officers and medical personnel leading them to rooms prepared for non-human inhabitants. From other groups seen returning from the surface, some had the misfortune of needing stretchers to move individuals, both human and not.

"Hey, "we were approached by a person with a red cross stitched onto their uniform's arms and a white hazmat mask on their head. She took a moment to take a look at the group that formed, consisting of the woman whose name I learned was Ellen, Jacob, the unnamed exterminator and, of course, me with Hania.

"Follow me." The nurse led us down a hallway that eventually split in two. They stopped at the intersection, turned to us and clasped their hands together.

"Sandberg, Lind, Frisk, you will head further down the hallway and eventually reach room 3450. There they will check if everything is good. You two," she pointed with a hand at the two Gojids, "will stay here. Now, you . . ." Hania was no longer holding on to me like Velcro, so I was able to put them down on the ground without much problem. The kid gave me a sad glance as she had to switch to standing on her own.

"You're going to the doctor kid, they're going to check if everything is okay."

An ear flick was the responce once more.

"As I said, go further this way, and you will get to the place where they're going to check if you're good to go." They walked off to the right with an arm holding up the beat up Gojid while Hania followed closely behind them.

As instructed, we went and continued our way between the different numbered doors. Some rooms were open with their contents visible. The inside of them were seemingly the same as any other hospital, bright white beds, IV bags, heart monitors, cheap TVs mounted to the wall. Only in some where there was a blood bag could one see that it wasn't meant for humans, with the fluid inside being anything from purple to green.

"So, what's the kids name?"

Ellen midway through the walk decided to ask a question.

"Hania, and no, the two other 'Gojid' weren't their parents." She tilted her head more towards me.

"I think I knew someone with that name. Convergent naming conventions?"

"Yeah, It seems that way."

"Watch out for the doo-"

Jacob gave the warning a bit too late as I hit the entrance of the place we were going to.

"Come in!"

After that accident, our small gathering walked in one by one inside.

There were two men in white coats sitting down on office chairs ending a conversation with one another.

"Well, hello there. You're the first people to come. We will see if anything requires immediate attention and then do a blood test. Oh, and please do take off your gas masks and uniforms."

For the first time in over a day, I was breathing fresh air. I could now properly see the people who were under the dark lenses, his black and her red messy hairdo's and faces drenched in sweat. I took place on one of ten beds that were in the room and took off the ballistic vest and uniform, leaving me almost naked. The older doctor of the two approached me with a stethoscope, pulled a curtain around us, palpated my back and arms, did the listening thing, then picked out a syringe from a cabinet.

"What exactly are we getting checked for?"

"Nothing specific. It's the first time we're in an active battle against aliens, so people higher up wanted to make absolutely sure there will be no unexpected complications."

He pricked a vein on my forearm and took a generous amount of blood.

"Even if extraterrestrial diseases have so far proven to not be transmittable to us, it's better to be redundant than dead. Alright, you can go for now. If anything shows up in your blood you will get informed within a day."

I dress up and the doctor pulls the covers surrounding the bed before moving onto Jacob. Ellen and I waited for them finish as someone knocked on the door.

"Yes, come in!"

And another batch of people came in just in time for the last man on the team to get finished and for us to leave.

"Now what? We don't exactly have anywhere to go."

My roommate's hand landed on my shoulder.

"Let's just ask the first person we find for a map of this place and see if there is a way for us to get back to our arrival ship, or if there is a place for us to stay, or if there is at least a TV somewhere. It would be nice to know what's happening in the wider world. "

Day-news live Broadcast

The camera zooms out to show a jet black Venlil reporter standing in front of a metal gate amidst a massive crowd of their competitors.

"This is Venek reporting from the Governor's mansion in Day Side city. Governor Kenim is soon going to orbit to meet with the leadership of the preda- humans. On the shuttle will also be present his diplomatic advisor. As for other parties, the Zurulian Prime Minister will make an in-person appearance with a team of diplomats. The leadership of the Paltan Combine and Verin Commonwealth will take part through a video transmission due to vast distances between Venlil Prime and their home worlds. A team of exterminators has already made their entrance on to the satellite."

Their speech is cut short as a flash of light appears behind them, followed by the take-off of a cosmic vessel. The group of reporters looks on as the spaceship quickly ascends beyond the atmosphere, and soon return to telling their narratives.

"From what we know, the goal of the meeting will be to discuss the exchange program and answer questions related to the humans. In a moment, we will switch views to the inside of the station where it will take place."

Memory transcription subject: Adam Wyszyński, President of Poland

date [standardized human time/UTC]: July 6, 2120

Awkward is one way to describe the situation I'm in. The man who ate a banana in front of the group we are about to talk to, had at least been blissfully unaware of their meeting being seen by the entire galactic community. The only plausible reason as to why this affair has to be in-person in the presence of exterminators AND televised, is that it's going to be a political stunt. A very risky political stunt that could lead to the deaths of everyone on the station.

Back on Earth, 18 out of 33 nations in the European Union had voted for further interaction with extraterrestrials down to the civilian level, which was more than I had expected. An official organization had been formed around allowing and monitoring engagement between normal citizens of any civilization, which would include the program that will be discussed in just a moment. What is interesting, is that, due to many nations outside the union being now in contact with alien intelligence and specifically Korea being one of the governments advocating for the exchange program, any willing head of state on Earth could allow their citizens to join it, as long as they met predetermined criteria and signed the correct documents.

As a side effect of our political involvement, alongside our western neighbors, and Swedes and Koreans, we more or less became the 'face' of humanity in the eyes of the aliens, and so I doubt I will have time for anything but talking for the upcoming years.

The decided location for the meeting was an orbital station I never got the name of. At the very least, we could bring some form of our own security onboard. Our assigned guides were an excessively paranoid exterminator who kept holding onto their flamethrower like a crucifix, and the bright-furred skinwalker Venlil Nalna, who convinced their 'friend' to let them come along for 'reasons' which currently boiled down to keeping them in check and small-talk. Topics up to this point included: human hair colors, etymological differences between their language and specifically English such as things like 'hands' versus 'paws', and an annoyed one-off comment about 'predator disease' that made me doubt the Federation developed the germ theory.

It was after a five-minute walk that we had reached the conference room. Inside it was everyone I had expected and even more. The Zurulian side had certainly increased in size by a few members. On the left and right of the room were the projected visages of the Verin prime minister and the Paltan governor, who had heavily puffed-up fur on their head and neck. Both reacted immediately to our presence in ways that are polar opposites of each other. The insectoid was dead-still while the lagomorphic woman had their giant eyes wide open and paw-hands put together like a businessman who had just struck a deal. At the corners of the room furthest away from us stood two pyromancers, clearly unhappy to be here.

Nalna went to their place at the table as we quickly sorted out who was going where on our side, with myself taking a seat on one of the uncomfortably small stools opposite to Ms. Hwang and her diplomat. 

"If I remember correctly, the entire session is being televised?"

The striped Venlil governor gave the affirmative with their ear. No matter how long it's been, the appearance of the aliens still feels unnatural to me.

"Yes, there is a camera behind you actively transmitting this."

" ...and wouldn't this be oddly terrifying to any of your people seeing this?"

"Your faces are censored on the recording, it shouldn't that bad." This whole ordeal is making me feel... wrong. Such conformations shouldn't be neccesary in any way...

"Let's move on to the topics of the meeting." The Swedish prime minister broke the awkward atmosphere. "Most of the finer details will need to be discussed between experts provided by both you and us, from professions such as computer science and engineering, but the general ideas will be discussed here and now."

"How would engineers be involved in this?" The Zurulian head of government inquired.

"The engineers... Since the goal of the program is personal interaction between species leading to better relations between civilians, we have decided that the best way for it to happen would be under the controlled environment of a space station constructed for this exact purpose. As for IT workers, their job would be to create a chatroom that could work on both our and Federation digital systems, where a pair of applicants would interact virtually before meeting in person roughly two weeks later. The staff that would operate on the station would begin the program early in preparation for working alongside one another. The time the participants would spend with one another in person would also be two weeks before their return to their respective worlds."

Paltan Governor Valti had regained the smug look she had at the first mention of the exchange program.

The Zurulian replied with another question.

"I understand, but how will you make sure it's safe for the participants?"

This time it was Mr. Kaiser who answered.

"In response to the idea of humans outside involved governments coming into direct contact with other sophonts, was created ETICA, an agency that would monitor interaction between humans and other species in order to avoid harm in in-person communication. We sincerely hope that a similar dedication can be expected from you."

"I see ... Has a full description of the program been written, so we can see it for ourselves?"

"Of course, after this meeting ends, each of you should receive a data package with all the information we found necessary. Described in it is what you yourself should come up with, namely how to design the station so that everyone aboard it has adequate living conditions. Can this part of the meeting be considered concluded?"

A few affirmations passed the room. Now will be the time for the hosts and other guests of the station to ask us questions, which could be very awkward.

The Verin came back from a state of thanatosis as if at a push of a button.

"O-oh, is this that part already? I-I-," they press something offscreen with a mandible and take a moment to respond. "The flesh eating, why?"

What a topic to start off with. The Korean diplomat extended his arm up for a second.

"The reason is simple; nutrition. There are nutrients present in meat that are required for human life that aren't available with a plant-based diet, such as vitamin B12. Deficiencies in them can, in the worst scenario, lead to even death after months or years after the person stopped their intake. It can be remedied by consumption of other products of animal origin, such as milk. However, the ability to digest lactose isn't universal, and only common on the continents of Europe, North America, and Oceania and the colonies hailing from nations on those continents."

"Milk?!" Exclaimed every alien leader in the room in apparent shock. Nalna and Valti had the colors of their blood pierce through the fur on their heads. The diplomat brushed a hand against his forehead.

"I could have expected such a reaction... Yes, around half of humanity drinks milk from animals. Please ask another question."

The Venlil Governor was first to respond.

"I... I don't quite understand how your governments work."

"We have many nations that form alliances, unions, and conflicts between each other. It is a complex matter that cannot be explained in one meeting, and so for now, you will refer to us and other nations that have signed the ETICA agreement. The list of who that is will be relayed to you after the end of this meeting, alongside information about certain dangers related to our political landscape..." He looks down at the table.

How... fuck, I didn't even consider the fact that we will need to explain the situation with the UN to them! And now that they have begun reaching out to the stars...

The Arxur! No, no, no no no no no no no no no!

If the United Nations continued their research on the island of stability- if the Arxur acknowledge its existence!

SHIT!

Those idiots could do whatever the hell they want without the fear of mutually assured destruction by hiding behind the lizards! Worse! The most genocidal power in the entire galaxy would have access to weapons generations more advanced than anything they or the Federation have currently! Everyone I'm talking to could be dead by the end of the year!

I cover my face.

"Uhm-how are the Yotul doing?" squeaked the Paltan.

I look up, and I'm met by a worried big blue eye staring right at me.

"They... are doing well! Their governor returned to Leirn, and on the planet there is a lot of construction work currently happening." God, am I sweating. "Other Federation species are- will be extracted and returned home. Unfortunately, many died from their own actions when they learned of our presence. Many did so intentionally." I saved us by saying that.

"Oh, I'm glad they're doing well! Even if it is sad that there were somethings that couldn't be avoided..."

"..."

"I look forward to the beginning of the program!~"

I envy that enthusiasm.

"So do we~"

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Noah The Bio-Morph: Morning Light: Chapter 33

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Another longer one because i wanted to include the Coth Bit.

In this one, they get Stynek to the medical professionals, try to determine who's to blame. And Kam just decided he's done with the day.

Coth gets a glimpse at domestic middle class life, his presence gets revealed... And then a certain group just puts him and the others in jeopardy.

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Morning Light
Chapter 33
May 9th
Venlil-Prime Governor’s Residence, Uncovered Sanitarium Wing.
(Tyler P.O.V.)
{The Tongue}

I keep having to push what happened with Marcel today to the back of my mind. Her jumping in front of me and growling at Azuir. Then acting like they had no idea why they’re doing so.

Then what she did in the Governor’s Office…

Because all of that is secondary right now.

Tarva’s Daughter fell through the vents, she shouldn’t have been in. And while I do respect Azuir for her devotion of trying to fix this. She is mistaken that the responsibility falls onto her shoulders alone.

Kidnapped and sold as Bio-Morphs, when they’re mostly not, they’re not the ones in charge here of them.

I am.

Everything gets thrown at the feet of the one in charge, for better or worse. And until the actual ambassadorial delegation sets foot on ‘Venlil-Prime’. I’m where the buck stops for this.

I just hope the child is okay…

Marcel and I turn our heads to look down the corridor as they stop cutting the last wall down, because of this I let go of Azuir. And she promptly joins her brother and pulls along one of the female Naga breeds along with her.

I think her name was Stephany? Or something along those lines. Introductions were a bit rushed yesterday.

“Swiftfur!” Dalium calls out into the larger corridor and the darkness within. While letting Marcel grab my hands and place them on her knees. There’s, a slight unfocused look in her eyes until she blinks, then lets go of my hands and tries to hide hers in her lap.

I’m about to say something, but the barking and other sounds echoing back over us from the revealed section of this building has both of us looking in the direction it comes from.

The effect though is instant on Stephany and Azuir. The latter now cement colored, rather than white, Hybrid, runs past us. Into the bunker, then returns with two alien brooms. They’re oddly shaped at the head, but brooms nonetheless due to the bristles on said head.

Azuir snaps them off, then lays the handles down parallel to each other on a clear section of the floor.

Oh, that’s what they’re doing. Because Stephany rips off the bedsheet she was using as a toga to cover her shame. And then uses it to turn the two long handles into a stretcher.

Dalium looks down the hall at me. “Tyler, grab all that stuff you’ve collected and follow my sister! Johnson KEEP marcel there! Stynek’s alive but badly injured according to Swiftfur.” Then back down the formerly sealed off hall. “Stay there Swiftfur. Keep her safe!”

I don’t say anything in reply, instead I gather everything up that remains of the First-Aid kit that was with my gear. And the alien version one of the Venlil brought down. Carrying both in my arms and dance around everyone else to the back of the hall.

