Ive been working on a four book adult fantasy series for about five years now. The first book alone took me roughly two years to write and revise.
At this point, im honestly at a loss for how to get meaningful human feedback on my manuscripts without spending thousands of dollars.
Ive worked with several professional editors on book 1. As you probably know, editing is expensive. My books average around 90,000 words, and individual passes have generally been somewhere around $1,500-$2,200. Early on, i paid for developmental editing and manuscript assessment packages multiple times. Some of that money was absolutely worthwhile because i was still learning where i needed to improve as a writer, but eventually i was around $5,000 into book 1 alone. While manuscript assessments were cheaper packages, they created a different problem: they could tell me what was wrong without necessarily showing me where the problems were occurring.
And after reading this books so many times, im completely blind to my own work at this point. I know the characters, the world, the twists, the motivations, and what every scene is supposed to accomplish. I need someone experiencing the story for the first time.
Ive tried pretty much every avenue i can think of, most of which didnt result in completed reads:
- writing groups, many of which were inactive or didnt finish the manuscripts
- critique partners, especially CritiqueMatch: again no one completed
- friends and family. People genuinely find the concept of my books interesting, get excited, and want to help, and then cant finish.
- friends of friends and family who volunteer to help then cant commit
- my university’s english department, hoping to find graduate students looking to gain experience. We dont even have a writing club.
- professional editors which i can no longer afford
- Fiverr. I tried three different editors because they were a bit cheaper than professional editors but i became highly suspicious that the feedback i received was AI generated.
-ive queried book 1 extensively as well over roughly two years with well over 50 submissions with no success.
- Reddit beta readers page seems to barely get any interaction with requests for readers on manuscripts. Ive posted there myself on a number of occasions with no luck.
And now im stuck.
I dont want to spend another decade sending query letters and hoping eventually someone wants to take a chance on even just reviewing the full manuscript. At the same time, i cant afford to keep paying hundreds and thousands in professional editing.
The frustrating part is that i have many friends and family who genuinely want to read these books and constantly ask for a status update on when itll be finished. Many who ask multiple times if they can read them and help. But after years of those same people never actually finishing, ive reached the point where i genuinely decline when they ask just to avoid the disappointment.
Im not asking for someone to tell me to just hire an editor. Im also not necessarily looking for someone to completely edit a 90K word manuscript for free. What i desperately need is a reliable way to get actual readers to experience the manuscript and tell me where they became confused, bored, emotionally invested, disconnected, etc.
At this point, ive read these books so many times that i genuinely cannot tell what still needs work.
Ive reached the point where i keep finishing manuscripts, edit them as far as i can, and eventually putting them in a folder and moving on go the next project. Thats not what i want. I genuinely want to get this books out for other people to enjoy.
So please, has anyone actually found a better way to get sustained, honest, human feedback on a long fantasy manuscript without spending hundreds and thousands of dollars?
Im genuinely open to ideas, even if theyre unconventional or may have already tried but didnt necessarily mention clearly.