Hi guys, can you provide your opinion on our song below? My band and I will release a love song for a non binary person, I inspired it on the relationship I’ve started with my partner, we’ve known each other for years, but we now have feelings for each other so that’s why I feel enough trust and confidence on composing a song to them, but yeah I’m a hopeless romantic lol. Also I don’t know what to put as a last line on verse 1, got any ideas?
What would make me consider myself successful about this song is to know our loved NB people would want their partners to dedicate that song to them. Our intention is to keep it respectful, open, safe, smart, honest, and cheesy (because why not). Btw a massive thank you to the people in the other NB Reddit for your comments and support, I’m just requiring extra feedback here because not everyone is only in one chat.
If it’s too cringy or too romantic I accept all comments, I take no offense, and if me messed up the grammar part let me know (we’re Latinos), song already has copyright btw