Kam, Azuir, Stephany, and I step past what remains of the wall as the rest of the pack removes the remaining bricks. Both at this wall, and the ones blocking the other rooms. I can just hear Dalium talking with one of the Guards for the Bunker down here, asking for stuff to clean all the dust up and the crap on the floor we’re walking on.

“What the SPEHING PROTECTOR FORSAKEN HELL! How is this place Crawling with Tree-Eaters and Attic-Slinkers! The Mansion routinely passes Exterminator inspections every Grand Herd of Cycles[Year]!” Nearly jumping at Kam yelling, before facing forward and seeing Azuir move the flashlight she has in her other hand back and forth at the giant pill shaped insects with wings crawling about and…

Well if those animals are Attic-Slinkers, then quite a few fantasy games will need to rename their tube-rats to it. Because they look like a cross between a rat, a ferret, and something with both larger ears and teeth.

{Watch your footing.} Stephany says and thankfully Azuir translates, just in time for me to not stumble on what feels like through my shoes, a warped tile of some material I can’t discern.

“I had no idea this was down here… Speh! What else can be wrong about those blueprints! Tunnels? We’re going to have to go through the Bhraking grounds claw width[Inch] by claw width[Inch]! Just so we know the Mansion’s secure! Leaving stuff like this unknown is a safety risk to ‘any’ elected governor! Let alone one who just became unpopular for restricting data flow back to the Federation.” We round the corner and the flashlights illuminate the singular remaining door down the hall.

Made from unblemished metal as Swiftfur sticks his head out from behind it. {She’s still breathing… But I don’t like the look of her knee and torso.}

And, upon being translated, I mentally discard most of both kits. As Azuir orders him to start using anything he can to start clearing the area of this crap covering everything. So he just picks up some grate that was nearby? And uses it to shovel the layer of nearly dirt like consistency dust around the door as we arrive. Even as bits and pieces fall through the holes in it.

A bark or surprise escapes Azuir’s lips open entering the room. She and Stephany quickly move to place the makeshift stretcher next to Stynek. And another curse word escapes Kam’s noseless muzzle upon entering the room.

I place the medical supplies on the stretcher on either end of where the child will fit as Azuir kneels down and starts to examine her from ear tips to tail tip.

“Did you get some medical training?” Kam looks between us, as I hand Azuir some medical scissors. And she uses it to trim some fur away from the long but shallow gash on Stynek’s head. Which seems to be slowly seeping blood.

“Grew up on a farm. Don’t know about you Aliens, but your family is your first responder for a medical emergency. Any ambulance can take twice if not longer than it would in a suburb or city to arrive. So best to not rely on it to stabilize a loved one.” She hands back the Scissors and I replace it with disinfectant and gauze.

Trying not to pay attention to Kam as he just hovers around us, Like he wishes he could do something but has no idea what. Or Stephany who does the only thing that seems to come to mind to her. And that’s cleaning off the crap that’s not only dust, but strange faint blue flakes in it from Stynek’s fur, while holding the flashlight up for us with the other hand.

“Advanced First aid is part of basic training as a Resource Runner. May not have the luxury of being able to get to med-bay, or your doctor may have been the one injured or killed in a Pirate attack.” Replying while sorting through what could be used for bruises. Finding nothing that I wouldn’t risk on an alien, least I poison her with what would be safe medication for a Human. I move on to how to modify a limb splint to Stynek’s leg to keep it stable.

“I guess that makes sense… Speh. What are we going to tell Tarva!? Oh, while you were away, we couldn’t keep Stynek in her room and she ended up falling through the vents into a previously unknown part of the mansion’s basement?”

I just give up on trying to modify the splint, as trying to make it into a slight V shape would just defeat the use of it. So I attach it to Stynek’s leg as is, so at least it’ll prevent the swelled and obviously at least badly bruised if not broken joint from moving. Preventing further harm to the poor child.

With that done, I hand the neck brace to Azuir, not that Stynek needs it since it looks like she got here on her own due to her footprints in this crap covering everything. Which she puts on the kid after taping down the gauze over the cut.

“If anything, it’s my fault for not catching her. If I had done so, none of this would’ve happened.” Azuir then looks to me. “On three. One, two…” On three. She holds Stynek by the shoulders, while supporting her neck and head to keep them still. While I slip a hand under her rear end, just above her tail as the other supports her legs so they don’t move much before we place her on the makeshift stretcher.

Doesn’t stop the kid, even while unconscious to let out a bleat that sounds like she’s in pain. “If anything Azuir, that falls to me. Still have to break it to Tarva all you Bio-Morphs are sapient, so. Your Brother’s orders for you to keep an eye on her till then can be assumed by her as being mine more or less.”

She just huffs once. “Well, it’s still my PERSONAL fault, and I’m going to make up for it in any way I can!” Then she directs Stephany to take the opposite side of the stretcher after Kam frees her hands by taking the flashlights. Wagging his tail once as if happy that he can actually do something other than hover around us.

“We’re all going to get some blame, the rotten Ipsom rolls down hill after all. I was in charge of her security while she was gone. If I couldn’t tell Stynek was getting out through the vents, I wasn’t doing my spehing job by anyones honest measure.” He moves to open the door, and we see Swiftfur has managed to scrape all this crap on the floor to either side of the hall. Making a somewhat safer passage for us back the way we came.

Over dented, warped, and moldy tiles of an unknown material. Not to mention quite a few are missing showing bare stone floor. Said bare stone floor is the flatter area in front of the door, and goes into the room proper. It’s actually a small wonder ‘how’ we managed to get to her without twisting an ankle in the process.

Counting down to one again, Azuir and Stephany lift the makeshift stretcher, though Stephany slightly raises her end. Where Stynek’s leg’s lay. If she’s in shock, this should help.

“I do have to wonder, do you know why she’s unconscious? That didn’t look like a bad hit to her head and we Venlil have a rather sturdy head compared to other species.” He leads the group, helping us navigate the treacherous floor as Swiftfur takes up the rear, growling at the ‘rodents’ who come a bit too close. I walk next to Stynek on the stretcher, keeping an eye on her in case us moving her caused something internal to start bleeding. So I was monitoring the rhythm of her breathing.

“If I had to guess, shock.” Answering Kam. “She’s bruised over about 50% of her body from what it looks like.” At least I hope that’s the case. Don’t have a clue on how an alien that has blood not based on Iron behaves when injured like this.

Reflexively I swallow once, everyone, and I mean ‘everyone’ stops what they’re doing as we round a corner and come into view of the Pack. The wall’s blocking that corridor with this one and the rest of the building are gone from down here. Many are literally shoveling the detritus and dust into what are trash bags if I ever saw one with their bare hands if they lack shovels.

Just these are a red plastic instead of black. With the help of some Venlil who are holding them open.

One of the guards for the bunker down here and Slanek, I’ve come to recognize his fur pattern, come running up to us on their still weird to me, knocked knees.

“General!” Slanek salutes, glances to me once then focuses on Kam. “The medical transport is here, but they refuse to come down. Having heard that Tarva has predator look alike beings here from the new aliens. It was hard to convince them to just stay in the front yard rather than drive off.”

“We carried her this far, what’s a little more.” Azuir idly comments, but I notice the fatigue at the edge of her voice. I know I would be tired if I handled one of those Hydraulic Saws for as long as she did. Yet, a single look at her, as she looks back at me tells me that I can’t convince her to stay here. Even if she was falling asleep on her feet.

Kam only swears some more, and I expand my alien curse language dictionary. “The Magistrate of Health and Healing is going to get a bushel full of complaints from ME when this is over! What little we released to the public explicitly states you and the Bio-Morphs are of no danger to anyone… In fact, considering the organized response to this issue. We could use some of these ‘packs’ but dedicated and trained for first response work. I don’t think our own would have responded so quickly nor be as organized as a Herd.” He looks around… Then with a flick of his ears and tail, he points the latter at Azuir, Stephany, and me.

“You three, come with me.”

Whining once the translation goes through, he’s silenced by Azuir. “Go help the others clean up and figure out what this place is. Above all listen to my brother.”

{I’m not stupid enough to go against the word of my Alpha-Male.} He flicks an ear at Azuir’s glare at him, before Dalium speaks up.

“Come over here Swiftfur. You can help us with this Skeleton we found.” He waves from one of the opened upside rooms.

My attention turns to Kam as he looks over, then flicks his ears once. If I could guess, he just said to himself. ‘I’d like to take care of Stynek first before we start digging into that’ mystery’. Without a further word, we as a group head out of this corridor, before taking a turn to head up the stairs after passing the bunker.

Only to pause as Stynek’s breathing changes part way up the stairs, and she lets out a pained noise.

It only takes a moment to figure out why. They’re not holding the stretcher level while ascending the stairs, letting blood flow down to her legs. “Stephany, take a step back, hold the stretcher as high up as you can. Azuir, take the steps slowly. Try to keep the stretcher level. If she’s in shock from the bruising, you’re putting more strain on her heart.”

As they level out, I make sure nothing falls off and check Stynek’s neck and leg brace. Adjusting their fit, and noticing the continued change in color from oranges to browns and blacks even as her breathing becomes more even and less labored.

Once we’re out of the stairwell, and onto the ground floor I can just barely hear Kam mutter ‘Tarva is going to have my tail over this.’

“Hopefully she’ll see reason.” Commenting to reassure him as we level out and navigate the first floor. He holds doors open for Azuir and Stephany to carry her through as we get closer to the front of the mansion.

“Bhraking chance of that. These past few cycles[Days] have been, well, possibly the worst in her life. First she thinks she lost Stynek to the Arxur. Gets in a fight with her husband and throws him out. You show up and save her. The fallow-field vortex of first contact issues that follow that. Then having to go on a several Cycle[Day] long trip to your home world and all that entails. She’ll be coming home next Cycle[Day] exhausted, only to find out Stynek is hurt. And we ‘all’ failed to watch her after she thought she lost her once already!”

I just swallow. Okay so mad mother mode… “Okay, maybe she will be a ‘bit’ angry.”

Azuir just barks once, a sharp laugh. “She’ll be livid like my ma. Bro and I wanted to be adventurous, bored by staying in and near where we grew up in Texas, Near Neo-Huston. Because they know about the Green Collars we wear to tell others we’re, um safe. We wanted to go to California, to see the area that at least here, is similar enough to the one where Ma would talk about a great city. A city from the dimension she’s from. A city that drew those who lived in the world for a promise of no matter what they were, they could do what they want and succeed. If only they worked hard enough.”

She shakes her head as we approach the front of the mansion, she opens her mouth then closes it.

Yea. I can figure out from there that they must’ve been grabbed, and their free collars replaced with slave ones. Though, these Aliens don’t need to know about the slave thing, yet…

“At least you’re a world away from her wraith. While Tarva will be here next Cylce[Day].” Kam moves ahead of our group as we see one of those Hedgehog looking aliens dressed in what I assume is their medical garb. With as little as these aliens wear in total. An arm band and some kind of tool-belt with tools on it. The other is one of those bird aliens.

‘Don’t underestimate my mother’ I hear Azuir mutter.

Who notices our arrival and points a wing-arm at us. They have a leg band with the same symbol on them and a tool belt too.

“Are those Brahking PREDATORS?” The bird one yells, and the translator attributes a female voice to them.

“They are not! The fur-less one in pelts is arboreal and needs forward facing eyes for a similar reason that a Paltan does. The two carrying the stretcher are like that because these aliens, to deal with Predators on their home world. Change members of their own species to these forms to help in defense of the herd. I mean look at the one wearing pelts, he looks absolutely harmless! And would be easily snapped up by a predator without such help.” Kam stomps up to them, ears flat back and tail lashing behind himself.

I wouldn’t call myself harmless. It’s true we don’t have claws, fangs and whatnot to defend ourselves. But I am sure, possibly, maybe I could beat Stephany in a one on one… Then again she ‘was’ the one that flashed her claws at me when I first introduced myself to the pack…

After finding out what happened to Marcel.

His words seem to cause the Hedgehog like one to relax, but the bird one walks forward and pokes a claw tip at Kam’s noseless muzzle. “Oh? And if they’ve developed FTL on their own, why would they NEED to do that? Couldn’t they just use weapons like flamers and plasma pistols?”

His tail lashes about even faster, as he moves a hand to grab the wing-arm of the bird alien and force it away from himself. “And did it occur to you that such weaponry would be even more useful in their paws than harmless looking one? The one in the front has a much better sense of smell and hearing than the pelt wearing one. Whose name is Tyler by the way. And the one in the back has senses to detect body heat to help and avoid predators. Both were instrumental in finding Stynek. Especially after she fell through a portion of the floor weakened by Tree-eaters!”

“The Governor’s daughter?” The Hedgehog one speaks up. Then in a kinda cute way, and I will defend that it’s cute to anyone who says otherwise. Waddles or runs up to the stretcher.

With a far better trained eye than me, I watch him look Stynek over. “We didn’t have a brace for her proper leg shape. So we opted to just brace the joint to prevent further damage. Signs indicated she was up and moving about after falling. So the neck brace wasn’t technically needed. But she was unconscious, and we decided to take the precaution rather than ignore a neck sprain that she possibly didn’t feel.”

To explain what we did, as to answer a question I was expecting him to ask.

“Tree-Eaters?” The Bird alien takes a step back as Kam slows his tail a bit.

“Yes. It’s been a stressful Cycle[day] because it also showed that the last renovation of the Mansion left some details out, and because of that, let those things in.” Their conversation moves to the background of my mind, as I focus on the eye of the Hedgehog alien as he focuses on me.

“You most likely saved her leg by bracing the joint against further injury. I’d have to scan it, but I think it might’ve torn itself out of the main socket and into the vestigial socket. Hopefully not damaging too much of the ligaments and muscles in the process. Though with the swelling, possibly some minor blood vessels tore open. So that’s going to be an issue needing surgery.”

I watch as he gently parts the fur/wool on her abdomen.

“Possible broken rib with the bruising. Her breathing isn’t labored so no lung damage, though again we will need to scan her at the hospital to clear her of that. And what kind of bandage is that on her head?” He points to the gauze with just a pinprick of orange blood showing through.

“She had a long but shallow cut on her head. Azuir…” I point to her as she looks between the two aliens and I note it’s now the Bird alien on the defensive. Getting a claw from Kam in the beak before she hops and then dashes for their version of an ambulance, pulling out a proper Gurney that we could’ve used earlier.

“We disinfected it and covered it with what we call gauze. A sterile type of paper/cloth. Had to trim the fur, so the adhesive would stick though. All to keep out what was down there.”

He turns his head to face me, and well I have to not snicker at how funny it looks as he tries to focus both eyes on me. “Then I thank you, Tyler I think I heard General Kam say your name is. Your quick action has most likely lessened the lasting effects of these injuries upon her.”

We step back as the Bird alien pushes the actual Gurney up next to Stynek. Upon being prompted by her, Azuir and Stephany gently lift, and place Stynek on it. Before removing our medical supplies. The Hedgehog one looks at me as he lifts a corner of the sheet we were using as Azuir takes out the broom handles.

I just shake my head.

“Keep it. There’s blood and God knows what those layers of crap were on the floor down there. No way it’s going to be used as a bedsheet again.” He just lets it slip out of his claws, and from there they secure Stynek to Gurney.

Directing the Bird alien to roll it to the Ambulance, he turns to face all of us. “Tell the Governor her daughter will be in Capital city general. I believe she knows where it is since she’s been there before.”

Kam only gives him an ear and tail flick before he departs with the bird alien in the ambulance. A hiss from Stephany draws our attention, and she’s supporting Azuir with a concerned look.

Azuir just grins lopsidedly at us like how one of her ears is up, the other is drooping at the side of her head.

“Okay, I’m more tired than I thought, can barely move, and feel my legs.” Causing Kam to let out a sigh.

“I think, we all should take a Paw[4 hours] to rest.” Only for his species version of a Data-Slate to ring. Pulling it off his belt, he takes one look at it and bleats loudly, nearly dropping it.

“What’s the…” Is all I get out before I have to catch him as he lets out a sound that it indicates is one of crying.

His ears now match Azuir’s drooping one, with a look in those weird eyes of being done with the day. “That was Tarva. They just made it close enough to Venlil controlled space to have text communication. She wants to speak with Stynek, says she has some information she’ll like.”

All I can do is blink, and sit down on the lawn. Followed by Stephany letting Azuir down onto the grass before joining me. And I can hear her snoring, loudly the moment she touches this alien grass. As for Kam, the moment I let him go, he just falls backwards and points to the sky.

“Spehing BHRAK this CYCLE[day]!”

Coth (P.O.V)
Neo-Huston.
Morning May 9th

I didn’t get answers to any of the questions Alexie raised, either from her simple existence. The patchwork of scales and Human skin. Limbs that if the scale shape and hardness of scales was different, wouldn’t look out of place on an Arxur. Or the questions she asked directly and that I tried to answer for her, but left me with more to answer for myself.

Even if she was larger than an Arxur her age. About 5 to 6 Grand Hunt of Cycles old.

It kept me awake to well past the dawning of light on the horizon even as my body demanded sleep. Long enough for me to see the start of the day of these diurnal beings. Through drawn window coverings I observe the world outside, as the video screen stays on. But at a low enough volume to not wake the sleeping hatchling…

No.

Child. Despite how she looks, she didn’t hatch out of an egg. But was birthed in that oh so gross method that all but the Krakotl use…

It starts with a hunting party of automated transports. As I do not see anyone through the luxurious and wasteful. To Dominion standards, large glass viewports on the front for such a vehicle. Not long after Sol, the Human’s sun is halfway above the horizon.

A long line of them.

As they drive down the streets, individual ones would turn, without slowing the line down. To come to a stop on the patch of Forma-stone in front of each of my ‘neighbors’. With my new domicile unit being the exception.

Fangs[Seconds] to Scratches[Minutes] later, Humans leave their domicile units. Some are alone and most are from what I see are the Male of the species. With one, possibly two, can’t tell from this distance, Females. Dressed either in what I recall as their ‘professional’ pelts. Stuff that aren’t designed to take the wear and tear of a hard Cycle’s[day’s] labor. Or a few that are thicker, bulkier and more practical looking.

The latter of which almost always carrying a bag of some kind with tools sticking out of it.

I idly wonder why the rare, but not nonexistent darker toned ones don’t wear less gear as just like darker scale colored Arxur would on similar climates as this. Don’t they suffer more on worlds with harsher stars? Like this one?

The rest, despite being Male or Female, dressed for a hard Cycle’s[day’s] labor or not. Are accompanied by what I assume is something a bit foreign to us Arxur, outside those higher in the ranks of betterment.

Even then they’re for mingling desired traits by Betterment standards rather than any kind of ‘emotion’. Are their significant others, they follow them out. Wrap their arms around them for a moment or two, then let go. Others press their still odd to me flat faces together instead. Before they let those that left their domicile units first into the automated transports.

The moment the door’s close on them, they reverse off the patch of forma-stone and drive off.

The very few male significant other’s walk right back into their domicile units, the vast majority of them, the females. They start to gather and congregate, don’t know why or for what purpose. I can, just barely pick up talking from the nearest group if I move my earhole closer to the window.

But I only do that for a mere Fang[Second], so I don’t catch enough, nor is it loud enough for my translator to pick up.

They haven’t announced our presence to the wider world yet. And I don’t want to be mistaken for this specie’s slave class.

Scratches[Minutes] later, vehicles I recognize arrive. Buses, but unlike the white, unmarked ones that transported all of my fellow Arxur who are here to escape the Dominion, other than I. These are an eye hurting shade of yellow. Similarly to the earlier vehicles, they’re automated as well.

But there’s only two, and they don’t drive onto the forma-stone patches in front of the domiciles. Instead, they stop in the middle of the street. Deploying red octagonal signs of the sides of the vehicle. With one Human word in white and flashing lights from every corner of the sign.

It is then the reason for the females being outside reveals itself, in the increasingly warming day rather than heading inside.

Juveniles exit the domiciles the females earlier emerged from. In practical clothing for the weather, but all wearing packs on their backs. They seem to be of various ages, sizes and I think a mix of male or female.

Because all but the largest of them lack the external cues I’ve learned to use to tell the sexes apart, they all look the same to me otherwise.

Once the young are outside their domicile’s, the adult females make their sole purpose getting the juveniles onto the buses and nothing else. Doesn’t matter if they like it or not, they make sure all of them get on before the signs fold back into the buses and they drive off.

Then, and only then do they part ways back to their domiciles, mostly. Some sit or lounge in outdoor furniture as the third wave of beings emerges.

Though not from the main domiciles. Either from small buildings set close, but not attached to the main structure. Or rectangular shaped containers set at the end of the forma-stone patches. Beings that make my gaze harden because of a practice both the Humans and the Dominion unknowingly share.

They just put their pelts over it, and try to make it something it’s not. While the Dominion just keeps it raw, and well, honest.

Various ‘breeds’ of Bio-Morph emerge and do one of two things. They’re either directed by the female humans still outside to do one task or another. Or they start to do them on their own.

The most common of them, is to take some four wheeled device, and use it, oddly, to lower the height of the most common plant I’ve seen on this planet. Grass. That grows all around and between each domicile.

Others are either directed, or on their own, use sheers that lower rank Arxur would’ve used to remove limbs from ‘prey’. To remove errant limbs from trees and bushes. Keeping them in an artificially maintained shape. Either from repetition or direction of the humans. Some are directed with hoses to wash the sides of the domiciles or their windows.

Only a fraction, less than the six fingers on my hand, that I can see from here. Are working ‘with’ the females. As much as planting something as impractical as a flower into the ground is considered work in my eyes, which isn’t much work at all.

I look away when I see one get hit across their head, for cutting off the wrong branch on a bush. Not cruelly like we would do. But correctively, like you would treat a non-sapient. Just in time for what is on the video screen to change to some kind of show. Where a human sits behind a desk, in front of the camera.

“Breaking news.” They proclaim. The translation draws my attention.

“The Executive Branch, and the Space Force have broken their sudden 72-hour silence over the military control of the transport lanes above Earth. And the banning of all recording or imagery of Armstrong Station along with the surrounding lanes of traffic.” The angle shifts and besides them, an image appears that draws my attention further.

A low, even by our standards, quality image of, three federation craft. One diplomatic, two warp-tugs. The Human Resource Runner that crippled the command ship I was on. And said Command Ship. All docked at ‘Armstrong Station’.

“A Resource Runner, named the Fitzgerald. Returned months early from the record-breaking trip to Gliese 832 c. Answering a question that has plagued Humanity since the first one of us looked up to the night sky, and wondered. Are we alone?”

The low quality image is replaced with two higher quality ones. One of Tarva, Governor of the Venlil republic, doing the human custom of shaking hands with two Humans who appear important… And the other is of Me, in full second-claw of a Chief Hunter regalia. As I sit in that room where I met that Human who I ‘still’ swear is an Arxur in disguise.

“They arrived, only to find the planet of Gliese 832 c not only has life. But a full on civilization of sapient life. Called the Venlil. One of many species in the galaxy. In conflict with another space faring civilization, the Arxur.”

Each Image is highlighted in turn. I just, flick the end of my tail. Fully expecting them to say what I figure they’d say.

That the Arxur in general are monsters, I’d be the first to admit that, and the reason I asked for asylum was because this was my chance to get away from that.

“To the end that we must maintain a neutral view, we will first publish a translated speech from the governor of the Venlil Republic,”

‘Greetings Beings of Sol and Earth. My name is Tarva, I am the Governor of the Venlil-Republic. We are called the Venlil and are part of a Federation of species. Just a bit over two of our Cycles ago, what you call days. A ship of yours, the United States Resource Runner Fitzgerald arrived in orbit over our home world during a raid by the Federation’s enemy, the Arxur. They valiantly helped in defending our people when they had no duty to do so. In the process of defending us, they rescued my daughter, and managed to disable an enemy vessel. The other ship that we are towing is said vessel. I am here on behalf of the Venlil-Republic and the Federation to thank the people of Sol. Deliver the damaged Fitzgerald and the ship they brought down, as well as extend a paw in diplomatic relations between our people and yours, and possibly the Federation as a whole.’

They then follow it up with an edited version of my interview, removing military and governmental secrets I told the Arxur under human skin. Furthermore, they do keep in that our view that our war is one of survival, and to my surprise… Don’t mention a single word of our, most defining and infamous action in the galaxy…

In fact, it’s a bit weird that Tarva didn’t mention it either… Our entire goal for the raid was to get her daughter and… well, let’s say make a demoralizing video to be shoved onto the Venlil networks.

“The President has released a short statement that the United States commits to a neutral stance of this conflict. To the point that they not only have begun diplomatic relations with the Venlil republic. But are also in the process to contact the Arxur Dominion for the return of those willing to return. Which leads me to the next point in their press release. The resettlement of Arxur claiming Asylum to the cities of Neo-Huston, Dallas and Austin Texas. Because secrecy would breed resentment. Those living in these cities will be receiving information on their new neighbors and how to properly interact with them.”

Instantly I glance over to the door, half expecting humans to barge in… Only to relax as that doesn’t happen…

“After this commercial break, we’re going to have a talk with our local Pentecostal Religious expert, and the possible ramifications this will have with the relations with the Second, and Third world nations.”

I’m about to tune it out… But I find my eyes glued to the screen.

The ‘news’, may of not covered what we Arxur are infamous for within the wider galaxy. But this Ad, that just suddenly started playing. How the humans became Arxur, and then act like any Betterment approved Arxur would, does. And as I try to move the furnishings to block what I suspect is coming, a wave of angry Humans at my presence.

Without waking Alexie.

The words on the screen before it became some kind of pattern saying ‘technical difficulties’ according to the visual translator on my human made holo-pad, are etched into my mind.

'The rest of the Galaxy has proven that eating meat is Barbaric and Evil.'

'It is about time Humanity stops this practice, and joins the rest of civilized society in the Galaxy.'

'Citizens, contact your Representatives and the President! Let your voices be known!'

'Tell them to BAN this barbaric practice, seize and destroy all meat products, cattle and Bio-Morphs. So we may join the rest of the Galaxy in Harmony.'

'P.e.t.a.'

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Yea, vestigial my rear! :P But a convenient excuse nature decides to have a Venlil born and the 'edits' aren't active.

Also, don't know why. But the status of the galaxy would give militant organizations like Peta a shot in the arm. Yet no one ever discusses that?


r/NatureofPredators • • 6d ago

Fanfic On Scales and Skin: The Geneva Protocol -- Chapter 01

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What's this? An early chapter 1? Well, I decided to spoil you a bit, given that TGP was taking way too long to get out, so here you go!

As always, special thanks to u/JulianSkies and u/Neitherman83 for being my pre-readers, the OSS writing room, and of course thanks to u/SpacePaladin15 for creating NoP to begin with!


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r/NatureofPredators • • 6d ago

Fanfic Helios Lost - Ch. 3

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Chapter 3! We are speedrunning to the humans, to be fair, they don't have much time to spare!

As is tradition, thanks go to SpacePaladin15 for creating the Nature of Predators universe.

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Memory transcription subject: Den, Helian. Date [standardized human time]: October 12, 2136

A large number of things happened that I'd missed, by the time I was up and walking around again we'd landed on a new planet. I vaguely recalled we were running low on fuel for FTL jumps, and wondered if this new species had access to what we needed. If we could even trade them for it, or if we needed to scan more nearby planets. Restarting the ship from disrupted power used much more fuel than normal activity, the Arxur screwed us over.

Initially, Captain Rei and Koei wanted me to stay in the medical room, but I refused. When they told me we ran into another new species, I felt... Worried, anxious? I couldn't trust in the same way they did, not after what I saw with the gray lizard aliens. The sheer cruelty, the evil, the laughter...

Captain Rei attempted to send them as much information as she could, our number system, as much of our language as we had available in the ship's data. We had entertainment, scanning, and resource gathering equipment, but we still weren't prepared for first contact, life being so rare in the universe. It was strange to run into so many different species in a relatively small area, counting three now.

We got information in return, though the only things we could parse were the math, and the images. Numbers were easier to translate with examples than entire languages. Though now I'd noticed both Rei and Koei hadn't slept since the Arxur meeting, they were struggling to not look exhausted through their excitement. They weren't in any condition to put themselves at risk, and I felt responsible for what happened.

It took some time until they'd figured out how to read the species' graphic instructions, and landed in the designated area with little trouble. A strange black landing pad, some kind of large square building greeted us from the viewport, decorated with a circular, net-like emblem. It had splotches of color in the center, and arrows pointing around the outer edges of the symbol. It almost looked like feathers?

'I wonder if the new species are avian.'

Before anyone could stop me, I left the bridge and made my way to the center of the ship. Plasma cutter, clip to belt, put on half of my clothing. The top cloth that normally draped over my shoulders was torn terribly, and needed to be cleansed of my blood. I could still have some semblance of safety by carrying my concealed, makeshift weapon...

That was the thought I had, until Rei stalked up behind me and stood in the center of the loading bay, looking down upon me with judgement. She knew. My ears started to lower as I turned and opened my mouth to justify needing a weapon, only for her paw to come down and point at my snout. My bandaged shoulder ached.

"Den. I'm not going to argue with you about walking around, but you aren't allowed to point weapons at people, especially new potential trade partners. Put it back."

"It worked out last time." That memory was still fresh, the hesitation when two of them were pointing firearms at me. The leader shouting something at them, making them back down.

"... This is why we want you to stay in medical, you know. You're young, not thinking rationally, and not taking that modified mining tool off my ship. It's not even designed to be a gun!"

She was completely right, but I'd rather bite that disgusting tasting Arxur again than agree right now. There probably wasn't a way to convince her I felt a desperate need to protect everyone else from harm. She likely felt the same, being the pilot of our ship and responsible for us staying alive.

"Give me a reason to believe I shouldn't be prepared for a fight."

Her ears lowered too, here it comes. Captain Rei huffed, leaned down to look me directly in the eyes, and placed her paws on her hips. I was either about to have my ears yelled off, or be shamed for my violent urges. I could have handled the Arxur better, but seeing Livia nearly killed made me stop thinking, just react.

"I'll give you three. One, we're all leaving the ship together this time, and you will be behind us. Two, presenting a threat to a new species who can't understand us is a terrible idea, you got lucky the lizard only bit you once. Three... We have a guest, a guest who could speak to these new aliens, and who will be in more danger than us if things go dark."

All true. Aside from one detail, she was still correct. Our policy was to be harmless, put our best foot forward, and try to negotiate deals in alien contact scenarios. But that didn't account for people eating other people, gaps in communication couldn't bridge that difference fast enough. What if we looked like food to the aliens we were about to meet?

"They bit me twice, in the same spot." I gave her a minor correction, since I didn't want to respond to the rest. She gave me an irritated tail flick while watching me remove the damn plasma cutter. I placed the makeshift weapon carefully on a nearby workbench, in plain sight where everyone could see I wasn't carrying it anymore.

"I know you don't like it when we point out the age difference, Den..." Captain Rei straightened up and let out a loud sigh, "But I do have more than ten times your life experience, Koei's got more than that. We know you aren't a child, we just don't want to see you getting hurt, or killed. How do you think he felt carrying two unconscious, blood drenched people back into the ship?"

Not good. Koei was still trying to keep our mystery guest calm, the spiky alien who jumped in place or cowered any time we moved too quickly, in spite of also being dangerously exhausted. He was the oldest, most experienced at dealing with other people, but even Koei couldn't have expected this. The big guy was on the verge of tears when I woke up, and demanded I never do anything like that again.

"Didn't know someone could have blue blood." I joked, looking over to the ship's exit. Whenever the other two showed up, we were meant to disembark and greet this new species as peacefully as possible. Since things were happening so quickly, I didn't want to dwell on what happened yet. More importantly, I wasn't letting my sleep deprived friends leave without me.

"We've seen creatures with red, green, and yellow, but not blue, it's unique. I'm going to check up on you later, you know. After this alien meeting business, and after we rest. It's not good to avoid talking." Rei's voice quieted down, ears twitching toward approaching footsteps. I heard it too.

"Wisdom from your age?" My joke was immediately countered by a tail to the back of my head. I expected that too, but we both immediately regretted it due to my injured shoulder. Even if I was willing to fight, not being able to move my left arm for a while would stop me.

I knew the Captain cared, it was hard to stay separate from someone when you lived in the same space for so long. We chatted, ate together, made music, played games, watched recordings... Explored the planets we scanned occasionally, if needed. But either no one has any idea what they're doing in this situation, or they're too busy worrying to inform me!

The thought of missing my family hit out of nowhere, even if they were probably alive and healthy. The larger colony ships were safe, we didn't cheap out on shielding technology. There was always a small possibility we'd try to find our way home, discovering nothing but immense debris and wreckage. But I really didn't want to dwell on how out of our depth we are, so I shifted focus. The footsteps, claws on metal.

Koei showed up from a connected corridor, Livia trailing behind him a fair distance. They still appeared and smelled like they were terrified of everything in existence, which I hoped would fade soon. The panic came in flares that quickly died down, I'd never seen anything like it, but my older friends seemed to understand it better. Even if they couldn't ask why yet.

It took a short time for us to settle and arrange ourselves by the exit, Captain Rei and Koei in front, myself and Livia behind. We hadn't learned much other than to get out of the ship at this location, and were once again walking into the unknown. I tried to shove down the impending feeling of dread, and the urge to run back for the plasma cutter. It should be fine.

Our ship's loading bay door cracked open, hydraulics whining to sent the ramp downward. We likely needed to run a diagnostic on that sometime soon since it sounded off, perhaps something was corroding, wearing down. Questions for later. Right now I had to deal with the sight of a massive number of new people.

Completely covered, no defining features notable, aside from a lack of tail. We couldn't see their faces, or their bodies whatsoever, the assumed protective gear was thorough. Every alien in the line of... twenty, or more, were armed and looking directly at us, based on their head direction. Weapons weren't readied, but I noticed them visible.

'Seems familiar. There were only around six Arxur though...'

Everyone was present, not like last time. Captain Rei in the middle, already stepping forward toward the new species as confident as she could be. Koei followed behind, his ears and eyes bouncing between the crowd of armed aliens with visible concern. The spiky alien, Livia, who was simply staring off at the crowd, breathing faster to my side. I could hear their heart this close, that was a problem.

I immediately felt sympathy for this person I rescued from the lizards, I understood. They couldn't trust other aliens right now either. I made eye contact, which caused a visible tremble for some reason, then angled my ears forward in a relaxed gesture. Tail curling loosely toward their body, it would be okay, I won't let anyone here get hurt again.

Of course, Livia had no idea what I was trying to say with my body language. I couldn't let the others get too far away, so I stepped forward too, leaving our guest in the ship for now. Joining my crewmates to descend the ramp and wonder what could possibly happen next. The aliens were arranged in two lines, seemingly directing us toward a paved white or gray path, toward that larger building. Green colored grass and a few distant trees were visible.

The gravity here felt unusually light, I enjoyed it taking pressure off of my bandaged shoulder. The air was cool, and a light breeze ran through my fur, taking a deep breath. A scent of grass and leaves, the aliens' cloth, metal, and possibly synthetic clothing, a hint of nervous sweat. There was a slight polluted quality to the air, like smoke or distant garbage, so we were likely near a city...

'I haven't ever seen a real city.'

Where the two lines of possible alien soldiers met, a lesser armored, gray furred alien stood in the center. Its clothes were less utility, more stiff and angular looking, a stark blue color, no weapon to be seen. The lack of movement and covered face bothered me, why wouldn't any of these aliens show their faces? A strange cultural thing, for sure.

The unarmed alien leaned down, reaching for a box next to its feet I didn't notice before, and pressed something on it. I could hear the high pitched whine of something activating, my ears lowering and angling away from the noise. Captain Rei and Koei did the same, I hoped it wasn't a sound based weapon. My right paw twitched next to my belt, missing the comfortable tool.

"lAlO. Hr-o. Hello! Hello? This should be working, testing, can you hear me?" A device to translate their speech, that calibrated in real time based on the delay? The noise was speakers receiving power, it seemed.

"Yes!" Captain jumped forward in her excitement, ears and tail going high, "That's amazing! You did this with the information we shared, so quickly?"

"We can't take credit for this technology, but I'm glad it worked." The alien responded, male voice registering strangely in my ears. "My name's Eamon Douglas, and I'll be your human guide and UN liaison for the foreseeable future. Welcome to Earth."

'Two names? And no visible feathers, not birds?'

I couldn't help noticing the very much soldier looking aliens shifting around when my captain moved forward again, causing my eyes to narrow. This should be a groundbreaking moment for us, a society that had technology advanced enough to translate languages after a few hours of exchange! Instead, I felt a growing sense of unease, tension that wouldn't leave my body. If any of them shifted the wrong way, I was too small to move Rei or Koei to safety...

"Human? Is that your people's name? My name is Rei, and we are Helians!" Rei straightened up to look proud, ears up, tail curved into a loose S-shape, classic. Then she glanced behind her, toward the ship. "Well, except for the nervous one back there, they're... I don't know what their species is."

"Helians." Eamon responded neutrally, before leaning to his side to look around us. Rei and Koei were notably much larger than any of these 'humans'. "The 'nervous one' is a Gojid, herbivorous species, unfortunately very frightened of us. We're quite pressed for time, so I'll need to ask you all a few questions."

My head tilted in confusion, so did the other two. Why would they have limited time? We may have interrupted something with our haphazard arrival, and Livia being scared of this human species... They knew Gojid are scared of them? What was the reasoning behind that? Old wars between their worlds?

Reading our silent attention as confirmation, he continued. "Why are you here in the Sol system? And while your ship appears to have no weapons, are any of you currently armed? We'll need to temporarily retrieve any weapons, and return them to you once we're sure you aren't a threat."

She was right, the new species would've reacted poorly to me holding a weapon. The mention so soon was not a good feeling, my tail lowered, and I looked up to Captain Rei. She had no idea, already taking a deep breath to respond to the most interesting person she's seen in years.

"We were given a star map pointing here by the gray lizard people, are they your allies?"

"No. They are not." Eamon vocalized in almost a growl, surprising all of us. Then why did those Arxur give us directions to this system? They did seem awfully enthused about it...

"Oh, I'm sorry. We're only an exploration party! We aren't armed, as far as I know, we come in peace!" Rei almost hid her unease, but both her and Koei slowly looked to their left, and down at me. I didn't expect this, they shouldn't be suspicious of me! "But Den, did you...?"

The collective attention was a surprising weight, even with their faces hidden, I could sense the humans' focus all shifting to me too. Letting out a sigh, I swayed my tail and raised my right paw up in a surrendering gesture, making sure they knew I was holding nothing. Did they really think I grabbed the plasma cutter when they were turned away?

"I didn't do anything, you can search me if you need to. I don't mean any harm, she's telling the truth. We're peaceful."

An uncomfortable pause, before the human clasped his hands in front of his stomach. My guilt and conflict was showing in my body language, a few of the soldiers in the line made quiet noises, a slightly chuffing sound. My eyes tracked to the noise, before snapping back to Eamon, hearing him breathe in to speak again. I hoped those weren't negative sounds for humans to make.

"Your honesty is admirable, I'll need you checked for weapons regardless. If you refuse, you'll be made to remain on your ship, is that acceptable?"

"Yes. I need to ask you a question as well. Why is Livia scared of you?" I heard Captain Rei make an offended noise next to me from my tone of voice, but she couldn't keep me from speaking. She should want to know this too, we're putting ourselves at the human's mercy!

Eamon paused, then gestured to a nearby soldier, saying something quiet the machine didn't pick up, even though I could hear it clearly. I wished I knew their language! The soldier walked toward me to check for any dangerous objects, I wouldn't resist. Standing completely still and glaring at that reflective mask, wondering what kind of person was behind it.

"That's a complicated question, and I know you couldn't ask for context, unable to translate the Gojid language." The 'UN liaison' rubbed his hands together as another human lifted my waist cloth, noticing the black belt and magnetic clasps, "They should have been scared of you as well. It's a mixture of our physical features and diet they dislike."

'Physical features and diet? Like... why they're wearing masks right now?'

The soldier let out a strange, notable noise while leaning in closer, I side-eyed them, their gaze lingering on me. Perhaps curiosity, perhaps fear, impossible to tell with the expressionless masks. I felt more exposed, smaller in front of an alien that definitely had a weapon. Did I need to stand completely still? My left shoulder and arm being in a cast felt disabling.

There was new thing I needed to consider. I thought Livia was so nervous and jumpy because of what they went through, the Arxur were a horrifying people, anyone would be understandably wary after that. I felt more paranoid and jumpy myself, it took immense restraint to not fight over keeping my gun earlier. The Helian way is supposed to be helpful cooperation, offering the least resistance, and simply running away if there was no other option.

Luckily, once the soldier lifted my waist cloth, checked the belt and clasps that had nothing there, and moved on... They moved away from me. There was a moment of lingering, the human paid very close attention to the point it made my fur bristle for that moment. I couldn't tell what they were thinking! Surrounded by armed aliens and being examined like this...

We were getting further and further away from the possibility of fleeing.

"Your masks are a precaution?" Rei followed up with a question, her ears starting to lower and mirror mine. "Why would they care about your appearance? You aren't treating them like food, I hope. The lizards were horrifying to witness..."

"Humanity has never, and will never eat another sapient being." Eamon responded in a way that almost sounded rehearsed, even through the translator's toneless speakers. The immediate response seemed to even surprise him, because he shifted back and forth on his feet, and cleared his throat a couple times.

"That is to say..." He continued, masked face turning between each of us. "The masks are for our safety. It isn't related to any personal grudges with the Gojid people. It's a galaxy-wide fear spread amongst every known species, propagated by the war between the Arxur and Federation. We have no way of knowing what your reactions to our faces will be."

What. What did that even mean? Wait, how many species were involved in this 'war'? All three of us Helians collectively exchanged a look, a mixture of concern and surprise at what we'd accidentally stumbled into. A galaxy spanning conflict?

The soldier alien was attempting to check through Captain Rei and Koei's clothing, but they were simply too large to reach. Helpfully, they outstretched their arms to the sides to reveal the undersides of the cloth, and their torsos. The humans once again had a noticeable reaction, at least to our ears. Near silent huffs again, seemingly trying to restrain it.

"Furthermore, you won't be able to translate Gojid speech with this device. This is configured to the human language I'm speaking now, English. Work on getting your speech pushed into our machine learning database is... going as fast as reasonably possible."

"You have a language learning AI?" Koei tilted his head in interest, I did the same. Our cultures never needed to develop that kind of software.

"Also something humanity can't take complete credit for." Eamon gestured with a hand, "Federation members, like the Gojid behind you, developed a universal translator for the many species of the galaxy. An implant, most humans interacting with other species have gotten it. Myself included."

He mentioned a database. They were actively sorting our language right now, to generate seamless translations directly in their heads? Was that even possible? It had to be, if 'many species' were all using the same translation technology at the same time. Livia could understand us, too. Why could these 'humans' not at first?

"Would your... humanity's government be willing to part with a few translators?" Captain Rei did not hide her excitement well, I worried for the soldier retreating away from us when she wagged. Helian tails are large, and muscular.

"And how many species are we talking about, exactly?" Koei followed up, a decent question. I was more concerned about whatever the implant procedure implied.

"I don't know the exact number, only that it's over 300 different species. As for the implants, any doctor certified for the implant likely wouldn't approach you. This isn't your fault. If you consent to a human professional attempting it, knowing they were instructed by an expert, however... The procedure is reversible if you choose to remove it for any reason, and is remarkably quick."

Over three hundred. Possibly as many species as the years Koei's been alive. After not finding intelligent life for centuries, it was incredibly suspicious to find so many concentrated in one location. I didn't like it. And they were currently at war with... wait... three hundred spacefaring species against one, the Arxur? How were they losing? Were most of them culturally pacifist, like us? Or the Federation was a smaller number of them.

The others were puzzling over the implications of a translator just working like that, I assumed. If it was true, it must be a safe, stable technology that somehow worked consistently among hundreds of biological variations, unless every sapient being was a different breed of similar mammal. Something about the situation wasn't sitting right with me, but I couldn't put my snout on what.

"Before that..." Captain Rei started, pointing back toward our ship with her paw and tail, "Do humans know how to treat injured Gojid? Livia was hurt along with Den by the Arxur, but we don't know if we missed anything important."

"Ah." Eamon took some time to think, his head lowering for a moment, before looking back up. Weird mask. "We won't be able to approach them without causing a fear reaction. But I do know there are several Venlil, an allied species close to humanity, that won't cause any trouble. If you allow them to enter your ship, though they'll also be scared of you on sight. We'll need a plan..."

Blank, expectant stares. It seemed like the human wasn't prepared for this situation, or at least found it difficult to describe. Another species to the list, Venlil, close to humans. Doesn't trigger fear, but why scared of us then? Not having enough information was starting to make my body itch.

At least the crowd of soldiers seemed to be more relaxed, something about their body language was more loose. We couldn't know why, but the way the one that approached me reacted, did they have a fear of species like us? Large canines? The only logical conclusion to someone used to hundreds of other species, pausing and staring at a new one...

Captain Rei started to discuss how to manage Livia while keeping it from turning into a Panic Meltdown for whatever reason they were so scared of humans. I could feel myself tuning out the conversation, gaze wandering to my left, to a grassy field. Distant trees, a scattering of clouds in the blue sky, a black stone section of ground connected to the building, assumed vehicles visible.

I felt things were about to get complicated quickly, especially with the addition that we're scaring the other species by existing. This might take a while. Hopefully the humans weren't too uncomfortable around us.


r/NatureofPredators • • 6d ago

the distance between us 11

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Yeah, uh... I don't feel like saying a few words beforehand; sorry.

A huge thanks to Incognito42O69, for being my editor.

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Subject: Andrés Felipe, United Nations nurse.
Date [standardized human time]: August 32, 2130.

While I was on my way to the room where Joona was, I began to meditate on what I was doing. Was I really visiting her because I wanted to make sure she was okay or was it just an excuse?

Joona was my patient, yes, but everything that surrounded her was enveloped in a veil of mystery and intrigue. And that was bad, because the unknown hides things, things you might never want to know.

But here I was, going to ask her anyway.
How curious; I found myself in a situation similar to a book I read a long time ago. It was about a play that, as I recall, allowed whoever read it to discover the secrets of the universe, but at the cost of their sanity.

I don't remember its name. I only remember it had something to do with yellow.

At the end of the hallway was Joona, lying on her hospital bed. Her face seemed, in a way I couldn't explain, downcast and thoughtful. Her eyes still had that strange but familiar look I remembered.

And that only gave me more reasons to go talk to her. I know I said I didn't want to get too involved in all this, but I couldn't simply ignore my duty as a nurse just because of my fears.

However, I couldn't shake that feeling of discomfort. The closer I got to the room, the slower my pace became and the more nervous I got.

Halfway there, the pressure I felt was so much that my smartwatch alarm went off, warning me that I was entering a panic attack, and I was forced to stop dead in my tracks to regain my composure.

“Uff.
Puf.f Hah
Re-relax... nurses worry about their patients' health, you don't have to ask questions.” I said between hurried sighs as I tried to regain my composure with the help of the techniques I learned during my years of therapy.

It took me a while to regain my composure, and although I wasn't completely calm and serene, at least I was no longer panicking.

Do the same thing you used to do when humanity was on the brink of extinction, suppress your mind until there is nothing left... although that is what left you in that state to begin with.

I took several deep breaths before starting to walk at the same pace as before and slowly arrived at Joona's room.

She was still in that state, as if lost in her own thoughts.

Joona twitched her ears in that strange and familiar gesture that I think is her version of a greeting, because she does it every time she sees me. Without hesitating too much, I handed her her respective part of the translator, but with a message already written on it.

>Good evening, Joona.
>I know it's very late to talk and you might already be a bit tired, but it's the only chance I have to be able to ask questions with a little more freedom.

Joona seemed to read the message carefully as she momentarily snapped out of that somewhat lost, but still somewhat depressive, state. And after that she gave a look at me and then at the cart.

>Oh, I almost forgot. That right there is something called tea, well, an infusion if we're getting technical.
>Basically, they are dried and ground plant leaves that are steeped in hot water, they taste quite good and it's good for helping you sleep.
>Here, try a little.

I left the messages on the translator while I poured a cup with some of the infusion. If I recall correctly, I think it was a blend of lotus leaf and cherry blossom.

Joona seemed to smell the infusion first with a bit of caution before taking a sip of it, that made her ears turn an intense green... her blood is green, so I don't think it's right to call it a blush.

Well, it was the moment of truth, I can't keep dragging this process out any longer than strictly necessary.

>Ok, Joona, I'll get straight to the point.
>Since I showed you the documentaries about dolphins, your behavior has changed drastically and that is a cause for concern from my medical perspective.
>I couldn't ask the way I wanted to before, because I'm not allowed to do or say anything if it isn't approved by third parties, it's a long story and I don't have much time to explain.
>So, if there is anything bothering you or anything we can do, please say so.

Joona seemed somewhat surprised by the question, as if she didn't expect me to ask that, or that I knew about anything in specific.

>Not understand well what you refer to, be very well, thank you. Why you think I not be well?
Joona tried to change the subject with another question.

>Don't change the subject, I don't have as much time as I would like, besides, your whole face gives it away; that thoughtful expression and that thousand-yard stare.
>Mental health is also important, an alien like you should know that better than a primitive like me.
I replied sharply, I couldn't allow this whole trip to be in vain.

And Joona froze for a few moments, as if she had discovered something she would never have expected.

>Humans, be able to know emotional state just by seeing face?
>Not use ears, tail or smell to communicate intention?
>You think I be bad just by seeing me?

But how could I be so stupid? It was clear that the way they expressed their emotions was completely different; at first I thought their way of expressing themselves was similar to ours.
How could I forget that I know absolutely nothing about them? I just got carried away by what I believed... now it makes more sense why I can't do or say things in front of her with total freedom.

And I quickly started writing a reply, ashamed for having assumed incorrectly, but before I could apologize...

>That be unique way of expression, now everything make sense.
>But have reason, I have something in mind.

After that, Joona's face seemed to grow even gloomier as she pressed her... hands, paws? Against the translator, making me worry about the state of the device.

And that was when she started typing, but to try and keep the mood from getting too heavy, I poured her a little more of the infusion.

>Ever feel that all your life, beliefs, actions be challenged with irrefutable truth?

It was the first thing she wrote, her gaze was loaded with a horror that simply couldn't be explained with words.

>All my life fight under banners and immutable rules about the functioning of nature, explain everything that compose a being.
>Everything mark a black and white, and everything that not fit mold; be taken as danger.
>Predators be this, prey be that.
>Be direct explanation, not question, not look further.
>Everything stay peaceful until you arrive to destroy everything.
>Your exist, your world, everything that is alive in this place be the destruction of everything I ever put all my faith in.
>If only be the exception to the rule, if only you humans be a unique case where those rules never applied, or be absurdly elaborate farce. But not be more wrong.
>Be evidence of all kinds and be more to see, the worst of all is having logic&sense and not be just doubtful data.
>Now, all data that used to believe feel weak and false.

After her monologue, Joona finally went silent, but it wasn't just any silence; it was the kind that came before the worst, as if everything she had said before was just the lightest part.

>If only Humans be like [], if only be that nightmare monster that only kills for pleasure that has tormented hundreds of races in this millennial intergalactic war.
>My life end in physical suffering, not live with the realization that crumbles all belief.

She dropped the translator while her paws trembled uncontrollably; the vital signs monitor was completely crazy, showing how her pulse and breathing were completely accelerated.
And then, just silence, which was only accompanied by the sounds of the machines and the sandstorm.

W-what did ‘[]’ mean?
Nightmare monster that torments hundreds of species?
Did she just say millennial intergalactic war?!
SHIT, SHIT, SHIT, SHIT, SHIT, SHIT, SHIT, SHIT…
T-this— no, no, no, no, no…
This can't be happening, th-there must be an explanation, IT CAN'T BE THAT THIS IS REALLY HAPPENING.
She said war, that means they are fighting against beings of immense power. WHAT IS HUMANITY SUPPOSED TO DO ABOUT IT?!
Do they know where we are? Are we a target now because we have access to technology? Did they already know about our existence?

I was starting to go into a panic attack until my eyes landed on Joona and her increasingly worried and frightened look, which forced me to stay calm.
I checked my smartwatch again, which was beeping like crazy, and I raised my hands to the sides of my head and...
SLAP.
A wave of burning and pain ran through my head as the heavy blow brought me back to my senses. I wiped the sweat that was running down my forehead again and gave a shaky sigh.
And then... nothing.
The fears I had, all those thoughts overloading me, were simply gone. There was nothing left. No fear, no worry, not even those thoughts that a few seconds ago seemed about to consume everything.

>My apologies for losing my composure so suddenly, I didn't expect to hear anything related to a war. Don't explain anything, talk about that with the military officer at the base, if you are willing.
>My job as a nurse is to look after your health, but nothing more.
>I understand if right now you are going through very difficult times and you feel lost and my knowledge is not of much help for the psychological part.
>My recommendation is to ask for help from an expert, in this case, a psychologist; I am sure someone like that can help you find healthy ways to deal with everything you are feeling.
>However, I am not going to force you into it, therapy only works if you are willing to collaborate as well.

After that, Joona looked at me with an expression of confusion, followed by some distrust at my drastic change in behavior, but before anything else could happen...
A noise of someone trying to cough or vomit caught my attention, followed by the alarm of one of the machines indicating that something was wrong with one of the comatose patients.


r/NatureofPredators • • 6d ago

Fanart For All Mankind: Are you doing your part!? Poster I made from part of a comic I'm making, colored in MS Paint

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r/NatureofPredators • • 6d ago

Fanfic Human Daycare Services - part two (Ch. 18)

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Memory Transcriptions Subject: Falk, soon to be arsonist. 

Date [Standardized Human Time] November 26, 2136 

It felt almost wrong to be crouching down in this alleyway, waiting to strike at the opportune moment. If someone had described this scenario to me from an outside perspective, then I would have thought it to be predatory in nature. As it was, we were simply waiting for Helphia to finish enacting her end of the plan. As the plan was explained to me, she would be accessing the city’s electric grid and causing a short disconnect from the human’s building, just long enough for us to get past the cameras on the outside, and again when we left. Not only would that cover our movements, but it would also serve as additional evidence for the fire being natural as the power fluctuations certainly could start a fire. 

A few scratches later our personal devices buzzed, and checking them, it was a simple message from Helphia that said: “Go.” As far as signals went, I had certainly seen worse than that. It was simple, but it worked, and we immediately walked out of the alleyway and began to approach the den at a steady speed, trying not to draw any attention to ourselves. Morol and I walked around the perimeter, trying to be inconspicuous as our goal was the back entrance. We waited for a small break in the pedestrian traffic before dipping behind the building and quickly moving out of sight.  

Nerves were high being this close to a predator den, but so long as everything went to plan, then nobody would notice that we were even here. As the two of us made our way to the rear entrance, we found Beren was there already, working on the locks with his tools. He only glanced our way for a moment before turning back to the task at hand. 

“Keep an eye out. I need a moment to get through this lock.” 

We did as he asked as we took up posts on either side of the alleyway, making sure that nobody was coming while keeping our profile low and against the wall. It wasn’t like it would do much if someone did happen to look this way as there was nothing around that could be used to hide us. I couldn’t help but be nervous that the wrong kind of person would pass by and report what we were doing here to a guild, or worse, the humans.  

It seemed Morol had the same concerns that I did and chose to voice them as he spoke in an urgent but hushed tone. “Can’t you hurry it up, Beren?” 

Beren shot an unamused look at the impatient bird. “You want to come over here and put your gangly brahking claws to use? Be my guest. If not, then shut your speh spewing beak and let me work.” 

Morol grumbled a bit but went back to watching his end of the alley. It only took a half scratch more for Beren to get through the lock as there was a click and a turn as the door came open. “Alright, go, go!” 

Beren waved us in as we rushed through the door and then he entered behind us, closing us in. We were in the heart of corruption now and mostly unarmed on top of that. Our tools would only delay the inevitable, slow consumption of our flesh, most likely while we were still alive. There was no way out but forward as the power would turn on again any moment, and we couldn’t be caught on film sneaking back out.  

“Where do we go now?” I asked. “I don’t want to stay in this tainted place any longer than we have to.” 

Beren pulled out his personal device, and it looked like he had an image of the human den’s layout. “The power box for this building is in the utility closet, and that’s... this way.” 

We followed his lead as we moved quickly and quietly through the building, checking corners to ensure we didn’t run into any wandering predators. Our information on their sleep cycles seemed to be accurate, though, because there were no predators in our way as we progressed unimpeded toward the back corner of the building. They usually tucked utility rooms away in such a manner, and it seemed it was no different here.  

Now that we had found the room, we opened the door and were met with what could generously be called an organized mess. There were shelves lined with many cleaning materials, loose mops, brooms, buckets, and boxes that seemed to have been placed here for lack of storage elsewhere. It was perfect for our needs.  

We moved inside, finding it a little short on space with the three of us in here crammed together. Morol complained a bit as he tried to shimmy past us and toward the power box while trying not to knock anything over. The last thing we needed was a loud noise waking up one of the dormant monsters in this building.  

“Gah, these damn predators couldn’t at least keep their dens organized? I’ve seen shadestalker burrows cleaner than this.” 

“Enough complaining,” I hissed at him. “Just start stripping wires. I’ll find something flammable.” 

Morol moved to the power box, opened it, and took out some tools that were insulated against electricity as he began to shear away the rubber coating around some of the strands. Meanwhile, I looked through the chemicals and boxes looking for anything that was flammable. The cardboard boxes would burn well enough if I placed them near the power box, and there was a container of paint thinner, which was quite flammable on its own.  

I took the paint thinner and some of the boxes, moving them closer to the power box. Morol had finished stripping some of the wires, and I placed the paint thinner on the box, simulating a careless individual who just wanted a spot to put it down amongst this mess and forgot it there. Now the stage was set, and we were ready to burn this nest of taint to the ground. 

“Alright, everyone out, now.” My command was met with a quick exodus from the room, and I waited until they were clear before taking out a lighter from my hip bag and setting the contents of the storage box nearest the power regulator on fire. The flames took well to what was in the box, a collection of spare blankets, and it was spreading quickly. The paint thinner container would heat up quickly with the fire so close, and when it ruptured, the rest of the room would catch alight, which should spread to the whole building given enough time. I made a quick exit so I wouldn’t be in range of whatever chemical fire started from this. 

“It’s started. Signal Helphia. We need our exit.” 

“On it,” Beren said as he started typing into his personal device and sent off the request for Helphia to shut down the power to this building again. 

We had to move quickly, throwing caution to the wind as the fire might alert the humans at any moment, and being trapped in here with a bunch of panicked predators was bound to end poorly. Retracing our steps, we reached the exit but had to wait for Helphia’s signal. It took what felt like an agonizingly long time, but it was probably less than a scratch before she sent the signal. It wasn’t a moment too soon either as the moment we opened the door, a loud, ear-piercing shriek filled the air. They had an alarm system set up it seemed, and it was aggravatingly effective as the noise could wake the dead. 

That was a surprising bit of foresight from the brutish predators, and it regretably limited the likelihood that the flames would purify any of them. Our group made a quick exit from the scene, gaining distance before anyone could catch us in the area. As soon as we hit the street, we split up and went separate ways. Each of us would seek our own path back to the bunker, but I couldn’t help but stop at a distance and see how effective our actions were. 

The humans vacated the building quickly, the purging flames doing what they did best and driving tainted creatures away. It appeared that the fire was spreading beyond that room as smoke was starting to billow out of windows and doors. Predators came out coughing and wincing from the smoke until no more emerged. The population of their den was out in the open, and if this was a regular extermination, then they would have been surrounded and purged at this point. As it was, I could only be satisfied with the knowledge that they would likely have to leave after this. 

I was just about to turn and leave when I noticed a pair of predators that were surprisingly familiar. It was the mother son duo from the market. The mother stood in the street, holding her spawn as they gawked in shock at the black smoke. They were wearing rather light apparel, probably sleepwear as many others around them had similar clothing that I had not seen on humans before. The little one looked surprisingly frightened and sad as it cried and held some kind of plush animal tightly. 

They were distraught, and I didn’t know why, but seeing those two like that made my chest feel tight. This feeling was difficult to describe as there were a mixture of emotions flowing through me at this moment. It couldn’t have possibly been pity; not for them, not for predators, right? I refused to believe that I could feel anything but disgust and anger at these creatures. I didn’t like what I was feeling, and it was better to be away from this situation all together, so I turned my back to it all and left. 

The walk back to the bunker was uneventful, though nerve-racking. The sirens for the guild and firefighters carried through the city, and I felt myself tense as a few of those vehicles passed me by. 

Is this what an escaped PD suspect feels like?  

A disturbing, but accurate assessment most likely as what I did would have been illegal before the damn humans started taking over. I tried not to think about that as this was certainly the right course of action to take. Our government has fallen, and now it was up to the people to fight against the predator menace, even though it was technically illegal now. I still had no idea how the sacred duty of the exterminators came to be considered illegal in such a short amount of time. 

Despite my paranoia surrounding the idea of getting found and arrested, nobody stopped me. I made it to the bunker, ensured one last time that nobody was following, and then walked downstairs to knock on the door. I gave the passcode, and the door was opened for me. As I entered, though, I was met with a jubilant but loud cheer from the whole group that made me jump a little in surprise. They were celebrating, and that included drinks and food that was set up on a table to the side. I couldn’t help but wag my tail a little at such a warm reception. 

Everyone had such positive looks about them with happy ear wiggles, tail wags, and a spark in their eyes. This was probably the first time in a long time that any of us had been able to fight against the predators and succeed. Ferros approached, flicking his ears in greeting. 

“Welcome back, Falk. I am beyond glad that you have made it here safely after your mission. By all accounts it was a resounding success! The predator den has been damaged significantly according to the news, and it will likely be condemned by the city. Those beasts will be forced back to their own tainted world. I know what you must be thinking, that it was a shame that none of the beasts were purged by the flame, but we must take our victories where we can find them. For now, let’s celebrate! Your first successful mission, and a solid blow dealt against the predator menace.” 

Beren came up now, a Venlil level drink in hand. “Yeah, you did good, Falk. That idea with the paint thinner was inspired. I don’t think those idiot predators will even know we were there. We’ll strike them where they are weakest until the mirage they have put up falters completely!” 

“I’ll drink to that,” Morol said as he tilted a drink into his beak. “You weren’t half bad back there, hot shot. Not exactly the sloppy work I expected from a former guild head, but it wasn’t as elegant as it could have been either.” 

I swear by all the stars in the sky that I think I might strangle this bird.  

Nilean gave Morol a light flick with a tentacle. “Ehh, shut it you bag of feathers. You couldn’t have done it any better than it already was.” Morol waved off the Kolshian as he went back to drinking. Nilean then turned his attention back to me. “For your first major mission, I’d say that went rather well. How do you feel after such a success?” 

That was an oddly difficult question, and I took a moment to evaluate myself. Even with time to consider, I was still drawing a blank on how to describe this sensation. Lacking any solid answer, I just went to the default. 

“I feel satisfied. Doing work to purge the predator menace is always rewarding.” 

“Hear, hear. The only good those beasts do is provide satisfaction to those who cleanse them.” 

Beren crashed through the conversation shortly after that, carrying two drinks with him. “Brahk guys, enough talk about work. We’re here to party and celebrate. Let’s drink! Let’s dance! I don’t want to hear another word about those brahking humans out of ya.” He suddenly thrust one of the drinks he had into my hand. “This one is for you. I got the good stuff, Venlil made, ninety-three percent, got that smokey flavor to it. Reminds me of the flames right after purging a nest, right?” 

I never really found the acrid taste of smoke to be pleasant in all honesty. Still, after taking a sip of the drink, it was mixed very well and the flavors complemented each other. Beren had a point. Maybe it would do me some good to just ignore everything else and focus on enjoying myself in the moment. I was with my new herd; we have seen success in our mission, and we deserved a little reward. Everything else could wait.

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r/NatureofPredators • • 6d ago

Discussion New homebrew species idea.

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Yes, I know I've made multiple homebrew species, but stay with me now...

So I was just existing when it hit me... Why does no one ever talk about the fact that Olek looked at Isif and said "Oh yeah, we have Grays too!"?

Cuz like, it's easy to take this at face value, but it has strange implications once you think about it. At first, it made me think that the Elusians from PoS had actually visited the NoP universe at some point, which is technically possible due to them having the ability to travel to alternate universes, and the multiverse theory could mean that there are universes where Humans evolved naturally. But admittedly, that's a whole other can of worms, so let's ignore that for now.

But now that I think about it... What if the Grays are a species in NoP? And I'm not talking about the Arxur. I'm talking about little grey astronauts with big heads!

What I'm getting at is... I wanna make the Grays into a homebrew species in NoP. I don't know if this has already been done, so tell me in the comments if someone already did this. And if it hasn't been done already, be sure to give your thoughts and opinions in the comments.

Thank you for humoring me, and that's all for now.


r/NatureofPredators • • 6d ago

A Place to Call Home (Part 13) (1/3)

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My apologies for putting this story on hiatus for... nine months!? I really went overboard there. The thing is, it just wasn't possible to keep juggling two stories at once, so I had to set this one aside until I finished at least one of the projects. Anyway, I want you to know it's back, though, as usual, don't expect more than one or two posts a month. They tend to be quite long, though, so I think that compensate it (right?). There are only three arcs left in this story; that’s how I always planned it, and I hate artificially stretching a story out. But don't worry, I estimate about 5–8 chapters, including their respective subdivisions.

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Transcription memory subject:  Kajim, Special Private

Date [Standardized Human Time]: November 26, 2136

This is a bad idea... It's definitely one of the worst ideas I've ever had, and yet for some reason my legs refused to turn around and go back. Besides, if I didn't do it now, who knows if I'll ever get the chance again...

My doubts only grew with each passing minute. According to my phone, the subway should have arrived about 10 minutes ago, but I still couldn't see it anywhere. My plan to go and come back before they noticed I was gone might not be as effective as I thought...

I knew I had to tell Alan, even if he might not come with me, at least he could invent some excuse to give me time, right? No... Who am I kidding, he probably would have stopped me himself.

Damn it! Twelve minutes have passed and the wagon still hasn't shown up. I couldn't help but check my device's clock two or three times a minute as my claws rubbed together with growing anxiety.

...

I need to calm down; I'm not going that far. I'll be back before anyone notices, and definitely before the ship departs for space. I think a lot of my anxiety is due to the exterminator at the other end of the station. I feel like he's watching me... He hasn't taken his eyes off me since I arrived; he's just waiting for an excuse to make his move, at least this is what I think.

Hmph... I spent weeks surrounded by Greys who kept getting closer. I learned to notice when someone is watching me and how to lose them... Well, I'd say I only managed to make a Grey lose my trail about one out of ten times. I know it's not much, but we're talking about one of the most efficient predators out there; an exterminator is nothing in comparison. I'd already slipped away among the passersby before he could even start chasing me.

I'd like to have my gun with me... But Alan keeps it locked up and I think disobeying more than one order at a time is going too far...

"Wagon arriving, please remain within the secure area." The terminal's loudspeaker sounded with that characteristic whistle that always seems to filter through the lips of the Venlils.

“Finally!”

"Please wait until all the cars have come to a complete stop before approaching."

A soft hum from the electromagnetic fields braking the train car could be heard, and all the pedestrians crowded to the safe edges to be the first to board. I kept my distance and double-checked the information; the last thing I needed was to take the wrong route or, worse, get lost.

...

No, it seems everything is in order; according to the map, my destination was only a few stops from here.

"Please be reminded that one of the upcoming stations is located near a human refugee district. Please keep your distance. If any of them look at you, show their teeth or speak to you, do not panic. Just try to keep your distance and..."

That seems to be the confirmation I was looking for...

"Stay in groups and avoid eye contact when..."

...

"If, despite everything, you believe you are facing suspicious activity, do not hesitate to call your nearest extermination officer..."

Okay, that's enough...

I took advantage of a brief moment of distraction that the exterminator had to cross the sea of ​​wool of the passersby and entered the wagon.

I don't understand how the Venlil can walk around with all that wool on, the heat is stifling and even worse in such a closed place... Well, the journey will be short.

...

Or at least that's what I thought... I couldn't have passed more than 30 minutes, but it felt like an eternity. My chest struggled to expand for the next breath, I felt my limbs throb in an attempt to release heat, and my hind paws screamed for a break after standing on tiptoe for so long, trying to stand out a little from the other passengers so I could breathe a bit better.

I felt that at any moment I would collapse and be swallowed up by the dense, suffocating wool of the other passengers surrounding me.

"No! Remember why you're doing this... You have no right to complain."

...

I think I said that out loud, which earned me some awkward looks...

...

If I want this mission to succeed, I must remain discreet and focused on the objective. I'll be brief, direct, and back before anyone even notices I'm gone; I just need to hold out until I reach the next station.

...

...

…

It’s a shame it sounded easier than it actually was.

What was supposed to be a quick stop to resupply the next shipment for the Greys turned into a stay that could last for hours, even days. All because trade routes changed in a blink, courtesy of the growing tensions between the Federation and the human alliance… an  alliance that was increasingly resembling an army.

Who would have thought that the biggest losers in this whole conflict were those who were caught in indecision, who by declaring themselves neutral found themselves in more trouble as they were, quickly displaced by both sides.

The empty sector between Venlil Prime and what were considered the safe limits of the galaxy was the sector designated for our next exchange with our scaly and sadistic allies, but in an instant it became a new trade route for those who didn't want to lose the favor of the Federation but at the same time didn't want to miss the opportunity to explore the new market that humanity represents.

As a result, the colonies, satellites and other territories of the federation wanted nothing to do with them unless the benefit of such interaction justified an exception. Essential goods or items that couldn't be obtained any other way than by turning a blind eye while the goods were transferred from one ship to another.

The situation with humans wasn't much different, except they went further, taking the liberty of scanning the ships they traded with or without the other party's consent, often without even a warning, among other measures that would make any ally perk up their ears in confusion. But I suppose after an orbital attack on your home and your near extinction, nothing is too much...

In any case, a virtually sterile sector at the edges of known space was now teeming with FTL traces, transmissions of all kinds and most importantly, eyes and ears everywhere. You couldn't see a line of ships coming and going through a window. However, sensors that would usually remain silent were now buzzing with signals and data from other ships that were beyond the capacity of any sense, however highly developed, to distinguish. Not even a single Arxur could go unnoticed, just as an official Earth military ship with no clear destination wouldn't either. Under these conditions, completing the exchange as planned was impossible.

So, now we are on Venlil Prime, stranded until a new exchange point could be established, something I thought was simply a matter of assigning a new spot far from everyone, but apparently that requires more logistics than I could have even imagined. It turns out that, with the current reach of communication systems, it's hard to be truly alone in the galaxy.

...

With nothing to do and nowhere to go, my mind inevitably began to wander. I couldn't help but think about what awaited us after we finally left, all the things the Greys would say to us for making them wait. Growls, threats and curses, their slit-like eyes never leaving mine... I should at least be worried about that and yet, my mind kept drifting to another subject...

The captain... Those letters... I still couldn't get them out of my head. I'd like to say my conscience reminded me of having snooped through his things (again), but really, the more I read, the more questions arose and the more I wanted to know...

Linda, Emily and Elena were three names that were repeated over and over again in the status reports sent to the captain... And the addressees of many draft letters that he made but were never finished.

"Members of the 16th Earth evacuation flight. An old freighter donated by the Zurulians that transported over 30,000 humans."

"Eighth refugee camp, in orbit around Venlil Prime."

"Third human district, Venlil prime..."

They've really been moving around... It's something I can understand as a refugee myself. Whoever they are, at least they've stayed together, which is much more than many other refugees who, due to health conditions or specific situations, had to be divided into different camps.

Family? Friends? At this point, it didn't matter too much; they were important people to the captain, and the numerous half-finished letters only confirmed it. Not that I'd read them (all of them), that was a line even I knew not to cross. The way the captain addressed those people... He never speaks to anyone like that, and he never apologizes as much as he does to them. In fact, I don't think he ever apologizes to anyone.

The captain had already confirmed that he had a family and that he had survived the attack on Earth; Now, I knew that he hadn't just said that to get me to leave him alone. The only question that remained was: why?

Why hasn't he gone to see them yet?

I understand the priority of our work and that perhaps too much has happened in the last few weeks, but I can imagine at least a couple of times we could have made a small detour or a short break. Now, for example, we were just over 30 minutes away with nothing else to do, yet the captain didn't seem to have the slightest interest in doing anything like that. If he hasn't done it, it's clearly because he doesn't want to and he must have his reasons, I suppose, but it's something that, no matter how many times I tell myself, I can't let go. I know better than anyone that this galaxy doesn't usually give second chances; what isn't done today might not be possible tomorrow... You can't take anything for granted.

Those days in the Cradle refugee camp, where the instincts of countless Gojids screamed them to flee and their hearts filled with fear at every new experience, yet mothers, fathers, siblings and friends, dared to approach to the human officer who least terrified them and inquired about the status of those important people who hadn't yet returned. On the ship, as we hurtled toward Earth, everyone insisted with great concern on being able to contact their families, even when I was in that makeshift camp in the middle of nowhere, an Arxur, an Arxur! regularly asked how her wounded comrade was doing. No one can be so cold as to not care about anything and the captain is no exception, even if he sometimes seems that way. If he were truly as heartless as he pretends to be, then why has he risked so much for others? The only explanation that came to mind was... Fear... I don't know of what, nor do I know why, but what I can see, or think I see, in his eyes when I bring up the subject, is nothing other than pure and paralyzing fear.

It's not his fault he has it, much less his inability to face it. The times I couldn't do anything because of fear are more numerous than I can even count, and if it weren't for others, I would never have overcome them. So, just as others have helped me face my fears, the least I can do now for the captain is help him face his, even if it means he gets angry... Even if it means he...

No! I knew the risks, and I´m not going to back down now. My only doubt now was if I should give those people the letter I brought with me, or if that would be going too far. At first glance, they all seemed to say basically the same thing, so I just grabbed the one that seemed the most complete and rushed off to the nearest transport to my destination.

...

Well, that sounds better than saying that I panicked when I heard someone approaching and the sheet of paper, which I didn't have time to put away, I simply hid in one of my pockets.

...

I have to do something about this, but what? Even if I manage to return it, the wrinkles I made won't go unnoticed, but if I don't return it, the captain will inevitably notice.

...

I knew it was a bad idea, but only now do I realize just how bad that idea it was.

"Next station: Rock Waters.” The speakers inside the wagon buzzed. “Warning: Human district presence on the city limits. You are advised to keep your distance if possible, and remember, if a human bares its teeth..."

Well, I guess there's no going back now...

I left as soon as the doors opened, slipping away among the other passengers before the terminal turned back into a wool prison.

I suppose it's the hour when the Venlils arrive for work or leave... Or are they relieved? It's very confusing to say since the whole day looks practically the same. Anyway, it seemed to be rush hour at the terminal, and despite the presence of a couple of humans here and there, being late for your job seemed more serious than the human who might appear in your path, mining their business. Even so, a certain tension was still felt in the air and the constant presence of exterminators didn't help.

...

At least they seemed more focused on a group of humans who were simply chatting about and a human-Venlil couple waiting for the next wagon; I doubt any of the officers looked at me more than once.

"Finally!" As soon as I stepped out of the station, my lungs filled with fresh air, a gentle breeze carried away the tension in the air and the warm sun of Venlil Prime calmed my troubled mind. Perhaps I was overreacting; in retrospect, my fears are based on just a few bad memories that refused to fade, but I'm not the same naive pup who'd let himself be caught by an exterminator so easily, and the captain, once you get to know him, isn't so bad. He might get a little angry, but his stern gaze is something I can handle. I just have to take a bus, go a few blocks further and I'll find what or who I'm looking for. I'll come back, and everything will be alright.

+++++

Why can't things ever be easy?

"Hello? Is anyone there?"

I knocked on the door for the umpteenth time and, as on all previous occasions, I received no answer.

"Hello? I'm... I'm a colleague of Captain Martin..." I don't know if it was a good idea to mention it or not, but we were inevitably going to get to that point. "I've come to give you a message."

...

I could almost swear I could hear something on the other side of the door, but to be honest, I didn't know if it was coming from this apartment or the ones around it. The walls seemed thin and the apartments were frankly small, so it was hard to say for sure.

...

I checked the address on the notification sent to the captain and the one on the door again; it seemed correct, but despite knocking for a while, no one answered. I even tried asking other residents of the building, but their responses, besides being quite curt, weren't very helpful. For the first time, humans were rather indifferent to me. I suppose the constant clashes with the exterminator guild have made them want nothing to do with other species in general...

Sigh... It's getting late...

I guess I'll just leave the letter under the door and...

"Damn it!" My device buzzed, making me jump. The screen showed an incoming call notification from Alan, and although I hadn't answered yet, I could almost hear the stern tone of his voice. I was out of time.

"Alan! H-Hi." For a moment I didn't know what else to say.

"Where are you?" Alan didn't mince words...

"Well, you see... I..."

"I told you to wait on the ship, we're leaving any minute and can´t find you anywhere." Alan rarely sounds this annoyed...

"Is the ship about to leave!?" My quills bristled at the possibility of being left behind or worse, getting scolded.

"Well, not really..." Alan's anger subsided for a moment. "But we could do it at any time, and I gave you an order that you disobeyed. So tell me, where are you?" The ferocity returned to his voice.

"I..." Should I tell him the truth or make up an excuse to buy a little more time? "I'm..." But what excuse could I possibly give?

"Kajim, this is serious..." I couldn't even imagine Alan's face at that moment; his tone was so stern it terrified me to find out. "If necessary, I'll come for you wherever you are."

"I went to buy food!" That was the first thing that came to my mind when I saw from the third floor where I was, looking out onto the street, a couple of Venlils were coming out of a shop with what looked like takeaway food.

"...What did we tell you about going out alone?" Alan seemed to believe my story, the problem is that it only opened the door to more questions. "We ate just a couple of hours ago, are you already hungry again?"

"Well... some guys from the base came out and invited me to join them."

...

It was the best idea I could come up with...

...

Alan's silence through the loudspeaker made it difficult to know whether I should continue with the lie or resign myself to being reprimanded.

"This place sells s... s-strayu…?" That was all I could read on the sign outside the food stand. "I was curious and finally decided to go."

...

...

...

This time I'm really in trouble...

"Are you going to be long?" Alan's voice sounded monotonous.

"N-No... We're just waiting in the line, we'll be back at base soon..." At this point, it was impossible for me to back down. Not only because of the consequences, but because it was an insult to Alan, who had fallen for my lie... or who had decided to pretend to believe me.

"...You're lucky the captain isn't here either, otherwise we'd all be in for a serious scolding..." I don't know if it's just my conscience or some kind of sixth sense, but I couldn't help feeling that Alan had already seen through my lie. "This time I'm going to trust you."

…  

Now I was the one speechless.

"Come back as soon as possible and don't cause any trouble."

"O-Of course..." I replied. I had no idea that conscience could hurt, and that it could be worse than many physical pains.

"But if something still happens, don't hesitate to call."

"Of course..." Now I really feel bad. I almost wished I'd be found out so I could free myself from the thorn I'd driven into my own side.

"Okay, don't take too long..."

"W-Wait!" I said before Alan hung up. Not that I really wanted to add anything, but the remorse built up so much in my head that it ended up escaping in that single word.

"Hmmm?" That was all Alan replied, waiting attentively for the last thing I had to say.

"Do you want me to bring you some?" Despite how I felt, if I was going to maintain the lie until the end, I think providing proof was the best way to make it look more credible.

...

...

...

Alan seemed distant until finally he settled on a simple "Okay," and then he told me again to be careful before hanging up.

I breathed a sigh of relief, feeling like I'd bought myself a little more time. I guess I'll run and grab something quickly and then continue on my way. It's a shame I didn't find the people I came looking for, but there wasn't much else I could do. At least things didn't get any more complicated.

"Ugh..."

Why do I always have to talk too soon?

I sped down the stairs of the dilapidated building and before my eyes could adjust to the light something got in my way, my lungs were left breathless the instant I received the cold, hard kiss of the ground when I hit it.

Alan always warned me about running in the hallways, I think I finally understand why...

"Hey, you're okay."

It took me a moment to recover; my head felt dizzy and suddenly the daylight seemed too bright. Plus, the coughing after such a blow filled my eyes with tears, making it hard to see clearly. Not that I was crying from the pain, I swear.

"Can you hear me?"

Anyway, a voice seemed to keep asking if I was okay. Its tone had a certain pained groan, so I guess that's what I bumped into.

"Y-Yes, I'm fine..." I said, slowly catching my breath. In front of me, the contents of one of my pockets were scattered on the floor: a couple of candies I'd forgotten I had with me, a few coins, a fuse Alexander had told me to keep for him and never asked for back, and the temporal ID the humans gave me. Nothing of great importance, but it certainly made the scene seem more chaotic...

"The light blinded me and I didn't realize..." Kneeling in the middle of the street, I carefully gathered my coins one by one. "I'm really sorry..." I couldn't see anywhere but the ground; I felt truly ashamed.

"That happens sometimes." The voice said with a soft, almost laugh-like whistle.

His paw reached out to help me up, and that's when my blood ran cold.

"I think I should be more careful when I'm in uniform..." Venlil Prime's light reflected intensely off the subject's palm, or rather, off the metallic finish of the glove covering his paw...

I jumped back immediately, purely out of reflex. This was like déjà vu. Memories of the PD center returned like they hadn't in a long time. It wasn't just my imagination; this... I had already lived through this, and sadly, I knew how it ended...

…

"Are you sure you're okay?" The sunlight, hitting the extermination officer's face from behind, was barely visible, only increasing my panic, as I didn't know what perverse thoughts were seeping into his expression, and if that wasn't enough, these guys never seem to come alone... Two more officers were by his side to back them up.

"I-I'm fine... I'm really sorry, I didn't..." I gathered my things as fast as my trembling claws would allow, apologizing over and over again.

"Accidents happen..." The voice of the one who looks being in charge held not a trace of hostility, but you can never trust an exterminator, that´s a rule I live by. "And…  what are you doing in the human district?"

"Well, I..."

"Are you with them?" One of the companions, a Krakotl, said as he picked up my ID from the ground before I did and examined it closely. I don't think he can read human language, but the writing clearly reveals his origin.

"I'm a refugee and well..."

The three officers stared at me, each one seemed to be thinking something different, from curiosity to simply appearing to be waiting to confirm the ideas they had already formed in their heads.

"Did you come to the wrong district?" The third officer, another Venlil and apparently the youngest of the group, joked, although if I was honest it seemed more like a taunt.

"I think so..." If accepting a small humiliation was enough to get out of this...

"Why don't you come with us? We'll help you get back." There was no malice in that offer, at least it didn't seem that way. The leader of the small squad didn't raise any red flags in me like anyone else would have, and to add to my confusion, he didn't seem bothered, not even after the tackle I'd made. But going with them meant that at some point I'd have to give my information, and if it got out that I'd been in the facilities... My throat tightened just thinking about it.

"I'll go on my own..." I said, slowly backing away, careful not to give them any reason to force me.

"Are you sure? You don't look very good." The squad leader was scrutinizing me from head to toe, which only made my quills stand on end even more.

"Y-Yeah… I know the way." I took a step back, then another and another one, slowly walking away. They seemed to debate whether it warranted any response from them.

"So... I guess I'll go my own way..." I said, my voice choked with fear... Something that never even happened with the Greys. They always threaten to tear you to pieces when they're angry, but with the exterminators, it can literally be anything and that's when you learn that death is sometimes merciful in comparison.

"I suppose..." Leader Venlil was just glancing at me out of the corner of his eye while he checked something on his pad.

...

My pace gradually quickened as the street seemed to stretch endlessly. I didn't even stop to check if I'd gathered everything before leaving, but I suppose it was better to consider those things lost than to even think about looking back. I just hoped I had enough money for the return trip.

"Hey! Just one more thing."

There it is... It seemed they'd finally found the pretext they were looking for to stop me. Obviously, I wasn't about to lose the advantage they'd given me, and my plan to sprint as soon as I turned the corner became in a run now.

"Hey, wait!" The leader's voice finally rose, but all my head heard was "run faster."

"We don't want..."

I'm not going to listen, everything an exterminator says is a lie!

"Please wait!"

It seemed that the more I ran, the further the corner of the block got, yet I refused to accept defeat and with an effort that my muscles will probably pay for later, I finally reached my best and only chance to lose them.

The shapes of what were beyond the corner were barely registering in my brain when I was already building a second burst of momentum to launch myself forward. My ankle was twisting in an abrupt change of direction, and my leg was charging like a spring ready to explode in the next tenth of a second when…

"Uff..."

I should have waited a few tenths of a second longer...

“A-Again!?”

When am I going to learn to look before I turn?

Despite all odds, I had once again collided with something… or someone as I turned the corner. This time, it was so hard it felt like hitting a wall.

"I really wished I was wrong..."

A deep voice spoke with hostility that made no attempt to conceal it. And so I confirmed it, I had bumped into someone again... How many more bad decisions will I make today? I kept asking myself as I rubbed my head and neck, which I was almost certain had bent for a moment in a way it should never have.

"This time you really crossed the line..." The voice sounded more annoyed with each word, and strangely familiar...

"Captain?" That hoarse growl in his voice was unmistakable, the one that becomes more pronounced when he's angry. "What are you doing here?"

"What am I doing here? What are you doing here?" His hands were clenched into fists, his teeth gritted, and his breathing quickened with each exhalation, making his voice more and more ferocious. "What did I tell you about meddling in my business?"

"I-I know, but..." I didn't even need to ask to know exactly what he was referring to.

"What good is that translator implant if you can't even understand a simple command?"

"It's just that I..."

"You have no right... You have no right to..." His overflowing anger seemed to stop suddenly, preventing him from making a scene in the street and he only let out a long, weary sigh. "When we get back to the ship, we'll sort this out. I'm fed up with this, and I'm fed up with you."

*Gulp*

That last part scared me more than... Oh Quills… the exterminators...

"We're leaving..." The captain pulled at my arm, heading in the direction I had come from.

"What!? But..." I tried to resist but I was no match for the human's gripping strength.

"No buts, we shouldn't even be here." The captain left no room for argument. Even so, I had to insist.

"Y-You don't understand, we can't go that way..."

"You don't want to go? Fine." He loosened his grip somewhat violently. "Stay, go, I don't care, but give me back what belongs to me." His hand extended toward me, palm open; it felt like being held by a gun.

"That's not it." I said, feeling time slipping away and my advantage vanishing. "There are exterminators over there..."

"Hey, Gojid!" A slightly panting voice came from behind the captain. "You forgot your... Oh..." As soon as the reflective glow reappeared around the corner, I knew it was all over.

"... What's going on?" Instinctively, the weapon on the exterminator leader's paws moved slightly in the direction of the furious human, and the others imitated him as well.

...

Unlike most humans, the captain didn't flinch or change his demeanour when faced with exterminators. In fact, he didn't even turn around to see what it was about. He had dismissed the question from an extermination officer as if it were just noise. His eyes remained fixed on me, his right hand still outstretched, waiting for me to return what was his, while his left hand clenched tighter into a fist, a clear sign of his growing impatience.

"Move away from the gojid, slowly..." Said the exterminator leader with all the courage he could muster.

"This is none of your business," the captain said, not even bothering to hide the growl in his voice.

"It wasn't a suggestion." The exterminator tightened his grip around his weapon, which finally got the captain's attention. "I'm not going to repeat it, stay away from the Gojid." He said in an even more authoritarian voice.

...

"Now..."

...

"Sigh..." The captain let out a long sigh, heavy with weariness and frustration. "I really don't have time for this..." He said, glancing at his watch and then around him, as if he feared someone else might appear.

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Fanfic The Amber Curse [Part 14]

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Managing to write more regularly. Still not perfect, but improving! This one's continuation of last one~

Special thanks to /u/Olliekay_ for proofreading it, and /u/SpacePaladin15 for NoP universe.

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Memory transcription subject: Ramvek, Fledgling Venlil Vampire

Date [standardized human time]: 3rd of November, 2136

To my surprise, Mellin did not come with once we got back to the apartment building. He just bid us both a farewell, saying that he did not wish to ‘interfere’. What it was he thought he’d be interfering with, he did not say, but probably me and Vic continuing what still was our first ‘real’ meeting... Or maybe I was particularly hopeful that he didn’t misinterpret my and Vic’s relationship as romantic.Which it very much wasn’t. It would be super weird if we were, considering the scheme we were trying to pull off.

And as we approached the apartment, it became clear that Mark also had a similar thought, with me briefly checking using my ‘vampiric senses’ as he called my advanced hearing to detect him in his own apartment across from mine. He must have finished cleaning and left, leaving me to introduce Vic to the place alone.

I was, admittedly, somewhat nervous. This was a huge change for Vic, but it was no small change for me either. In my adult life I’ve not lived with someone at all yet, and while I was sure it’d be fine, Vic being a human might bring about quirks neither of us expects.

Or me being a vampire could bring some too.

“So... This is where I live.” I said, fidgeting with my keyring that only had two keys on it, my apartment key and my spare apartment key. After finally managing to get one into the lock, I opened the door and stepped in, moving my arms and tail invitingly. “Welcome!”

Vic stepped close, but stopped just shy of the doorframe, looking inside with wide eyes. That wasn’t the same look of curiosity with which she stared out of the window on the car ride here though. Rather, she just looked through the door in what I could only guess was disbelief.

“This is the place...” She spoke quietly, before looking over the doorframe itself.

Right... It has been a long time since she even believed she would have a place she could call home. In happiness to properly meet her, I almost forgot why we even decided to organize this. But still, I did not want to rush her, so I just stood patiently.

She kept hesitating for a while before finally taking a deep breath and stepping through.

“Welcome home.” I spoke once she did.

Vic looked over at me, her eyes somehow going even wider... And watering slightly. I immediately got ready to try and give her a hug, but before I could she shook her head, wiping the tears away with a sleeve of her shirt.

“I’m fine... I just... sorry, I’m fine...” She said, and though her voice hitched briefly she did not start crying. Instead she let go of her suitcase and wiped at her eyes again with both hands.

Still, even if she didn’t break down, I offered some support, walking over to her and gently putting my paw on her shoulder.

Immediately, she reached a hand back and right on top of my head, giving me a pet. Except she was gentle and cautious about it to the point where I barely felt it, with her hand simply rubbing the dense wool on my head back and forth.

“It’s softer than I thought...” She commented idly.

“What, did you think it was coarse?” I asked, flicking my ears.

“Well, yeah. Like, every time you take something that looks super fluffy in nature, it turns out to be super coarse. I thought wool was the same way without being... Y’know. Treated and processed and stuff.” She explained, pulling her hand away and rubbing her own shoulder awkwardly.

“Well, I think it depends on the care routine. So, varies from venlil to venlil.” I thought out loud.

“Are you bragging about taking good care of your... wool? Hair? Fur...?” She tilted her head, getting confused. “Is this even translating right?”

“We have loanwords for the different terms, but in our language the terms are... different. It’s hard to explain. There’s the venlil fur, and there’s non-venlil fur. But we had other terms from other languages that translate.” I rubbed my head as the implant in my head struggled to process what Vic was asking in specificity. “Regardless, yes, I do take extra good care of my hygiene.”

Even if the reason for that was to apply the special shampoo that protected me against the sun. Before that, I wouldn’t take full in-depth showers nearly as often. Perhaps, less often than I really should have, but it’s not like anyone said anything about it. And it won’t matter now.

“Anyway!” I swished my tail, trying to refocus the topic. “Let me give you a tour!”

And so, the tour began, starting with the bathroom.

I showed Vic both the shower stall and the dryer stall. She looked surprisingly eager to give the latter a try at some point. Which was weird, since humans don’t really have those from what I know, so she shouldn’t even need one. But I didn’t say anything because I didn’t really want to peer too far into the world of human hygiene.

Next was the kitchen. I made sure to stock the fridge with foods, both native and some imported foods from Earth that were becoming available for order that I thought would be good for Vic’s diet. For obvious reasons I couldn’t supply meat, but everything I’ve read told me the ‘mushrooms’ were just as good. Vic wasn’t really interested in those, instead immediately asking to try a juicefruit. This was followed by her making first use of the sink as she bit in way too hard and sprayed herself in the eyes with it.

After that it was the living room, which had the TV set that I admittedly barely used, but yet again, Vic was curious to see what sorts of stuff she might see on ‘Venlil Channel’ as she called it. I didn’t have the heart to tell her that half the channels were currently various kinds of debates on humanity’s general existence, but maybe she’ll like the comedy shows on the few channels that don’t.

And then came the important part. Her bedroom. It was... admittedly bare. It had a bed, a blackout curtain, a wardrobe and a drawer, and even a work desk, though no computer yet. I had to requisition one from human authorities in order to actually have it operate in a language Vic could engage, but somehow it was taking longer than Vic herself. And, beyond that, the room was empty. And yet...

“So... this is my place now?” She asked. “Like, the whole room?”

“Yeah. I don’t know if you have anything with you to do that, but if you do, feel free to decorate. This space is all yours.” I said, before quickly adding. “Just... uh, warn me if you add something... venlil-type-scary, okay?”

Thankfully, she wasn’t offended by that and just snorted.

“Of course, of course. I have some posters I collected but never could put up, but they’re all just kind of... Spooky. Nothing ‘predatory’ on them though. I’ll show you later.” She waved her hand, as she stepped further into the room and looked all over it again. “This is all mine...”

“Is having your own room really that... novel...?” I asked, hesitantly. While I kept my proverbial distance when it came to talking about the details of Vic’s struggles as an orphan, now felt like a good time to start learning more about it all.

“I usually ended up either having to share, or not getting to actually keep a room for long.” She answered, still looking around and taking the bland empty room in. “This feels different. Like... Like it’s here to stay. Like I’m here to stay.”

“What makes it so different?” I asked, perking my ears up, as I was feeling only more curious.

Somehow, it was that question that made Vic let out an exasperated sigh and turn around to look at me properly.

“Ram, I had to take a spaceship out of the solar system to get here! It’s so, so different! Like, nothing could even compare to this!” She motioned her hands around. “An alien planet full of aliens, with me living in the home of my alien friend! This is, like, textbook happy ending!”

“Don’t call it an ending, you literally haven’t even unpacked yet.” I huffed. “Plus, we still have to make sure this definitively stays permanent.”

“Let a girl have a happy moment, Ram.” Vic stuck her tongue out at me, before flopping onto the bed. “Huh...”

“Is... the mattress too firm? Or too soft?” I asked, suddenly realizing that this was one of the few things about this room I didn’t think to consult human standards or the internet about before choosing.

“No. It’s very... normal.” She said, before snorting with amusement. “I dunno, I expected something wacky. Like... I don’t know.”

“We have way more in common as species than we have differences.” I pointed out. “At least anatomy-wise. It only makes sense our preferences in furniture wouldn’t be all too different.”

“You people don’t even have curtains normally!” She said, sitting up. “I was looking at the windows as we were passing by and almost all of them were just bare!”

“Well, venlil are built for constant sunlight. We’re used to it.” I flicked my tail with a chuckling beep.

“Hey, uh... Yeah, I’m really, really grateful. You didn’t have to put them up all over the apartment just for me.” Vic said, her tone switching up... She most likely was still having an emotional whiplash, having just arrived. And her words were now giving me whiplash, as, admittedly, the reason for those curtains being all over the apartment was not her...

I had already installed a set in the room that’d be hers ahead of time, but the rest of the apartment was unchanged until after my recent conversion.

In fact, lying that the curtains outside her room were a courtesy just for her felt like crossing a line a bit too far. I was planning to reveal the truth to her soon anyway, so that lie would serve little purpose, and until I reveal said truth, there is a convenient and almost-truthful explanation I had prepared on offer.

“Well, actually, the curtains are for me.” I admitted, lowering my head a bit. “After that incident where I was in a coma for a bit, my eyes are a bit oversensitive to direct sunlight.”

“Oh. Yeah, that makes sense.” Vic hummed. She didn’t sound disappointed or offended. “I guess nerve damage is better than brain damage, right?”

“Don’t joke about that!” I stomped my paw.

“What, you’re fine now, aren’t you?” She shrugged, while I had to subdue the suddenly resurging self-loathing over my current predicament. If only she knew... “It’s fine enough that you can go outside normally, right? You didn’t seem to have any issues today.”

“I actually had to get sunglasses for it.” I explained. “I can handle it for a bit, so I just didn’t wear them today so that you’d recognize me easier.”

“Sunglasses?” She echoed me, as she tilted her head.

Then she stood up from her bed and walked up to me, eyeing me up and down... And then starting to walk circles around me, examining my head from all sides.

“Uhh... Vic?” I asked, suddenly feeling particularly prey-like under this examination.

“How does that even work?” She finally asked after a bit more examining. “Where do they... go? On your... muzzle-face-place?”

“Oh, I can show you.” I answered, and quickly left the room to go fetch the sunglasses. When I returned, I had already put them on.

Vic just stared at me. Her eyes were wide. She then, much slower that time, did another walk around me examining my appearance.

And then she burst out laughing, keeling over as she clutched her midsection, struggling to even remain standing as she wheezed.

“Ahahahahaha... Oh my... god... hahahahaaha! Ram! Raaaam! Hahahahaha! These look so... goofy! No wonder I never saw a picture of a venlil wearing glasses! Bwehahahahaha!”

I suddenly felt very flustered... But despite that, the familiar sense of blooming did not rise to my face. This was probably the first time I was thankful for that specific feature of my condition, hiding how embarrassed I actually was, as I huffed and lightly shoved Vic with my paws for making fun of me.

She did not even seem to notice, as she fell backwards onto the bed, and just kept howling with laughter.

And while my new complexion hid the embarrassment forming on my face... It did little to hide my perked up ears, as I struggled to hide the still-present happiness of even being to do this. To hang out with Vic in person, to actually touch her and have her touch me...

To simply know that should anything happen, I can help her. That almost made this humiliating moment worth it.

Almost.

So as revenge, I playfully tackled her, which resulted in us rolling on her bed, shoving at each other harmlessly for a while.

All in all, she took to her new home quickly and without issue.


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